Review My Thriller discussion

This is where you tell us about your book and why you would like it reviewed. Also, please add an interesting fact about your book and yourself which would help pique interest in your novel.

Twisted Threads is a new stand alone erotic, psychological thriller in Kaylin McFarren’s Threads series and reviews are most welcome. Here's my book summary:

Akira Hamada is driven by past failure. Two years earlier, she had a chance to kill her greatest enemy--Kaito Mitsui. Instead, the Yakuza boss forced her to become an assassin in his employ. Now Akira carries out the bloody business of the notorious crime syndicate and hates herself more each day. 
 
When Mitsui hears that his sister's murderer will be on the cruise ship Starfish, he immediately tasks Akira with eliminating the man once and for all. This is what Akira has trained for, but a series of strange events on the ship tests her resolve and shows her a way to redemption. 
 
Devon Lyons, on the other hand, has nothing to do with assassins. He's merely accompanying his aunt and uncle, Sara and Paul Lyons, on a free cruise. Little does he know that the two are the true targets of the charming Japanese tourist he has just met!
 
Akira knows that either Sara or Paul is the killer but doesn't know which one. She hopes seducing the handsome Devon will lead to better intel, but she is surprised to find herself trusting him. And soon, the pair finds themselves fighting for their lives on the high seas. 
 
*2017 NYC Big Book Award Winner, Thriller Category 

Here's my ebook link: https://www.amazon.com/Twisted-Thread...

And here's my Book Trailer: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0WQy...

This is the final stand-alone book in my Threads series. It is filled with interesting, flawed characters on a Caribbean cruise, where bodies seem to be dropping on a daily basis and no one seems to have answers. The editorial reviews I've received this week call this new book a riveting, tantalizing story of murder, sex and intrigue. My ideas for this book came from my own experiences of traveling throughout Asia and cruising around the world. But I have to admit that I've never met anyone as twisted as the characters I write about. :)

Kaylin wrote: "Twisted Threads is a new stand alone erotic, psychological thriller in Kaylin McFarren’s Threads series and reviews are most welcome. Here's my book summary:

Akira Hamada is driven by past failure..."thank you. I've just added it to the bookshelf.

Kaylin wrote: "Twisted Threads is a new stand alone erotic, psychological thriller in Kaylin McFarren’s Threads series and reviews are most welcome. Here's my book summary:

Akira Hamada is driven by past failure..."

Sounds intense. I am headed to your page now to download for kindle. Can't wait to review it!

My novel is in the political thriller genre. Here is what pre-release critics have said about it:

"If you've ever wondered what the adjectives "rip-snorting" or "humdinger" mean, pick up The Chaos of Change by J.T. Riggen and you'll know." - Readers' Favorite Reviews

"...Intense. Fast paced! A DEFINITE recommend!" - Author Viga Boland

"Political thriller writing at its best! A satisfying blend of fast-paced action and strong characterization makes for a fine story that's riveting, realistic, and hard to put down." - D. Donovan, Senior Reviewer, Midwest Book Reviews

"Riggen meticulously takes these characters and wraps them in both their pride and arrogance, before sending them off to dance to Death's tune." - Robin Goodfellow, Black Magic Reviews

https://www.amazon.com/Chaos-Change-t...

SYNOPSIS:

Welcome to the imminent future: the American political gap is maximized; the individual states have begun clamoring for the disbandment of their federal government for its lack of stability; multiple power-hungry groups lick their chops at the thought of grabbing the reigns of the United States of America. And then a nation defining incident occurs, Article V of the U.S. Constitution is activated, and three sovereign territories come into existence.

But this hardly bothers Thaddeus Jackson – the son of a popular former president – who had money, fame, and a promising career in politics…until he ran away to the Alaskan wilderness to live in peace away from his family and the growing civil unrest.

What few know is that an elite group – led by Shane Wallace, Director of the CIA – has taken action. They recruit the very hesitant Thaddeus to be part of a diplomatic team tasked to negotiate the seemingly impossible peace between the liberal leaders of the North and his dysfunctional, republican family that now runs the South. The team includes Lozen Kyway, a highly-trained female agent turned bodyguard; Dr. Andreas Albrecht, a brilliant engineer and scientist who believes he’s discovered a truly sustainable, albeit dangerous, energy source; and Tomas Martinez, the former Vice President.

This elite group, and all its supporting team, will come together in a race against the clock to divert the territories away from war. New-age patriots will rise and fall, and new threats to democracy – never before imagined – will emerge from the shadows. Can the well-intentioned come together fast enough to ward off war in the states? Whose intentions are noble? Whose are full of malicious intent? Prepare yourself for an American era teeming with espionage, lies, murder, manipulation...The Chaos of Change!

Riggen's second novel, The Chaos of Change, is a new edition to the great political thriller traditions of Brad Meltzer, Barry Eisler, and Tim Tigner.

