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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 04:35PM

Erm... Add picture later?


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 04:38PM

As Margo gazed out the window she felt the car slow and she gazed up at an upcoming house. She blinked watching it


message 3: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 04:43PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
"I know it's not that big.." He pulled into the driveway.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 04:45PM

Margo smiled. "I like it!" She whispered.


message 5: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 04:52PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He smiled at her, "thanks,"


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 04:53PM

Margo unbuckled as the car stopped she slowly slipped out. Her wrist were red from the mans grip.


message 7: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 04:54PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Over got out of the car and went over to her. He looked at her wrists and frowned, "I should have came in with you."


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 04:55PM

Margo looked up. "Oliver... It wasn't your fault..." She whispered


message 9: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 04:57PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He kissed her wrists, "I think it is."


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 05:00PM

"No Oliver. It wasn't. For all I know you could have like.. Left. But you came in when I told you too.. Please. It's not your fault..@


message 11: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 05:08PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He nodded and kissed her cheek, "let's get inside."


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 05:08PM

"Okay... Before it rains again.." She smiled and laced her fingers through his


message 13: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 05:44PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He smiled back and led her I to the house.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 05:45PM

She leaned against him following him.


message 15: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 05:47PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Oliver walked her in and sat heron the couch, "you want anything?"


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 05:49PM

"Water?" She asked tucking a piece of her black hair behid her ear


message 17: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 05:55PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He nodded and went to the kitchen. He came back and gave her the glass.


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 05:56PM

"Thank you." She smiled then patted the spot beside her. "We shoul talk."


message 19: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 06:00PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Oliver nodded curiously and sat next to her, "what's up?"


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 06:01PM

"So um.." She grew bright red and fiddled with her fingers. "Are we.. Are we like.. A couple or....?"


message 21: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 06:04PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He smiled softly and caressed her cheek, "do you want to be a couple?"


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 06:04PM

Margo blushed. "I kind of do." She nodded.


message 23: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 06:05PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Oliver nodded, "then were a couple."


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 06:06PM

Margo grinned widely. Her hand in his. "Really!?"


message 25: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 06:11PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He chuckled and nodded, "yup."


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 06:12PM

She leaned up and kissed him. "Oh yay!" She whispered


message 27: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 06:13PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Oliver smiled and kissed her back.


message 28: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 06:14PM

She caressed his cheek. "I think my mom would like to meet you.." She whispered curling up in his side


message 29: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 06:15PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He rubbed her back, "what makes you think she'd like me?"


message 30: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 06:16PM

"My mother is the nicest person you could ever know.." Margo sighed. "I wish she didn't have to go..•


message 31: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 06:22PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He frowned, "she won't."


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 06:23PM

"But she is." She whispered. "She has the breeding virus. She.. Hasn't woke up for a while.." She closed her eyes


message 33: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 06:24PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
Oliver hugged her, "have faith, even when no one else does."


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 06:25PM

She nodded. "Okay." She whispered.


message 35: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 06:39PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He kissed her softly.


message 36: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 06:40PM

Margo kissed back gently


message 37: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 06:46PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He wrapped his arms around her waist and held her close.


message 38: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 06:47PM

Her arms wrapped around his chest. She felt his heartbeat.


message 39: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 06:49PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He inhaled deeply and forced himself to pull away, "hungry?"


message 40: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 06:50PM

She blushed. She panted. "Oh uh.. Yeah!"


message 41: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 06:54PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
"What would you like to eat?"


message 42: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 06:55PM

"Pizza?" She aksed


message 43: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 07:02PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He nodded and took out his phone. He ordered a pizza then hung up.


message 44: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 07:02PM

Margo smiled. "Tell me about yourself Oliver!"


message 45: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 07:09PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
He shrugged, "my dad owns the club, I'm nineteen and hoping on started college next month."


message 46: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 07:10PM

She smiled. "That... Sounds awesome.. Where at?"


message 47: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 07:15PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
"Hopefully close by."


message 48: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 07:16PM

Margo smiled. "I really do like you.." She whaipered.


message 49: by Elizabeth, Creator ^~^ (new)
May 06, 2014 07:20PM

Elizabeth Thompson (elizabeth_duivenvoorde) | 130857 comments Mod
"I like you too," he whispered back.


message 50: by [deleted user] (new)
May 06, 2014 07:21PM

She smirld. "Want to dance for a bit.. Just slow dance?"


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