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So I'm getting close to being done with my first character and I could use some serious help.
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I feel like her personality isn't that great and it's a lame attempt. I didn't put a lot of effort into it. Anyone want to help me? I'll even let you collab with me perhaps? < - <

I could help if you like, Els :3

JENN! Yayz. :s I'll show you a pic of what it looks like so far instead of the group link. :D

http://prntscr.com/4auosb
Ignore the high lighted parts. It's some how highlighting because of viruses. I have to get the viruses fixed soon. ._.

I like it :) And I totally got her personality out of it. However, there was one part where I think you put Rose instead of Catrina (unless I read it wrong, which is definitely a possibility, and you were talking about someone in her life rather than her), but apart from that, I think it's pretty good :) The only other advice I would offer would be to maybe go over some grammatical things (just read through it once or twice and see if everything flows), but that's just me. I think she sounds like an awesome character.

And I love the name Catrina by the way :)

Thank you. c: I think the grammatical things I'll definitely fix indeed. :I Oh thank you as well. I got tired of doing Valentina so I needed to change it. Naw Rose is her middle name and I felt like I had to stop saying, Caterina every time.

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I am so unmotivated to do anything right now >.>

it's so quiet here .___.

Me?

How about the Teacher?

The Library?

Any floor is fine. You post first....

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anybody want to roleplay? .-.

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Does anyone know if Fiend has posted anywhere in a while? I've had my character profile up for a couple of days now with no response. I'm really excited to start (I always am when I join a new group) and the suspense is killing me .

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(Still waiting for a character approval. Please don't take that the wrong way, just a friendly reminder. Coben Awlk, on the Teachers thread)

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And my Teacher has been approved! Anybody for RP?

Sure! I have an Icken student.

Great! Where would you like to go? I was going to have Coben just arriving at the island, so do we have a landing field or something on the island?

I'm not sure...if there's an entrance, can you post there first.

Ok

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Bllleeehhhhh.
The fact that I'm failing completely at making templates pisses me off.
*Sigh* -_-'

JENNY I LOVE BEN HE IS SO EFFING ADORABLE~

Aasdlfkalsdfk! Yay :D I'm glad you like him~!

XD I don't think I've ever not liked one of your charries before to be totally honest but still


WERE ONE STEP CLOSER TO ACHIEVING WOOT!!!! *writhes in anticipation*

any chance of rping with him now? Or are you busy?

Ah, shhh XD I always feel the same with your characters. They're always perfect.

YESSsSSHHHHH! :D

Nope! Not busy at all! Honestly, all I was doing was working on my template, so I'm all good to go if you are ;D

U///U *scuffs foot modestly* they aren't all that great....yours are better


XD YAY! LETS RP THEM OMFG! Where do you wanna start? If I was to pick, I would say maybe a library which is funny cause almost all our ships end up in a library at some point or another :O *just realized this* because its the kind of place Sicarius would hang around cause he likes books and reading.

PFFFFTTTTT, you sit on a throne of lies. Yours are totes better. I don't even know what you're talking about.

YEEEEH :D Library would be a'okay with me (oh my goodness, they do, don't they? XD ). You want to start first or should I? :3

:O you really think so?


OHMEMEMEMEMEMEME!! If I don't post as my Sica soon I might EXPLODE O~O

I like just realized it as I was typing library lol. Remus and Lunia met in a library, Aurelia and Lance bonded in a library and now Sica and Ben are gonna be in a library XD

Dude, yes. :) Abso-freaking-lutely.

Haha XD Go for it~

They're all connected. It's literally perfect XD

U///U *wriggles* hehe I'm blushing like an idiot right now >~<


XD YAY!


indeed XD that should like, be our thing, all our ships meet in a library :O

Lol, I'm only telling the truuuuuttthhh~!

*Happy dance*

It totally should be :D I approve one hundred percent, haha.

XD I still think yours are better but I'm happy nonetheless





awesome! speaking of, we need a ship name for them :O well, we don't but I wanna make one XD Sicamin? Benrius?

Ahaha XD Okay. lies

Aalksdflasdf, I love Sicamin for some reason XD It's so quirky.

XD I'm just biased most likely but still *huggles*


haha me too~ it sounded quirky and cute to me so I listed it first lol

N'awww >w< *Huggles*

Ahaha, I'm glad you came up with it XD I love it.

Merp, gimme a minute on the reply. DX I'm having difficulties writing this evening. Gah.

XD *huggles tighter* I luff my Jenzy

I love it to. THEIR SHIP NAME IS OFFICIALLY SICARMIN!


its okay ^_^ I went a bit ovverboard on my post here, but its nothing compared to what I posted in the other group lol

*Death huggle of destiny* D'aw, well I love you too ;)

YESH! IT'S PERFECT~

I thought it was amazing ;) Sorry mine's not too good. I always struggle getting into character right off the bat with a new charrie :P

XD hehe *is huggled into destiny*


its fine ^_^ you can post as big or little as you want dahling, like I said I went overboard lol

Jennalyn ♥ ₍ dυғғ woмαɴ ₎ wrote: "[ on ]
Bllleeehhhhh.
The fact that I'm failing completely at making templates pisses me off.
*Sigh* -_-'"

Aidie? :)

Merrr, yeah :) gimme a minute on that. I'm on my iPod, so it might be short and super duper terrible but whatevs.

Psh it could never be terrible<3

Aubree ♡ wrote: "Psh it could never be terrible<3"

XD that's what I always tell her when she posts anything and says its terrible cause it never is

I love you guys so freaking much <3