Can you handle the Chaos? https://www.amazon.com/Chaos-Change-t...

Grabbing your book too! :) Kaylin

Kaylin wrote: "Grabbing your book too! :) Kaylin"

Thumbs up! Authors helping authors...a beautiful thing!

Agree!!

Hey Brian. I’ll be downloading tonight. Can’t wait to read and review!

Soulcatcher and The Golden Key are the 2nd and 3d book of the MoonHuntress series. Would love to get some reviews for both books (Mystery Thrillers with a brush of Sci-Fi)
I'll swap reviews for your books too.
Both books are available for Free on Kindle Unlimited.


Blurb of Soulcatcher :
Sequel to MoonHuntress In the nightfall of a malicious abduction, Bina Knopfler becomes the victim of treason. She is put to the test by the trials and tribulations of a planned heist. To locate the first Moon cargo. With her training as a Mossad agent Bina is no stranger when it comes to Combat Missions. However, this time she’s the victim and risks her life to save the lives of her loved ones. Little does she know that her journey will take her to the mysteries of Alaska, where upon she encounters the woman who holds the Keeper of souls. The SoulCatcher. With the SoulCatcher on course from Kamchatka, Bina arrives amidst the Venomous passage to China where she faces the fear of death in the claws of the nefarious Nuo who will stop at nothing to see her punished. Out of the depths of hell Bina must find a way to survive. The outcome may twist her fate and lead her to the mysterious Lilith Yareach, heiress and new leader to the Moon Mining Empire.Bina must confront the anger and envy of the lonesome and despondent Lilith. Their chance meeting reveals a mystical turn of events in both their lives… What will be the result of their unexpected encounter? Anonymities lay beneath the ocean, above the clouds and through the passageways of the supernatural. And what awaits is a treasure to be cherished. His name is Christopher.
https://www.amazon.com/SoulCatcher-Mo...

Blurb for The Golden Key
Through the centuries Amar-Utu had used his power to deceive humankind. He had vanquished the other gods in wars, damaging and flooding the lands with tornadoes, and other natural disasters. He would be praised by the people for his magical knowledge of exorcism and healing. And yet, he became a forgotten legend traced in the lore of time. As he slowly regains his power through secret societies, he plans on taking revenge. Bina Knopfler, a mother and a secret agent for Mossad, is still battling her demons from her past missions. Yet she is asked to fight against one of the biggest challenges . With deceipt and tricks Amar-Utu lures Bina into his web. But she will not be alone. Together with his biggest enemy, Inanna and with the help of Baba Zikhali, an African High Sanusi (shaman), she will need to retrieve one of the most powerful artifacts in his possession, The Golden Key. Again, she will need to embody the utmost courage to protect her loved ones. No fear will stop her, even when jealous hearts try to separate them.

https://www.amazon.com/Golden-Key-MOO...

Brian wrote: "Connie wrote: "Soulcatcher and The Golden Key are the 2nd and 3d book of the MoonHuntress series. Would love to get some reviews for both books (Mystery Thrillers with a brush of Sci-Fi)
I'll swap..."

Thanks, have you got any books you want me to read and do a review?

i'll get it on Kindle and start reading it as soon as I'm back home.

Connie wrote: "Brian wrote: "Connie wrote: "Soulcatcher and The Golden Key are the 2nd and 3d book of the MoonHuntress series. Would love to get some reviews for both books (Mystery Thrillers with a brush of Sci-..."
Currently reading The Golden Key. - Kaylin :)

Tiana doesn't have to choose between her Gucci and her Glock - she loves them both. Just because she loves everything pretty and pink doesn't mean she can't make a living as a killer for hire. Who says girls can't have a little fun?



Early reviews have praised Bubblegum for its fun, dark story, multi-dimensional LGBT characters and action-packed momentum. From Travis West: "A wonderful cast of unique, flawed and diverse characters. LGBT superheroes. Non-stop action, from the first damn page."

I am currently looking for readers to offer an honest review in exchange for a digital copy of Bubblegum. I am willing to do a "review swap" as well.

Sari wrote: "Tiana doesn't have to choose between her Gucci and her Glock - she loves them both. Just because she loves everything pretty and pink doesn't mean she can't make a living as a killer for hire. Who ..."

Hi Sari. Your book sounds fun. I'll give it a shot in exchange for a review swap for Twisted Threads, an erotic, psychological thriller. Sound good? Kaylin

Kaylin wrote: "Sari wrote: "Tiana doesn't have to choose between her Gucci and her Glock - she loves them both. Just because she loves everything pretty and pink doesn't mean she can't make a living as a killer f..."

Sounds great, Kaylin! I will be in touch. Thanks!

Brian wrote: "I would love if you would consider Korean Road posted above! It is also on Kindle Unlimited, or pm me for other arrangements."
Just send my review of your book to amazon. Will follow on your goodreads page too.

