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message 1: by Katlyn (last edited Sep 24, 2014 07:01PM) (new)

Katlyn Please use the written format, although you are welcome to change colons for brackets or add dividers.

Name:

Age:

Gender:

Rank:

Appearance: Include a picture, at least 4 sentences

Personality: How does your cat act? What is he or she like? 4+ sentences.

Fatal Flaw: The worst thing about them, likely to lead to their demise.

Best Trait:

History: At least 6 sentences unless it is a very young kit under 3 moons

Mate/Crush:

Family:

Other:


message 2: by Katlyn (new)

Katlyn Dawnstar

Name: Dawnstreak Dawnstar

Gender: Female

Age: 41 moons

Rank: Leader

Appearance:
Kitten

Apprentice

Warrior


Dawnstar's name describes her well. She is a gray cat with streaks of white running through her well-groomed fur. A bit of white is on her chest, and all of her paws except her back left have dabs of white on them. She has lively, green eyes that have golden flecks when the sun reflects on them right. Her left ear has a bite taken our of it, and she has a scar on her tail from a particularly harsh battle. There is a smaller gash that narrowly missed her right eye, but is directly under it. Her whiskers are a silky white, and pretty long. Like most RiverClan cats, she is a bit more filled out than the other clans, especially WindClan. However, she is small and wiry, not large with more muscle. For some strange reason, one claw on her left front foot is noticeably shorter than the rest. Dawnstar once strained a muscle in her right back leg, and whenever a storm comes on she can feel it in that leg, which occasionally helps the Clan prepare others for a possibly blizzard or hailstorm.

Personality: Dawnstar's outer shell makes her seem gruff and sarcastic. However, it can be found that underneath she is friendly and eager around her own Clan, always willing to help a friend out of a trouble. Her loyalty is undoubtable to her Clan. However, on bad days, she is overly sarcastic and moody. She tries not to let setbacks put her down, and always has her eyes on the future, and is always one step ahead when she organizes patrols, which are great qualities for a deputy. Sometimes in her attempts to do this she can come off as a bit bossy and demanding. She is pretty good at mentoring, but doesn't always have the patience to curb a overly optimistic, bouncy apprentice and prefers apprentices that remind her of herself - Eager, but ready to listen and learn.

Greatest Strength:
~Quick as Lightning

Fatal Flaw:
~ Holds grudges

Family:
Willowleaf (Alive, sister, RiverClan, open)
Blackcloud (Alive, brother, RiverClan, open)
Duskfur (Father, Alive, RiverClan, open)
Mouse-ear (Niece through Silverwillow, alive, RiverClan, open)
Scorchclaw (Nephew through Silverwillow, alive, open)
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Whitefeather (Deceased, mother, StarClan)
Brightkit (Deceased, sister, StarClan)

Crush/Mate: N/A

Kits: N/A

Background: As a kit, Dawnstar had three siblings. Blackkit, Willowkit, and Brightkit. Brightkit died at birth, and her mother Whitefeather was sickly. The three kits had a pretty average kithood and were apprenticed right on time. Dawnstar/paw had a rebellious streak, and was unhappy with her strict mentor. She complained to the leader, which got her two days picking the elders for ticks. This made her want to work harder, and she grew in character during her training. She wanted to be a tough warrior, not the ignorant kit who had rebelled against her mentor. At one point, the clan had a war with WindClan. Dawnstae was still an apprentice. Her mother insisted on coming, even though she still was unusually frail. As a result, she was killed by a WindClan cat. Dawnpaw blamed herself for not getting to her in time, even after Blackpaw (who had also been in the battle) and herself received their names - Blackcloud and Dawnstreak. Willowpaw followed a half-moon later.

As time went by, Dawnstreak still felt she carried the burden of her mother's death - until gradually, another strong warrior whose actions were brave but also unsafe, convinced her to put her eyes forward, never back. It was about this time she got her first apprentice. Some of her clanmates began to feel uncomfortable around her, but Willowleaf remained her best friend, even when she became pregnant with kits.

Over time, Dawnstreak's loyalty was rewarded with a deputyship after the old deputy passed away. Only three moons ago her leader died a shocking death after he was hit by a monster on the Thunderpath.

