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message 1: by Anuja (new)

Anuja Kulkarni. (kulkanu) | 17 comments Hello...
My Kindle ebook "The rainbow of life.." released just now..

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B074S3H9XZ/...

Looking forward to get the feedback...

Thanks..


message 2: by Kashif (last edited Aug 19, 2017 02:18AM) (new)

Kashif M | 7 comments With a lot of respect for your efforts, a lot of things could have been done better. I assume this is your first book, but then there are glaring mistakes.

Example: There are so many sentences on page one, but I could see only one full stop. You are using exclamations, double exclamations, inconsistent trailing ellipses to end sentences but you haven't used a full stop. Why would you do something like that?


message 3: by Anuja (new)

Anuja Kulkarni. (kulkanu) | 17 comments Hello...
Thanks alot for your feedback!! :-)

I usually prefer writing exclamation mark instead of a full stop! May be it's my writing style! I will try to improve that...

Thank you once again for your feedback!!!

Best regards,
Anuja.


message 4: by Kashif (new)

Kashif M | 7 comments Anuja,

Thanks for taking the feedback in the right spirit. I'm sure you'll write a best seller some day.

Can you send me your first chapter in word format? I'll give you some more detailed feedback (for free).

email the copy to: [email protected]

Thanks!


message 5: by Anuja (new)

Anuja Kulkarni. (kulkanu) | 17 comments Hello,
You haven't read the book? I would prefer if you give feedback on here in messages! :-)

Thanks and regards


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