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message 1: by Coralie, Wordy Writer (new)

Coralie (corkybookworm) | 1249 comments Mod
Hey, all! So, I noticed that there was no thread for feedback on prompts and entries, and since I have some feedback I'd like to provide myself, here it is! Leave any thoughts you have on the prompts themselves or the entries based on prompts that others post! As always, have fun!


message 2: by Coralie, Wordy Writer (new)

Coralie (corkybookworm) | 1249 comments Mod
Okay, my turn! Skyril, I just read your Castiel Interview. I've never read Supernatural, but I found your piece very funny. I appreciated your approach because you, obviously, didn't spoil, but it was also something I didn't have to be a fan in order to read and understand or follow. You made me smile and I enjoyed reading it. Just wanted to let you know.


message 3: by Wayward Skyril (new)

Wayward Skyril | 425 comments Ha, thank you, Coralie :].
Supernatural is actually a tv show, but in the show there's this writer who sort of got visions of the main characters'... adventures... and wrote about them in books also called Supernatural [they love breaking walls in this show], and since I was going for *real*, as in, the world and characters are real, I figured I'd just make it like she was interviwing Cas about the books...

In any case, glad you enjoyed ^.^ Cas is a quirky character, and tried to capture that.


message 4: by Wayward Skyril (new)

Wayward Skyril | 425 comments [forgive typoes. My phone is acting up (AGAIN) and I'm reeeaaally tired]


message 5: by TessaMarie (new)

TessaMarie Beard | 54 comments I just posted a very bad prompt would appreciate any feedback :)


message 6: by TessaMarie (new)

TessaMarie Beard | 54 comments GeekyFreakyScientist wrote: "Me too on my prompt. (Sorry when people ask for Feedback I feel like I should ask too)"

I shall look at it. Is it in the prompt entries?


message 7: by TessaMarie (new)

TessaMarie Beard | 54 comments So first let me talk about your story cause I just read it and OMG. Well let me start by saying it made no sense, it was a bit rushed and a little wordy, but I don't care about any of that because it was hilarious. Some of those one-liners had me laughing out loud. And I think you did very good with what you were given. To give you some feedback, I know you can't do much about the making sense part, but I'd maybe edit some of it to make it a little less wordy and to split up the paragrahs more so that it is easier to read and also to slow it down a bit. But good job, you get an A+.


Now about my story, to explain a bit more it's actually written in 2nd person and all the you and your's are supposed to be a single person, the hero in this supposed story (in my mind his name is Mick). Though I understand that this might not have been obvious though as it could be edited and again it's meant to be spoken/heard, not read. I will see what I can do, maybe I'll add his name in, I was thinking of doing that, but decided not to, perhaps it'd make it easier to understand though. Thank you for the criticism and yes I noticed the grammer problems, grammer is my enemy, but one day I will conquer it.


message 8: by TessaMarie (new)

TessaMarie Beard | 54 comments no problem it's been fun. Let me know the next time you want me to read something of yours and I'll do the same. You've got real talent on the comedy and joke aspects, which is something I've never been good at, which people always find surprising, but it's true. I write sad, heavy, emotional pieces mostly and any comedy I try to write turns out awkward. Maybe you can teach me a thing or two.


message 9: by TessaMarie (last edited Aug 16, 2017 06:30PM) (new)

TessaMarie Beard | 54 comments Man I am really in the mood to write something, but none of the prompts are speaking to me. :( I need help!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can someone give me some inspiration please. A word, a sentence, a picture anything. I need something.


message 10: by TessaMarie (new)

TessaMarie Beard | 54 comments Me too. Let's see what I can so with it. Thanks a lot G


message 11: by Coralie, Wordy Writer (new)

Coralie (corkybookworm) | 1249 comments Mod
Ooh! That pic is gorgeous!!!


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