Other:
~ Mate is Open!
~ Has mentored two apprentices.
~ Has nine lives still.


message 3: by Katlyn (new)

Katlyn Wrensong, Approved.


message 4: by (trisscar) (last edited Sep 27, 2014 11:45AM) (new)

 (trisscar) (trisscar_rose) | 2 comments Name Pebbledrop

Age 30 moons

Gender Female
Rank Warrior [Possible Queen]

Appearance
Pebbledrop is a sleek, Egyptian Mau. She has stormy green eyes, that can be quite fearsome or on the other hand gentle. Pebbledrop has a stripe running down her back to the tips of her tail. The end of her tail is especially black, while the rest of it is a lighter shade of gray. The rest of her pelt is covered in black spots while her underbelly is completely white. Pebbledrop keeps her fur clean, and rather soft.

Personality Pebbledrop is a friendly, interactive cat viewing the world to be her friend. She always wants to make friends with everyone, believing that the Clans could get along better if everyone tried being nice. She usually never shows any fear to any cat, but rather a lot of curiosity. Speaking of which, Pebbledrop is curious, usually butting into other people's affairs. She usually won't get the subtle hints you throw at her, and needs to be told directly to go away. Sometimes even after that, she may try to help and stick her nose in places she really shouldn't. Overall she really isn't a complicated to understand.
Fatal Flaw Shes can't take a hint.
Best Trait Shes always going to make you feel welcome.

History Pebbledrop doesn't have a tragic past. She grew up in a peaceful loving family. Her parents, Stonepelt and Minnowfur were kind gentle cats who loved her. She got the attention she needed, since she was an only kit. When she became an apprentice she lost her father to an injury while he was in battle. For a while, her mother, Minnowfur turned her back to the world and Pebbledrop was worried that her mother would eventually turn bitter. However, everything turned out to be all right, and life resumed back to normality.
Family
Father-Stonepelt-Dead
Mother-Minnowfur-Open for Creation
Mate/Crush Open

Other N/A


message 5: by [deleted user] (last edited Oct 01, 2014 09:29PM) (new)

[Name] Wildheart

[Age] 29 moons

[Gender] male

[Rank] warrior

[Appearance]

Wildheart is a handsome tom with long, thick, snowy white fur, a long, fluffy plume of a tail, and eyes of palest blue, so pale they sometimes appear almost silvery. Lean, wiry, and long-legged, Wildheart is a powerful swimmer and fast on his feet. Lithe and nimble, he moves with the grace common to many RiverClan cats. He also has rather overlarge ears. His thick fur is always getting tangled and messy, and he is remarkably negligent about keeping it free of knots. Whitesnow and Wrensong are forever having to tidy it for him.

[Personality] Wildheart is, true to his name, a free spirit. His mother likes to joke that he never outgrew kithood, because Wildheart still has a pure, childlike innocence that allows him to see the world through bright, hopeful eyes. He has a hard time being serious about much of anything, and can never sit still for longer than a few moments. As a kit and as an apprentice, he was forever breaking rules, and more often than not he would drag his long-suffering brother along on his ill-fated adventures. Even now he has a hard time following orders. His curiosity gets in the way; he just has to know the why, the what, the when, and the wherefore before he does anything. Hyperactive, over eager, and unruly, he has a heart of gold that might be overlooked by those who don't know him. He is a constant bundle of excitement, easily thrilled, easily delighted, always full of a reckless energy that makes him likable, but perhaps a bit much to deal with.

Whatever Wildheart feels, he feels deeply. He is a bit of a scatterbrain; he has no defenses, no filter between his brain and his tongue, no barrier between his impulses and his actions. He is easily hurt; he loves too easily and too much; he trusts too quickly; he worries unnecessarily. Unlike most Clan cats, he has not a shred of pride. He second guesses himself constantly and doesn't think very highly of himself. Under the easygoing, lighthearted demeanor is a sensitive, kind, and loving cat who cares too much and never gives up hope. No matter what happens, Wildheart always bounces back up.

[Fatal Flaw] He doubts himself a lot.

[Best Trait] He never gives up.

[History] Wildheart's mother used to be a kittypet named Sweets who left her housefolk to live as a loner and eventually ended up joining RiverClan and becoming a respected warrior. She was given the name Sweetmist. She fell in love with Shadepelt, and in time they became mates. Both Shadepelt and Sweetmist were a little old to be having their first kits when Sweetmist became pregnant, and as always with an older queen, there was some risk. However, the kitting was fine, and Sweetmist had three kits: Whitekit, the eldest, then Wildkit, born second, and last of all, little Leopardkit. Sweetmist was perfectly fine, and Whitekit and Wildkit were strong and healthy. But Leopardkit wasn't. From the start, she was too small and too sickly. Too weak. It was doubtful she would survive to her apprenticeship.

