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Rochelle Potkar (rochellepotkar) | 1 comments If anyone is interested in beta reading this novel, please let me know. You can mail me at [email protected]

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Nathan, 25, has spent his life painting and dreaming of Leonara. Three alter egos helped him cope with his lonely childhood – the maternal Mother Martha, the versatile Larz and 5-year-old Ian.

When nightmares about his mother’s death haunt, he decides to use his special skill of getting other’s consciousness into his mind. He invites Mihir’s, Feroz’s and Leonara’s essences to his mind and dismisses Larz.

Will he find his mother’s killer?


Larz is freed from Nathan’s mind. From just a comforting voice in his head, she is now in Leonara’s body, living out a dream.

She has fallen for David - Leonara’s alluring husband - and is never going back to Nathan’s mind.
Will she succeed in shutting down his milieu?

The stage is Nathan’s mind. Larz’s battlefield, too.


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thanks,
~Rochelle


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