Hello, I'm in need of a few beta readers to look over my MG/YA Fantasy novel, The Incredible Mustache. Pointing out anything from plot holes, voice, grammatical errors, etc. would be most helpful.
Blurb: An eleven year old boy, Walter Kobbs, lives the normal life of a kid in the mid 1990's. He plays video games, goes to school, and loves playing with his best friend Paul in a game of pogs. But the one thing Walter wants in the whole world is a mustache. This desire leads him down a road full of mysterious magic, a scarred witch seeking revenge, magical creatures, and a trail that may lead to the secret whereabouts of Walter's father who has been missing for six months.
Anyone who is interested, please feel free to comment below or email me at - [email protected]
I'm in need of a few beta readers to look over my MG/YA Fantasy novel, The Incredible Mustache. Pointing out anything from plot holes, voice, grammatical errors, etc. would be most helpful.
Blurb:
An eleven year old boy, Walter Kobbs, lives the normal life of a kid in the mid 1990's. He plays video games, goes to school, and loves playing with his best friend Paul in a game of pogs. But the one thing Walter wants in the whole world is a mustache. This desire leads him down a road full of mysterious magic, a scarred witch seeking revenge, magical creatures, and a trail that may lead to the secret whereabouts of Walter's father who has been missing for six months.
Anyone who is interested, please feel free to comment below or email me at - [email protected]
Thanks!