Support for Indie Authors discussion

Hello, friends. I've seen all the help shared in this group for the past year and hope some love will come my way in the form of a beta reader. I plan to publish my book this summer, so would appreciate any points on plot and character development. It's a violent fantasy that combines magic and muskets. I haven't written my blurb yet (I'll see this group later for help with that), but here's the basics:

It's a fantasy story with violent battles. It's a twist on the chosen one formula. In my story, two people from different cultures each has friends supporting him and her as the chosen one to defeat an evil empire. However, despite needing alliances, neither culture is keen to sharing the limelight of their star citizen.

Help me confirm Two Dogs, Swift Shot, and Ancestors' Hand can learn to work with Murid, Egill, and Faida to defeat Githinji and the Corlain Empire.

Thank you in advance for your consideration and assistance.