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2009-08 Consider Phlebas - finished reading *spoilers*
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I thought the first half was a bit weak, the plot meanders a lot as Horza goes through various adventures which have nothing really to do with his overall quest and aren't intrinsically very interesting. I also didn't think it worked very well to suddenly introduce about 20 or 30 characters with short biographies of them, many of whom soon get killed off without ever getting proper characterisation - the large number of characters is a bit confusing at this stage. As the number of crew members diminishes the survivors do get more characterisation.
Overall, it was reasonably entertaining but it feels like Banks fell short of showing his full talent, some of the other Culture books are much better written, particularly Use of Weapons which I reckon is one of the best Science Fiction novels ever written.

But, on re-reading, I see it more as a book about the nature of belief: from Horza joining the three-legged Idirans because he believes the Culture is a dead end, to the monks at the Temple of Light, to the strange religious parody of the Eaters, to Kraiklyn believing his own myth of himself, to the Idirans, generally in their "jihad" (that's the word Banks uses) and individually in the incredible efforts of the severely wounded Idirans in the tunnel complex. That also seems to me to be the reason for the various interruptions, the "State of Play" chapters and the monologues from the trapped Mind.
Enough for now.
I read this novel about 10 years ago and didn't have the chance to re-read it for this discussion. I remember enjoying it, but I thought the next books in the series were much, much better. I vividly remember there was one scene in this novel which was possibly the most disgusting scene I've ever read. I always tell people that "Consider Phlebas" is the book you have to get through to get to the really good later books in the series (similar to "Shards of Honor" for the Vorkosigan series, actually).

My review:
Consider Phlebas by Iain M. Banks is the first book in his science fiction series about the Culture. In this wild adventure, Horza is an agent for the Idiran who are currently fighting a war with the Culture. He has a number of experiences, some stomach-turning, some heart-pounding, as he tries to carry out his mission to capture a hidden Culture Mind.
I liked Horza, although his connection to the Idirans never seemed terribly strong to me. His status as a Changer, while useful in some of his escapades, also didn't seem to set him apart from the other characters as much as I thought it might.
My favorite characters were actually the two females who became close to Horza in one way or another--Yalson, his ally in the Free Company, and Balveda the Culture operative who keeps turning up in Horza's life. And I really liked two of the machines--Unaha-Closp, the rather prissy drone who has a lot more fight inside than anyone realized, and Jase, the ancient drone who serves Fal, a Culture Referer (a rare and highly intuitive thinker). We are given glimpses of personality that are very revealing for each of them.
Some readers have criticized the number of characters who are introduced and then killed off. I think that is an accurate reflection of Horza's life and the way most people come and go in it. He doesn't have a chance to really connect with them, and it would interfere with his mission, so we don't really get to connect with them either.
Some readers have also expressed concern about the violence. I think a lot of the violent action is similar to a big budget action adventure film with great special effects--exciting and spectacular. The disturbing violence, to me, is contained in the more personal scenes, like the sewage torture, Horza'a combat to join the Free Company, and the Eaters. Each of these is important to the plot, I think, and had more impact on me that the "shoot 'em up" scenes.
I plan to acquire the other Culture books and look forward to reading them in the future.
Consider Phlebas by Iain M. Banks is the first book in his science fiction series about the Culture. In this wild adventure, Horza is an agent for the Idiran who are currently fighting a war with the Culture. He has a number of experiences, some stomach-turning, some heart-pounding, as he tries to carry out his mission to capture a hidden Culture Mind.
I liked Horza, although his connection to the Idirans never seemed terribly strong to me. His status as a Changer, while useful in some of his escapades, also didn't seem to set him apart from the other characters as much as I thought it might.
My favorite characters were actually the two females who became close to Horza in one way or another--Yalson, his ally in the Free Company, and Balveda the Culture operative who keeps turning up in Horza's life. And I really liked two of the machines--Unaha-Closp, the rather prissy drone who has a lot more fight inside than anyone realized, and Jase, the ancient drone who serves Fal, a Culture Referer (a rare and highly intuitive thinker). We are given glimpses of personality that are very revealing for each of them.
Some readers have criticized the number of characters who are introduced and then killed off. I think that is an accurate reflection of Horza's life and the way most people come and go in it. He doesn't have a chance to really connect with them, and it would interfere with his mission, so we don't really get to connect with them either.
Some readers have also expressed concern about the violence. I think a lot of the violent action is similar to a big budget action adventure film with great special effects--exciting and spectacular. The disturbing violence, to me, is contained in the more personal scenes, like the sewage torture, Horza'a combat to join the Free Company, and the Eaters. Each of these is important to the plot, I think, and had more impact on me that the "shoot 'em up" scenes.
I plan to acquire the other Culture books and look forward to reading them in the future.

