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Books without quote marks for speech (for those who want to avoid them)
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May 16, 2020 08:51PM

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There's not actually heaps of dialogue in this one or it probably would get to me...

LOL I was reading it over lunch, and knowing you were also reading it, I actually thought to myself “Marianne won’t be happy with this lack of punctuation”. Personally, it doesn’t bother me. I’m really loving it too, so far...."
LOL, that's funny that you thought of me. But not heaps of dialogue, and the prose is so beautiful!


Just realised I've never rated it, which is odd. Must amend that.
Trainspotting

I was looking forward to this one because of some great reviews but I don’t know now....
Normal People by Sally Rooney. Thanks for the info Biff. I also see it is listed for lots of prizes and its reviews are all over the place!
Here's another one - reviewed by a friend and she's warned fellow readers. The Pull of the Stars by Emma Donoghue

I can recommend the audiobook Brenda. It was terrific and you won't even notice the absence of speech marks!

I was looking forward to this but am now a little irritated from page 1 :(
I am over war stories and I never did like missing speech marks so this one will be a miss for me.

Actually very little war in this one, the main protagonists happen to meet during the war, the rest is set fifties onwards, quite like Anne Tyler or Kate Atkinson. Such a good story, I can just about forgive the lack of quote marks.
This might be a good one to do in audio, if you can wait until October.
Marianne wrote: "Phrynne wrote: "I am over war stories and I never did like missing speech marks so this one will be a miss for me."
Actually very little war in this one, the main protagonists happen to meet durin..."
That sounds much better:)
Actually very little war in this one, the main protagonists happen to meet durin..."
That sounds much better:)

When a new paragraph begins, it should have opening quote marks to show the character is still talking. The previous paragraph doesn't require closing quote marks.

If authors don't like the ‘chicken scratch’ look of double quotes, they can always use single. I'm actually considering making that change in my current WIP.
I suppose an author has the right to do what they like with their books. What really annoys me is that these books so often win major awards. If I was on the judging panel I'd disqualify them!
I'm sure that's why they win awards Thomas - they think they're better than others, so does the panel!! I won't read them either ;)

I really hate that notion. 'Wow this book is so difficult to understand - it must be brilliant!' Nowadays award lists are 'steer clear' lists for me!

I was looking forward to this but am now a little irritated from page 1 :("
This was the first book I have ever picked up that didn't have speech marks. I was so looking forward to reading it but couldn't get any further than the first chapter before I dnf. Everything just seems to blur in together without the proper punctuation. Glad I'm not the only one irritated by this!


Why would you make your work harder to enjoy?
My current read: A Good Winter by Gigi Fenster is another.

Irish writers such as Roddy Doyle and Colm McCann use the -- mark to indicate dialogue. Either way, if it's clear someone is speaking it shouldn't matter, In fact, some people report not even noticing (as some have commented above), which is a compliment to the writer (and shows they have done it correctly - if not done right it's a disaster for the reader).
You will always have traditionalists who don't want anything different, and writers pushing limits are obviously not for them, but to simply label it as lazy, is in itself a lazy comment attempting no understanding of why this is done. Dialogue is character and changes to how dialogue is punctuated affects how you read it in your head. There are many ways of presenting things on a page. This issue touches on just one of them. Punctuation is a topic to really rile the hackles of many people...although my English teacher advised me with this publication that 'punctuation is not a mountain you want to die on - rejoice that you are being published'. Tell that to the authors like Gustav Flaubert who would agonise half a day about putting in a comma, then the rest of the day about taking it out...I'm no Flaubert, but punctuation decisions DO matter.

"James signalled to the maitre d' who led them to a small ..."
Wow. To me this is like the writer who puts in extra apostrophes into plurals because actually, they don't know where they go at all and they'd rather risk putting them in then leave them out. This narrator/writer is so arrogant they have to even put their stage directions as dialogue?? LOL The shock is the editors/publisher allowed it? (or should I say 'aloud it'??) ho ho

"James signalled to the maitre d' who led ..."
It was probably self-published.
I have a quotation I coined: ‘The best thing about self-publishing is that anyone can write and publish a book—The worst thing about self-publishing is that anyone can write and publish a book’

I was looking forward to this but am now a little irritated from page 1 :("
That's such a shame Marianne. I loved Still Life and it's sad that that is affecting your enjoyment of it. Although I don't see the point of not having them, I guess I'm lucky that I didn't notice the lack of speech marks and never had a problem not knowing who was speaking. It might work better as an audiobook for you if the narrators are good.

I could tolerate no quotation marks if it didn't pull me out of the story continuously. Unfortunately, it always does.
What matters more—how ‘pretty’ your writing looks, or how well it grabs the reader?
The most important thing to me as a reader is to be engrossed in the words, the pages, until the end. As you say Thomas, the few I have read without punctuation pull me out of the story each and every time until there's no sense of a plot at all.


One of the points I was trying to make was about tone and character representation. It's not all about 'looking pretty' at all, although when you get used to minimal punctuation all the extra commas etc do look like a bird ran across the page 4 times...but each to their own. You buy what appeals to you ultimately at all levels.

That's very true.
Congratulations, by the way, on getting a deal on your book. I hope it does well for you. Keep us all posted.


But the complete lack of quote marks meant I had no idea who and what was going on. Was someone speaking? Was this a conversation...? It did my head in and I have a headache now.
Lol! Exactly Deborah! Quotation marks came about as a method understood by everyone to indicate that someone was speaking. They have worked beautifully for a very long time - why change it?

I really hate that notion. 'Wow this book is so ..."
Yep, too clever by halves wins an award. Not onboard with that idea.
It pains me to see The Fog Garden by Marion Halligan here. She was my English teacher in high school and was a brilliant teacher.
Diana wrote: "Krystal wrote: "Brenda wrote: "I'm sure that's why they win awards Thomas - they think they're better than others, so does the panel!! I won't read them either ;)"
I really hate that notion. 'Wow ..."
That's sad Diana - an English teacher should know the benefits of quotation marks!
I really hate that notion. 'Wow ..."
That's sad Diana - an English teacher should know the benefits of quotation marks!

I really hate that notion. 'Wow ..."
I'm flabbergasted that a former English teacher would write a book without quotation marks. What's next—no question marks, because we should be able to see that it's a question? No full stops?
I sometimes enter writing contests; maybe I'll edit one of my stories to remove all punctuation marks and see how it goes. They might think I'm someone famous and give me an award. LOL.

I really hate that..."
The missing question marks is already a thing, too - Sarah J. Maas is the worst for it! Drives me nuts!

So SO true!

I really hate that..."
Go for it! You can prove our point for us nicely.

I really hate that notion. 'Wow ..."
That is really sad! I got two books by her out of the library, trying to flesh out my ACT reading list for a challenge. Both books sounded really good. I suspect the stories are good, but I just am not able to metabolise them without punctuation.


Given the cover, lacking a capital letter on the first name, the absence of quote marks was a dreary confirmation rather than a surprise. I could not finish it and it was not just the absent quote marks. There was something really odd about the writing which I could not define.
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