Write, Wrote, Written discussion

Woah! more!!!

Ooooo!! This looks like it's going to be AMAZING!

I guess you're right.... To me it sounds better cuz I just am that kinda gal, but it does sound more... Natural the way you have it :)

I love it!!!!!!!!! XD

Loooooove it Alice!

AWESOME!!!!

This is going to be good...

OOOOOOOOOH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOOVE IT!!!

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!


I THINK IT IS AWESOME, ALICE!!!!

O.O

You have my full attention...

MEAN, MEAN OLD-SOCK-GUY!!!!! GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!

O.O

uh, YAS!!!

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY


AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D

I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!

KAMIKO!!!!!!!!!!

JULANE!

*Dramatic music plays in the background*

Do you remember the day? The day I left?
Julane: Yes, I do. I think about it everyday
Me: We-



Lol, just kidding

Yeah, sorry Alice

Lol, sorry!

Besides the grammatical and spelling errors, I'm enjoying the story so far. Maybe some more details like:

What does the room/facility look like?
Does he have a lot of skirmishes with this Jordan kid?
Does Alice never talk to anyone else?
Are boys and girls separated on different floors/wings of the building?

Ready for more!