The descriptions of the Damage game were interesting.
Oddly enough, I did enjoy the ending. For some reason their deaths, except for Balveda and the Mind, seemed to emphasize the futility and pure pointlessness of it all.
I've never really liked space opera though, and that may be why I've had such a bland reaction.
I find I do think the Culture society sounds interesting. Whether or not its enough to get me to try another, I don't know.

Random, I think you have this exactly right, and I think this is why Horza has to die of his injuries too.

Many books focus on the hero and how one person can really make a difference/save the day.
Consider Phlebas turns things on end and shows how that one person is just not enough to make any difference in the grand scheme of things. He caused a lot of destruction and made some waves in his immediate environment, but no further really.
Also, in the long run, what was the purpose of the Mind's destruction other than it is an intelligent machine that Horza and Idirans despise? It was not a vital component, not even unique really. Just another individual in a galactic war.
The pointlessness of Horza's actions seems to increase the more I think about it. :)


I thought Fal, as a link to the Culture in the plot, would have more "stage time" in the story. But I think Banks was keeping a lot of aspects of the Culture mysterious on purpose -- because obviously Horza had only a limited view of the Culture -- and because in a huge, multivolume exploration of the Culture universe, the reader is only going to find things out little by little anyway. I'm anticipating a good time reading more Culture novels.
Nick wrote: "I thought Fal, as a link to the Culture in the plot, would have more "stage time" in the story. But I think Banks was keeping a lot of aspects of the Culture mysterious on purpose -- because obviously Horza had only a limited view of the Culture..."
Great point, Nick, and I think that makes a lot of sense.
Great point, Nick, and I think that makes a lot of sense.

I think Banks has commented in the past that it is difficult to write novels set in a utopia such as The Culture since when all it citizens can pretty much have anything they want it cuts down on the dramatic possibilities a bit. I assume that is part of the reason that his Culture novels all focus to a greater or lesser extent on The Culture's interactions with other civilisations rather than being purely set in the Culture.



It depends on which group of Idirans. The group on Shar's world was very intent upon its destruction.
After thinking on things for a while I do have to give the book a plus. If the story was told with Balveda as the primary character and mostly from her point of view, it would have been the more traditional heroic story.
However, what Banks did was to give us the story from the point of view of the antagonist. An interesting approach and one I have to give him points for.
I do wish it had been better executed.
In regards to Utopia being rather dull, very true. It is conflict that makes things interesting. However, it seemed to be that the Idirans (that we see in the book) and others spent more time fighting each other and not the Culture. (Seeds of their own destruction maybe??) I just felt like hitting everyone across the back of the head and yelling "Grow some sense you moron!" :)

And I'm with you on the smack-to-the-back-of-the-head idea.

I just finished my re-read of this novel, and it hasn't changed the opinion I formed after my first reading: this is the weakest book in a very strong series. My main problem is the way a plot is ostensibly set up early on (Horza has to recover the lost Mind), and then the book takes a 300 page detour in which hardly anything is directly relevant to that plot. The book works for me as a (rather violent and often very entertaining) travelogue through the Culture, but I thought it meandered too much to work as a novel. Banks is one of my favorite SF authors, and the Culture series one of my favorite SF series, but for me this book just barely merits 3 stars.

I agree that the set pieces add to the theme of conflict arising from faith (good point), but I feel that the sheer amount and length of them just destroy any narrative tension. My feeling during several of them - the Eaters, the assault on the temple, the game of Damage - can be summarized as "Well, that's all very neat, but where are we going with this?". The book just wandered around too much to work for me - especially compared to some of the other books in the series.


Kathi above described Horza as someone who doesn't reallhy have a chance to connect with anybody. I think this is true. I don't think his connections are superficial; but they are so brief as to render the other characters in the novel as perhaps not fully developed. I'm not particularly bothered by this, though, as I see it as a reflection of his trying to give meaning to his life and, ultimately, that of his race.

IIRC he isn't the last of his race - although we are told in the epilogue that the Changer civillisation is ultimately wiped out in the later stages of the Idiran-Culture War at the time of Horza's death the Changers' homeworld is still intact.