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Hi Safa,I moved this to the appropriate folder. Please check the Read Me topic at the top of each folder before you post, to make sure you're posting in the right section. Thanks.
Living in the Hoop, a city-world orbiting Earth, Claudia follows the rules. Everyone does. Perfection, essential for a peaceful society, prevents the wars and destructions of the past. Into this perfect life comes the realization that people have gone missing. No one talks about it … but it happens. What wickedness lies within her apparently perfect world? Allying herself with Earthlings Ricky Maxwell and others, she sets off to find the missing families and, to her horror, the impending war between worlds.
Something like...?Claudia lives in a city-planet orbiting Earth, named The Hoop.
Everyone follows the rules to perfection.
Their society therefore lives a peaceful life, with no war or destruction.
But Claudia starts to notice that people are going missing.
Could it be that wickedness lurks in her perfect world?
She forms an alliance with Earthling Ricky Maxwell.
Together with her friends they try to stop inter-planetary war breaking out.
My book needs a good spotless blurb, so i thought i could ask you guys to check if my blurb is good before i send it to the cover designer.
Claudia lives in the hoop, a space city that orbits around earth. She follows the rules her society built for everyone. just like everyone in her society, perfection is essential to maintain a peaceful society. Without war, or destruction. Claudia discovers that people gone missing. There were wicked plans for the abducted people. She meets Ricky Maxwell from earth, and starts an alliance with people she met from earth. She and her friends sit to find the missing families, and try to stop wars between planets