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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

taadaa! :)


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

This is much like Peter Pan, only Peter isn't the good guy here.. he's the bad one. As Wendy begins to drift off, a slight creak appears. Her window swings open, allowing the coolness of the night air to sweep through, she gasps, but her mouth is quickly covered as a mysterious boy flys out with her in his arms. She wakes up, her heart racing, remembering the night, but it wasn't a dream. She is now in Neverland, where she must fight to get back home. But only one other person knows his way out of Neverland....


message 3: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Awesome! Who's gonna be Peter Pan or Wendy?


message 4: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Awesome! Who's gonna be Peter Pan or Wendy?


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

So I was hoping that you wouldn't mind being both Tinkerbell and Wendy. I've got alot in mind for Peter and Hook, but if you want you can be one of them, so each of us can have one girl one guy.

Also, this is a totally different storyline than the original PeterPan, I was trying to make it more modern day and also, Peter, Wendy, and Hook are all in the same age gap.


message 6: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) I can Definetly be Wendy and Tinkerbell. This sounds really awesome!


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Awesome! ^-^ So would you like me to make a bio first? I really dont have that much detail just, age, appearance, and maybe some characteristics.


message 8: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Yes please...


message 9: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Yes please...


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message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

sorry for the wait! I couldnt find a good enough picture! :)


message 12: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) It's fine!

Name: Wendy Darling
Age: 18
Appearance: https://www.google.com/url?sa=i&s...

Name: Tinker Bell
Age: 19
Appearance: http://hollywoodlife.com/2013/11/17/o...


message 13: by [deleted user] (new)

Awesome! Well I'll get it started! Hold on a moment~


message 14: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Awesome! And btw, those are the characters from once upon a time that are actually Wendy and Tink.


message 15: by [deleted user] (new)

Peter stands amongst the tall roof tops of London. A thick fog rolls along the sky, casting a shadow of the moon on the street. Peer stands, holding onto the side of one of the chimnies, watching... waiting for Wendy to sleep. He'd visited her before a long time ago, conincing the young girl that he was merly a dream. And that was all he was to her.. a dream. And he was fed up of it. He'd watched her grow older, and be visiting the world of adulthood and leaving Neverland so much, Peter too grew older. He was now a young man, urging for his chance of love. Wanting his childhood friend.. forever. And noone, would stop him now.


message 16: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Wendy called goodnight to her parents, turning off the lights and climbing into bed after jotting down a few notes on her calendar. One of the next days had Date with Brendan!! written on it in Wendy's loopy writing. She pulls the blankets up around her, yawning.


message 17: by [deleted user] (new)

He watched as the lights flickered off, slowly working his way over toward her window, gazzing into it slowly. Her pale skin and long hair still looked the same as it always had, sending a smile to Peter's face. He knew he would have to be quick with this. Reaching over, he began to open her window slowly. The small window panel shifted open, letting out a large creak sending Peter flying quickly inside Wendy's bedroom. He hid near the corners of her room, awaiting for her to move.


message 18: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Wendy glances up, half asleep, as she hears the creak, but doesn't see Peter. She mutters to herself in her sweet voice "I have to remember to ask Father to fix that loose hinge. It's driving me nuts!"


message 19: by [deleted user] (new)

Peter watched as she got up to close the window. Slowly he approached her from behind grabbing her side quickly with on hand and covering her mouth with the other. The window was still open, so he leapt out of it quickly, carrying Wendy out. The two of them soared far up where you could no longer see the buildings. A bright sky lit their faces as theybegan their way toward Neverland. Peter held her tightly not loosening his grip any as they continued higher.


message 20: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Wendy screams, but only a barely muffled sound escapes his hand. She can barely struggle against Peter, and isn't sure she wants to, being above ground as they were. Tears form in her eyes.


message 21: by [deleted user] (new)

Soon the two fly through a thick bunch of clouds, and only to find Neverland on the other side of them. Though it's also night there as well. A bright moon, lights up the island as the two fly through the many trees as they reach the island. Peter drops Wendy above a deep hole sending her through a long slide down to Peter's underground home. Thick fur blankets cover the furniture and only a few candles light the room.


message 22: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Wendy screams, too frightened to think about why the place looks so familiar.


message 23: by [deleted user] (new)

Peter follows her inside, his face dimly lit and not showing much detail. Wendy, sat on the bed, tears making her eyes gleam with fright. Peter, anciously wlks over toward her, his feet lifting off the ground a bit as he leaned in close to her. She lay flat on the bed now, Peter floating above her. He smiles looking down at her, "You probably don't have any idea who i am do you?"


message 24: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Wendy whimpers with fear, some part of her hoping that this was all just a nightmare. She doesn't respond to Peter, choking down a sob.


message 25: by [deleted user] (new)

Peter leaned into her, looking into her eyes and smiled, "We were best friends before... remember?" Though he spoke of friendship, his voice did not appear friendly at all. For Peter had out lived his young boy days and now he was driven by the society of man, taking advantages of his abilities.


message 26: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) "Wh-Who are y-y-you?" Tears glisten in Wendy's eyes, her accented voice quavering. Her whole body shakes with fear.


message 27: by [deleted user] (new)

He laughs lightly, his eyes remained on hers. He went back down to the ground, standing in front of her, "Come on Wendy... we knew each other once!" he smiled faintly. He knew she was frightended and he liked it, "I'm Peter.." he said softly.


message 28: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) ((Really sorry, I fell asleep.))


Wendy shakes her head, hugging her knees to her chest. This man, Peter, was terrifying her. "I wasn't ever friends with a Peter..." She mumbles, a few tears sliding down her cheeks.