Kaylin wrote: "Twisted Threads is a new stand alone erotic, psychological thriller in Kaylin McFarren’s Threads series and reviews are most welcome. Here's my book summary:

Akira Hamada is driven by past failure..."
Just started to read yours Kaylin !

Hey group. I'm looking for some more reviews in exchange for my review. Below is the amazon description. If you're interested, let me know! Thanks.

"INTENSE...FAST PACED...A 'RIP-SNORTING' PLOT LINE..." - Readers' Favorite Reviews

"Political Thriller writing at its best!" - D. Diane, Senior Editor, Midwest Book Review

A second revolution...A second civil war...New-age American heroes will rise and fall...The struggle in the new world begins.

Welcome to the imminent future: the American political gap is maximized; the individual states have begun clamoring for the disbandment of their federal government for its lack of stability; multiple power-hungry groups lick their chops at the thought of grabbing the reigns of the United States of America. And then a nation defining incident occurs, Article V of the U.S. Constitution is activated, and three sovereign territories come into existence.

But this hardly bothers Thaddeus Jackson – the son of a popular former president – who had money, fame, and a promising career in politics…until he ran away to the Alaskan wilderness to live in peace away from his family and the growing civil unrest.

What few know is that an elite group – led by Shane Wallace, Director of the CIA – has taken action. They recruit the very hesitant Thaddeus to be part of a diplomatic team tasked to negotiate the seemingly impossible peace between the liberal leaders of the North and his dysfunctional, republican family that now runs the South. The team includes Lozen Kyway, a highly-trained female agent turned bodyguard; Dr. Andreas Albrecht, a brilliant engineer and scientist who believes he’s discovered a truly sustainable, albeit dangerous, energy source; and Tomas Martinez, the former Vice President.

This elite group, and all its supporting team, will come together in a race against the clock to divert the territories away from war. New-age patriots will rise and fall, and new threats to democracy – never before imagined – will emerge from the shadows. Can the well-intentioned come together fast enough to ward off war in the states? Whose intentions are noble? Whose are full of malicious intent? Prepare yourself for an American era teeming with espionage, lies, murder, manipulation...The Chaos of Change!

Riggen's second novel, The Chaos of Change, is a new edition to the great political thriller traditions of Brad Meltzer, Barry Eisler, Brad Thor, and Tim Tigner

LINK FOR THE BOOK: https://www.amazon.com/Chaos-Change-t...

Sounds interesting. I'll read it and write you a review, if you write one for mine. I've got a Series out, that can be read as standalones, or if you want to start with the first one, its MoonHuntress. Here is the link where you find all 3 books.
https://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_ss...

My debut novel is a psychological thriller. Professionally, I have worked in mental health/special education for decades. Being a new author has certainly stretched what I thought were my limits. Growth is good, though, right?

Saints of Camarillo is an inside look at California State mental hospital through the eyes of a psychology intern from a religious university in the 1970s. She got more of an education than was ever intended. Based on a true story. Be aware there are adult themes and content.

I am hoping to give and receive many book reviews.


Saints of Camarillo: Inside California's Infamous State Hospital

Dovie wrote: "My debut novel is a psychological thriller. Professionally, I have worked in mental health/special education for decades. Being a new author has certainly stretched what I thought were my limits. G..."
Would be happy to read and review your new novel in exchange for doing the same for me in regard to Twisted Threads - an erotic, psychological thriller. - Kaylin :)

Is it okay to review each other's books?

Read and reviewed three books and am currently reading three more. So much talent in this group!

Dovie wrote: "Is it okay to review each other's books?"
I can't imagine why not...

I heard that it is against Amazon's policies and they will delete said reviews if they become aware of them. Stinks, huh?

Dovie wrote: "My debut novel is a psychological thriller. Professionally, I have worked in mental health/special education for decades. Being a new author has certainly stretched what I thought were my limits. G..."

Sounds very interesting. I love thrillers. Will Read it as soon as I'm finished with the other books. Where can I get your book ?
You can pick one of my books, or start with the first one of MoonHuntress. They can be read as standalones aswell. They're Mystery/Thrillers with a brush of science fiction and romance..
Here is the link.
https://www.amazon.com/s/ref=nb_sb_no...

Dovie wrote: "I heard that it is against Amazon's policies and they will delete said reviews if they become aware of them. Stinks, huh?"

I think if you buy the books they can't delete your review.

Maybe the moderators can give us some advice on this.

Dovie wrote: "I heard that it is against Amazon's policies and they will delete said reviews if they become aware of them. Stinks, huh?"
If you buy a book or are gifted one and post an honest review, why would Amazon remove this? The way I understand it paid reviews from internet sites are being taken down.

I have sent the moderator our question. Let's see what he has to say.

