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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

This is pretty good! Some editing needs to happen, like with capitals and quick stuff like that, but other than that, it's great!


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Charlotte wrote: "“Nope, not really. Took a jog and did some cleaning. Or watched Netflix for five solid hours, depending on what mood you’re in.”

The corners of her mouth curled downward into a frown. “Hilarious.”
"


X'D


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

Hmmm, I think I'm gonna sound like you too:

"I'm Charlotte and I think I'm not gonna write more so that I can make Julane's life miserable... hmm, that sounds about right!"

XD

Lol, JK, but this is really nice, seriously!

Ya know that we are closer in age than you think, right? I'm not gonna say how old I am, but I'm not like a lot different...


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Charlotte wrote: "We're like a year or years right?
I think you're twelve...and I'm turning thirteen early next year...?"


Nope I'm older than that... wait so you're 12?


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Love this, Charlotte! I'm not really into realistic too much, but this is great!


Puddingtalk (Marie) (puddingtalk) I'm officially obsessed with this story...


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

Awesome, more!!!


Puddingtalk (Marie) (puddingtalk) Holy crap!!! Was not expecting that twist, I thought he was running from the police because of drugs.


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

O.o

Wow, you are so amazing! This is a great story!


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

You should update! :)


message 11: by [deleted user] (new)

>:(

Grrrrr.... Haha, just kidding! But really, you should, it's a good story!


message 12: by [deleted user] (last edited May 10, 2015 06:41PM) (new)

*readingreadingreadingreading*

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more. please.

Very good. Much wow. Such more.


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