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Computer. I like it to look like I'm reading to myself, and I only get that in print. Also, it's just easier for me.

Girl. But I don't think I'm awful at writing guys. Lol
Current synopsis (still working on it):
Maya Ashtar was shipped away from earth, away from her family, along with many others at the beginning of the revolution all in the name of sameness. She lives on the planet Kyrin with all of the others who broke the aura of sameness. All the old, sick, disabled. Anyone who had any kind of serious injury. Unlike others though, Maya doesnt know why shes there. Shes not sick or ugly. She's not rebelious or spunky. She's just an average girl.
But then she runs into an underground group of rebels, where everything changes for her.
With the help of an albino girl and her secret crush, she works to take down the evil government and restore the universe to peace. Or so she thinks.
Bleh. Yeah
It’s not great but it’s still under construction XD
Maya Ashtar was shipped away from earth, away from her family, along with many others at the beginning of the revolution all in the name of sameness. She lives on the planet Kyrin with all of the others who broke the aura of sameness. All the old, sick, disabled. Anyone who had any kind of serious injury. Unlike others though, Maya doesnt know why shes there. Shes not sick or ugly. She's not rebelious or spunky. She's just an average girl.
But then she runs into an underground group of rebels, where everything changes for her.
With the help of an albino girl and her secret crush, she works to take down the evil government and restore the universe to peace. Or so she thinks.
Bleh. Yeah
It’s not great but it’s still under construction XD

Maya Ashtar was shipped away from earth, away from her family, along with many others at the beginning of the revolution all in the name of sameness. She liv..."
Oh, don't be hard on yourself! It's really good! I hope you publish it so that I can read it!

I'll just give my synopsis as well.
Jane D. Camp always has something to say. Until Asher Glade, a senior in her school, shows up and turns her world upside down. Starting with her school. When she learns what the school has hiding underneath it, along with the whole USA, she's speechless. But what's worse is Asher's request. A request she doesn't take lightly, and a request he can't imagine coming back to hit him.
There you have it. The revolutionary Take Over synopsis! Lol

I just trying to deal with the whole little me/ old me and time travel nonsense
Cause its true it doesn’t make sense
Like for example my character has this almost like a disease in which this afternoon she can talk to her future grandma self and tomorrow she’ll be reading bed time stories to her little me.
So she needs to balanced having fun because she’s a time traveler that’s super cool but also not messing things up

but that movie had help me put my mind to work on my story
Any other time travel movies or books, besides Back to the future that you guys want to recommend I’ll appreciated
Wow Kristel that sounds super cool!
The hardest scene I’ve had to write...
Hm, well I had one of my main good guys brain get taken over by a bad guy which was sad because I really liked him. But I’m going to save him! So yay🎉
The hardest scene I’ve had to write...
Hm, well I had one of my main good guys brain get taken over by a bad guy which was sad because I really liked him. But I’m going to save him! So yay🎉

That happens to me too Alyssa!
(Somehow I have managed to make it a lot farther in my current one)
(Somehow I have managed to make it a lot farther in my current one)

How far did you get Joey?
Ohh okay that makes sense! I used to write everything on paper but eventually I swapped over to computer.

I've gotten to about twenty-one chapters, so I can answer! Lol
The complete and full and honest truth is... I have no idea. I really don't know. This is the farthest I've ever gotten in a book, and I'm really happy with how it's going. I totally understand the getting stuck thing, because I did that about a month ago. I think the most helpful advice I can give is: if you get to a part where you don't know what's coming next, or it's kind of a boring section, just write very brief. Don't give a whole bunch of detail. Just keep writing what you know, and later when you're writing the second or third draft, then you can fill in the blanks. You'll get there!



It is kind of difficult. But, sometimes, I'll get an idea and roll with it. Lol
Sometimes i randomly start singing things that I make up, but I never use it for writing. I’ve never really had a point where I had to use a made up song for a book. *shrug*
I use voice memos a lot. I have around 20 songs finished and 50 unfinished recordings😂 It’s a mess!
@Joey
same, but I do try to record whatever gibberish comes from my mouth.
@Joey
same, but I do try to record whatever gibberish comes from my mouth.



I think that happens to everyone, Maria. I know it happens to me every time I write. What I’ve done to help me, is to have one of my friends become an Alpha reader. She reads everything and then tells me what needs to be changed or if it’s good. Make sure it’s an honest friend and someone that reads a lot. Also I recommend Role Playing. It’s a lot of fun and a good way to figure out your writing style and how to develop characters. Don’t knock yourself down if your story doesn’t turn out the way you thought it would. Writing takes a lot of practice and learning new ways to say something. It will only get better and easier!


Hi! No, everyone goes thorough that, I think, for sure. Your not alone in this! Since you seem to be going the planning route, where you plan your book first, I think you should go to just writing and not planning. Like, just start writing. Tell the story to yourself. This will cancel out a lot of the thinking what you've written's boring problem. If you just write, you're not rereading what you've already done. At least not until editing or something. And by then your story will have developed, and it won't be as big of an issue. But, this is totally based on me, so I know it doesn't work for everyone, but it was an idea. I hope you start enjoying your writing more, and get more confident in it!
Oh my gosh Maria I literally deal with that all the time. My main struggle as a writer is just not looking back, continuing no matter how bad o think my writing is. My goal is to get a first draft down on paper and then edit after that. After all, no matter how bad the first draft is, it’s better then nothing
My first character that I made for a book was Brooke Railer. I still love her, and am still working with her. She's soft spoken, but fun and has an optimistic outlook.