Wow! How did the person happen to review your book in the first place?

That's awful.

In regards to trading reviews, I have read in several places that it is against Amazon's policies. Do you know anything about that?

So it seems that we should choose books to review and hope that a different author chooses to review ours?

Are you going to ask Amazon to put the review back up?

Connie wrote: "Dovie wrote: "My debut novel is a psychological thriller. Professionally, I have worked in mental health/special education for decades. Being a new author has certainly stretched what I thought wer..."

Connie, my book is available through Kindle and CreateSpace. Thanks for your interest.

I read that an italian book blogger (who's done a lot of book reviews) had all their reviews on amazon cancelled. They even send a message to Amazon for explanation, but they didn't bother to answer. So I guess now even famous reviewers will start getting their reviews deleted...

Several reviews on my Amazon page said they were ARCs received for free from the author, and they haven't been removed. I think Amazon is really inconsistent on this "policy"... I just keep crossing my fingers that my reviews won't get removed! It's terrible that they do that, especially since they don't have an official policy on it.

Whatever happens, I'm still enjoying some great writing and am happy to post my reviews.

Some of the other review groups set up a fixed subgroup, then carefully distribute the review assignments like a round robin so that no two people are reviewing each other's books. I am wondering if the moderators would be open to doing that so we will all be protected.

So, for example, if you have 15 people who want to participate, everyone could be assigned 5-7 books to review and still be safe. You might not get exactly the books you want to read, but the end result is still the same.

A Poisonous Journey and A Darker Shore are my first two books in The Lady Evelyn Mysteries. Let me know if you'd be interested in doing a review swap:-)
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2...

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/3...

Malia wrote: "A Poisonous Journey and A Darker Shore are my first two books in The Lady Evelyn Mysteries. Let me know if you'd be interested in doing a review swap:-)
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/2......"

Sure! Is A Poisonous Journey the first one?

I have my winter holiday coming up in two weeks so can get to it then.

Kaylin wrote: "Whatever happens, I'm still enjoying some great writing and am happy to post my reviews."

I talked to someone who has published with Amazon and done well with her book. She said if two people exchange reviews, the best policy is to buy each other's books or state up front on the review that the book was a gift. If you are still interested, I am.

Cheers.

Connie wrote: "Sounds interesting. I'll read it and write you a review, if you write one for mine. I've got a Series out, that can be read as standalones, or if you want to start with the first one, its MoonHuntr..."


I talked to someone who has published with Amazon and done well with her book. She said if two people exchange reviews, the best policy is to buy each other's books or state up front on the review that the book was a gift. If you are still interested, I am.

Brian wrote: "Most definitely, if it had gone against the policy I would understand. I feel the work I put forth deserved the review it received, and it came from a credible source that has received multiple acc..."


I talked to someone who has published with Amazon and done well with her book. She said if two people exchange reviews, the best policy is to buy each other's books or state up front on the review that the book was a gift. If you are still interested, I am.

Dovie wrote: "Malia wrote: "A Poisonous Journey and A Darker Shore are my first two books in The Lady Evelyn Mysteries. Let me know if you'd be interested in doing a review swap:-)
https://www.goodreads.com/book..."

Thanks! Yes, it's the first in the series:-) Do you have a book you need reviewed?

Malia wrote: "Dovie wrote: "Malia wrote: "A Poisonous Journey and A Darker Shore are my first two books in The Lady Evelyn Mysteries. Let me know if you'd be interested in doing a review swap:-)
https://www.good..."

Yes, Saints Of Camarillo.

Dovie wrote: "Malia wrote: "Dovie wrote: "Malia wrote: "A Poisonous Journey and A Darker Shore are my first two books in The Lady Evelyn Mysteries. Let me know if you'd be interested in doing a review swap:-)
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I can't find it on the group's bookshelf...

Malia wrote: "Dovie wrote: "Malia wrote: "Dovie wrote: "Malia wrote: "A Poisonous Journey and A Darker Shore are my first two books in The Lady Evelyn Mysteries. Let me know if you'd be interested in doing a rev..."

I am really new, so it has not been added yet. It is on Goodreads, however.

Dovie wrote: "Malia wrote: "A Poisonous Journey and A Darker Shore are my first two books in The Lady Evelyn Mysteries. Let me know if you'd be interested in doing a review swap:-)
https://www.goodreads.com/book..." Dovie. Sorry for the delay. I just added Saints of Camarillo: Inside California's Infamous State Hospital to the Bookshelf.

Dovie wrote: "Malia wrote: "Dovie wrote: "Malia wrote: "Dovie wrote: "Malia wrote: "A Poisonous Journey and A Darker Shore are my first two books in The Lady Evelyn Mysteries. Let me know if you'd be interested ..."

Found it! It sounds intriguing. I'll send you a message so we can chat:-)