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ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Natalia locked her front door and sighed softly sir content as she walked into the bathroom. She stepped out of her clothes and started running the water. A small smile was on her lips.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian walked to his tattoo shop, which was already open thanks to the other tattoo artist, Brody. He already had a customer.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) ((Omg should max be in her apartment, hiding and he like attacks her??))


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((Sure O.o))


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) ((U don't seem sure lol))


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((Lol, they're both your characters so its your choice))


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) ((I could skip it to where Elian realizes she never showed up to give him food?))


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((Sure lol. But then what? When he goes to check on her... Like.. What happens?))


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) ((Maybe the apartment would be ransacked a little, like he stole some stuff, and she would be knocked unconscious on the floor))


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((Alright. Could you start?))


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) One of his coworkers, Dana, was packing up her things. The shop was about to close. "Why do you keep looking at the door for?" She asked him.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Um... My girlfriend was supposed to come," he said.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "Oh." She sighed. "Sorry bro. Will you lock up then?" She moved her bag over her shoulder. "I've gotta meet my fiancé."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I will, bye," he nodded.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "See ya." She waved, then left the shop.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He waved back and started to clean up while
He waited.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) It was getting closer to when Natalia's show was suppose to be. She didn't show up to either.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian grabbed his keys and realized he had forgotten his truck and so he walked back to her apartment.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) The doorman was working the last hour of his shift. He stood by the doors, bored,


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian walked inside and rang the bell to her apartment.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) There was no answer.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments She smiled up at him gently.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) ((What lol))


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments ((Sorry lol. Wasn't paying attention))

Elian walked upstairs and went to Natalie's apartment. He gently knocked.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) The door was slightly ajar so when he knocked, it creaked open.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian blinked but stepped in. "Nat?" He asked softly and walked towards her bedroom.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Her bedroom door was closed. The living room looked ransacked. Inside her room, Natalia was on the floor, on her back, with her head turned to the side. She had on a t shirt and underwear they looks askew on her body. There was dried up blood on the side of her head.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Oh, my god. Natalie!" Elian said and quickly rushed over to her. "Fuck," he said when he saw the blood. He pucked her up carefully and then pulled his phone out, calling 911.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She moaned deeply in her throat when she was moved, sort of coming too. Her room was a total mess. All of her jewellery was stolen, along with her pride collection of rings.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Fuck," he repeated. "Natalie," he said and then quickly talked into the phone.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She scrunched up her eyebrows as she tried hard to make her body move. For a moment she thought Elian was max. She suddenly gasped and tried to fight of his arms. "GET AWAY FROM ME!" She screamed.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian jumped back. "Nat?" He asked, his brows dipping. "Nat, its me!" He said to her, though didn't make any move to shift closer.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) Her head hurt to much for her to make it far. She was only able to roll out of his arms, landing on her front. She whimpered and curled up. "Stop hurting me." She cried.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "I'm sorry, I didn't mean to," he told her, "Natalie... Please, talk to me," he said, the police on their way.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She was silent for a few moments. She then sniffled. "Wait..Elian?" She lifted her head with a grimace.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Yeh, Nat. It's me," he said.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She burst into tears, reaching out to him. "Oh my god Elian:" she sobbed.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments Elian immediately pulled her back to him. "Tell me whats wrong, what happened," he begged.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "I-I got out of the shower and was in the m-middle of dressing when I was pushed from behind." She sniffled.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He hugged her tightly. "Who was it? Did you see a face?" He asked.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She nodded but kept her mouth shut. She closed her eyes.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Who was it?" He asked, hugging her.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She shook her head, whimpering.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "Please tell me," he said, his voice gentler.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) "You'll hate me." She whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "No, I wont, I could never hate you," he said softly.


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She shook her head. "My head is pounding."


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments "An ambulance and the police are on their way,"


ᎻꮖꮐꮋᏞꭺꭰꭹ (hollywaug) She closed her eyes and gripped his shirt. "I'm sore." She whispered.


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Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 37908 comments He hugged her to him. "I should have come earlier, I'm sorry," he said. "Who did this to you, Nat?" He asked.


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