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

"Wendy.." he said, walking closer toward her, stroking her face. A bit of saddness hung inside him, 'how could she not remember him?'. But then again, he was just a dream to her. Peter's hand rested on her face, cuppling her chin in his grasp. His eyes fell toward her lips, and in the candlight, she was beautiful. Leaning forward, closer and closer, Peter kissed her lips with a strong passion.


message 30: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Wendy sat, her whole body shaking, watching Peter with fear. When he kissed her, Wendy lets out a cry of fear.


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

Peter gripped her arms tightly, "You will remember me! And you will forget about your days in London.." he said strictly, back up aways, "This.. is your new home. And there is no leaving it." he added, walking away into one of the other rooms, the curtain closing behind him.


message 32: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Once he is gone, Wendy breaks into tears, sobbing hard, curling into a ball.


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

Peter sat in the next room, feeling a bit guilty about how he'd treated her. But, oh well, there was no escaping Neverland. He walked back into the room where wendy layed curled up on the bed, he said nothing. But simply left the room, flying out of the tunnel they'd come in through. The night sky outside was brightening as the sun's rim began to peak through. Peter sat on one of the tall trees, playing his small ocarina (flute). He hadn't seen Tink in awhile, though she would probably be mad at him for bringing Wendy here.


message 34: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Tink was soaring through the air, doing tricks. She hadn't seen Peter in awhile, and part of her wondered about him, but she was having too much fun.


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

As morning finally came, Peter awoke. He had fallen asleep outside on the tree limb. He flew over toward his home, flying inside the narrow opening. He wondered if Wendy would still be asleep


message 36: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Wendy was sitting at the window ((is there a window?)), looking out sadly, holding in tears.


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

((They're underground, http://chicorydellarts.typepad.com/.a... )

Peter smiled, flying toward her quickly. He landed his feet by her side, "Hey.." he said softly.


message 38: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) ((Oh... I can't edit on my phone so pretend it's just a chair.))


Wendy jumps, startled, her eyes shining with fear.


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

He laughed, "You're cute when you're afraid.." He crossed his legs, sitting next to her in the air. "You sure have changed Wendy.."


message 40: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) "Ch-Changed? I've never s-seen you before in my l-life!" She cries out, a tear sliding down her cheek.


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

Helaughed again, "You came here when you were about... eight perhaps.. And you tol me that you wanted nothing more than to live here with me forever. But you missed your family more, and decided to leave me. Now.. I have made your dream come true.. now you will live here," he took her hand, "with me forever.."


message 42: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Wendy trembles, pulling away her hand. Something sounds familiar, but she shakes her head.


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

"I convinced you that it was merely a dream.. thinking that I could let you go. But even then, I knew I wouldn't be able to let you go.." he said softly


message 44: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Wendy's eyes widen as she remembers that odd dream when she was so young. "N-No..."


message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

He smiled, "I thought you'd be happy... But either way,.. you're here now." Peter stood back on the ground, leaning toward her, "And all that time I did visiting you has aged me as well... You know what this means Wendy?" he asked, walking over to one of the tabels, picking up a clay pot. His back was toward her, "It means... I'm mortal!" he threw the pot against the wall, runninig back to her, "I could live forever once! Now... I'm just human! And the more I came to see you in London, the closer I'd be to death!!" he yelled, his hands clinging to the arms of Wendy's chair. He began to cry, his head on her lap. Laughing, he looked back up, an evil smile peering from his face, "But I brought you here now.. so you and I shall live forever!"


message 46: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Wendy trembles with fear, tears in her eyes, shaking her head.


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

"Gosh Wendy! You make me feel like the bad guy!" he turned away from her, frustrated that he couldn't cheer her up, or that she wasn't happy. H turned back to her, anger in his face. He kicked the chair over, gripping her arms and zooming out of the house with her in his arms, looking her in the face he said, "You may come back when you've learned to appreciate what I've done for you!" he yelled, dropping her onto the ground, far off from his home. He hoped by her needing help on an unfamiliar island would drive her back to him. But little did he know tht there were others out there who could claim her heart.


message 48: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) Wendy sobs, gasping sobs, sitting there, watching him fly away. She just wanted to go home, back to safety, back to her normal life.


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

Not to far from Wendy laid was the shores of Neverland. The salty air created a heavy mist as it slammed against the shore. Off the shores was a giant red ship, it's pillars shined with a bronze shine. A loud mouthed crew was upon the ship, repairing the sails and simply leaning back as the cool morning air awoke them. Inside his cabin within the ship was the quiet, James Hook. Only twenty two, he had too visited the world of mortal people, which aged him as well. He'd fought with Peter many times, but in fact, the two were once ship mates on the very ship that Hook owned now. Their captain looked down on the two boys Peter and James, proudly. In fact, the two of them were just two ordinary boys who were kidnapped like Wendy, and brought to Neverland to work on the Pirate's ship. But with time, Peter drew away in Pirate life, and left to roam the island free. James Hook however, had became loyal to his captain, prooving that he could run the crew. Now, a twenty year old Hook, sat, alone in his cabin while his crew cheered outside on the deck. When he came out, his crew shouted his name, proud of their mighty captain. Smee, Hook's noble hentchman, approached him, "I'm going out for a bit Smee.." James said, abourding one of the life boats. He rode himself out to the shore, and drug the small paddle boat along the sandy beach. He took in a deep breathe of air, and walked along the coast alone.


message 50: by Natalie (new)

Natalie Rose (natalieerrose) After she had cried herself dry, Wendy stood shakily and started to walk through the forest towards the shore. The branches caught on her skin, leaving small cuts, but she didn't stop. Wendy wanted to get as far away as possible from Peter, and maybe find some way off the island.


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