Write, Wrote, Written II discussion

My name is Trish, I don't normally write a whole lot but I had a story in my head that wouldn't go away lol. I'm not done with the first chapter but I'll post it in a different topic thread.

here is the description so far

A story about a young girl growing up with mentally and physically abusive foster parents. No one can ever imagine the heartache she has to go through on a daily basis. Her parents are ripped from her when she is only 8 years old, Lauren is thrown into child services where she finds herself in the foster home from hell. She has to try and fight her way out before her body and mind give up on her.