Sci-Fi, fantasy and speculative Indie Authors Review discussion

ok, I'm looking for reviews, honest feedback about the first story in an arc. The Book is "Oversee of One" and the arc is called Perception. I can provide a free pdf version of the book to an email address. I appear to be a bit limited on what I can do due to being part of Amazon select, but still after those reviews. :) The ones I've had so far have been pretty positive.
http://goo.gl/YcHZlx

But send me an email addy, and a free copy is yours to read, review and give feedback. Thank you in advance!