BOOK REVIEW OF INDIAN AUTHORS discussion

Hello...
My Kindle ebook "The rainbow of life.." released just now..

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B074S3H9XZ/...

Looking forward to get the feedback...

Thanks..

With a lot of respect for your efforts, a lot of things could have been done better. I assume this is your first book, but then there are glaring mistakes.

Example: There are so many sentences on page one, but I could see only one full stop. You are using exclamations, double exclamations, inconsistent trailing ellipses to end sentences but you haven't used a full stop. Why would you do something like that?

Hello...
Thanks alot for your feedback!! :-)

I usually prefer writing exclamation mark instead of a full stop! May be it's my writing style! I will try to improve that...

Thank you once again for your feedback!!!

Best regards,
Anuja.

Anuja,

Thanks for taking the feedback in the right spirit. I'm sure you'll write a best seller some day.

Can you send me your first chapter in word format? I'll give you some more detailed feedback (for free).

email the copy to: [email protected]

Thanks!

Hello,
You haven't read the book? I would prefer if you give feedback on here in messages! :-)

Thanks and regards