But Leopardkit had the spirit to make up for her small size, and she had her faithful brothers to stand by her. Whitekit, steady and patient, and Wildkit, hyper, overeager, and eternally loving, never gave up on their sister. Together, the three were a merry trio, constantly inventing new games to play, endlessly underpaw, eagerly listening to the elders' stories, and even sneaking out of camp on a few occasions. Despite a few close calls that were particularly stressful on Sweetmist and Shadepelt, all three made it to six moons, and all three were apprenticed. The second day of their apprenticeship, however, Leopardpaw fell into the river while her mentor was teaching her how to fish. In a flash, both Whitepaw and Wildpaw were also in the water, and before their mentors could do anything to help, they'd pulled her back out. The next morning, she was coughing and shivering with fever. Neither of her brothers left her side for the next few days. She died in her sleep a week later. The day his sister died was the saddest day of Wildpaw's life.

Wildpaw and his brother were devastated, as were their parents. But the brothers still had each other. Wildpaw recovered seemingly quickly, back to his normal hyperactive, mischievous self, though he still misses Leopardpaw dearly. And though Wildpaw's mentor never succeeded in her mission to teach him some calm and patience, both he and his brother grew into fine cats, and were given their warrior names soon enough: Wildheart and Whitesnow.

Shadepelt died in a battle soon after they became warriors, having lived a long, full life. A few moons later, Sweetmist, still mourning her mate, moved to the elders' den, saying her age was catching up to her. But for Wildheart, this loss of yet another loved one was nearly overwhelming. He became oddly subdued, not at all like his usual self. This time, it was Wrensong, a she-cat Wildheart had loved since they were apprentices, who helped him get past his father's death.

Wrensong is Wildheart's mate now, and also expecting his kits. He is rather nervous about the whole thing and hovers around her constantly, a ball of nervous energy, doing his best to keep her happy and safe.

[Mate] Wrensong [played by Knieka] (view spoiler)
Wildheart was still an apprentice, as was Wrensong, when he fell completely and unconditionally in love with her. Sure she would never take him seriously, he chose instead to avoid her and instead mope around with his brother, annoying him with his fretting, to the point where Whitesnow would snap at Wildheart to get out of his fur, grow a backbone, and just tell Wrensong how he felt.

[Family]
Sweetmist: mother, 94 moons, elder, alive [played by Asmaa] (view spoiler)
Shadepelt: father, dead (view spoiler)
Whitesnow: brother, 29 moons, warrior, alive, [played by Knieka] (view spoiler)
Leopardpaw: sister, dead (view spoiler)
Mallowkit: unborn son [played by Asmaa] (view spoiler)
Owlkit: unborn son [played by Knieka] (view spoiler)
Littlekit: unborn daughter [played by Knieka] (view spoiler)

[Other] Once his kits are born, he will worry constantly that, like Leopardpaw, Littlekit will die.
Whitesnow is not just Wildheart's brother; he is also his best friend and his confidant, and the brothers are extremely close.


message 6: by Katlyn (new)

Katlyn Stonefang, Approved


message 7: by Katlyn (new)

Katlyn Tigerlily, Approved.


message 8: by Katlyn (last edited Sep 27, 2014 06:11AM) (new)

Katlyn Mallowkit, Approved


message 9: by Katlyn (new)

Katlyn Owlkit, Approved


message 10: by Katlyn (new)

Katlyn Littlekit, Approved


message 11: by Katlyn (new)

Katlyn Pebbledrop, Approved


мєgαη ♥ღ❀ [ωє ∂ση’т нανє тσ тαкє тнιѕ, вα¢к αgαιηѕт тнє ωαℓℓ] ♥ღ❀ | 12 comments MENTOR NEEDED

Brackenpaw


Name:

Brackenkit, Brackenpaw, Brackenfur

Age:

9 moons

Gender:

Male

Rank:

Kit, Apprentice, Warrior

Appearance: Include a picture, at least 4 sentences

Personality: How does your cat act? What is he or she like? 4+ sentences.

Fatal Flaw: The worst thing about them, likely to lead to their demise.

Best Trait:

History: At least 6 sentences unless it is a very young kit under 3 moons

Mate/Crush:

Family:

Other:


message 13: by Kikki (new)

Kikki (kikki-not-kiki) Wildheart Approved!

XD I love him!


message 14: by мαr ♚ (last edited Nov 02, 2014 03:33PM) (new)

мαr ♚ UNDER CONSTRUCTION
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message 15: by Kikki (new)

Kikki (kikki-not-kiki) Black is a taken prefix


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