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Initial Impressions: The Sound and the Fury, by William Faulkner- December 2019
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I probably won’t get to a reread of this book but highly recommend grabbing the book, the audio and a close relationship with Google. Worth the time but a little help from Google helped me have a clearer understanding.

I also read this one a while back, and while I definitely intend to re-read It at some point, December is not the best time for me either. It requires a great deal of concentration and attention, so I'll just follow along. Maybe someone will be able to explain a few things.



I'm excited to read all the comments and follow the discussion. Absalom, Absalom was my first Faulkner book after years of thinking him inaccessible. It turned me into a late life fan, and I will definitely re-read The Sound and the Fury at some point, just not this month.

I can see how my reading preferences have changed. In my youth, the challenge Faulkner is making the reader to overcome would have been embraced, now I guess I am more lazy as a reader in my old age (closing in fast)...

First thoughts/observations -
Shadows appear several times throughout this chapter - Benjy sees shadows (and mirrors) as substantial and real in a way most people do not. Shadows are also one way that he sees and measures his presence in the world: “We went along the fence and came to the garden fence, where our shadows were. My shadow was higher than Luster’s on the fence.” Faulkner, exploring further his Shakespearean title? "Out, out, brief candle! Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player that struts and frets his hour upon the stage and is heard no more. It is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing."
The importance of names? The two Quentins (male/female); the two Jasons; the two Maurys (one renamed Benjamin); the two Caddys (Caddy and the golf course “caddie").
Benjy’s birthday, 33 - Christ’s age at his crucifixion. Many people have observed Faulkner’s use of this age for certain characters in his books. Is Benjy the transformative character, the one who all others are judged by, forgiven by, revealed by? Or is it not so obvious?

Which play did you quote from?



From what I understand, Faulkner suggested that the publisher use different colored inks for each episode that Benjy "speaks" of, so, as the narrative switches back and forth from one episode to the next and then back again, the reader would be able to keep track. There are some clues. Luster is Benjy's caretaker when he's an adult, TP when Benjy is a teenager, and Versh when he's a small child. As it is, nobody is sure how many episodes or events are referenced in the Benjy chapter. I read Jay Parini's biography of Faulkner - he says different scholars have found 7, 15, 11, 13, and 16 different episodes. Even with Faulkner's colored inks, I think the uncertainty about what Benjy is "talking" about is part of the point. Reality is filtered through our perceptions and everybody's narrative is different to some extent, especially when the narratives are from the viewpoints of the Compson brothers - some of the most unreliable narrators in American literature. I don't think we're supposed to know what "really" happened.
One of the episodes, where Quentin Compson is beating up on TP, Caddy's getting married, and the barn isn't there, and then it came, behind them, but Benjy didn't see it at first, and he wasn't crying but he couldn't stop - that one I'm not sure what's going on. I blame it on the sassprilluh.
I don't think Benjy judges or forgives. He just is. I like your thought about him being the medium through which the other characters are revealed. I think we get our best picture of Caddy in the Benjy chapter. He's the distorted mirror that somehow reflects the other characters' true natures.
As for the shadows, they're real to Quentin Compson too.

In the Quentin chapter, he speaks repeatedly of standing "in my shadow," stepping "into the middle of my shadow," and "tramping [it] into the dust." Leaning over a bridge, he even tricks it, so it "would not quit me." And if he had a shadow of the package of flat-irons he bought, he'd be able to drown it.
I was thinking that the shadows here represent Quentin's fascination with death. But the quote you repeat from Shakespeare makes me think that the shadow isn't death, it's life, or at least one's perception of what one's life is, and Quentin - the weight of his obsessions - and the weight of the world he/we live in, is grinding that life into dust.

The life/death aspect of shadows you bring up is really intriguing. Being alive means casting shadows, yet they are typically seen as harbingers of doom/death. Using shadows to tie the immediacy of Benjy's perceptions to the deep obsessiveness of Quentin's thoughts gives me a chill. This whole book keeps reminding me that Faulkner first wanted to be a poet.

Sure. I don't know which is the best of the Faulkner biographies, but I enjoyed reading Jay Parini's.
One Matchless Time: A Life of William Faulkner
If you're white and grew up in Mississippi, and have any sense of humanity ... if you love it you'll also have to hate it. I wouldn't want that burden on my shoulders. But then again, you could say the same thing about being a white American. To steal a phrase: If the South didn't exist, the North would have had to invent it.
I can also recommend a memoir by Will D. Campbell, born of poor white farmers in the Mississippi Hill Country, who also spent his life navigating his humanity and the racism he was raised in. I believe "Brother to a Dragonfly" was one of our monthly discussion books, about two years ago I think. Maybe you've read it. If not, I recommend it highly.
Brother to a Dragonfly

Thanks for the suggestions Randall!

As Randall points out, Quentin is constantly referring to his shadow in this chapter - sometimes overmuch! Is he playing a game with his own being?
This chapter also reminded me of Virginia Woolf’s “Mrs. Dalloway” (1925) - all taking place in a day, marked by the chiming of the hours. Very formally structured and modernist.
Mostly however, I felt sad as Quentin descended ever further into his haunted memories and disturbed behavior. He and Caddy both were trapped by gender roles (she was sexually active, bold and wanted to be a “king,” he was too sensitive for his era, a virgin, not a good fighter). Quentin hated the way men treated women in general (“Did you ever have a sister?”) and Caddy in particular, as when Dalton Ames says to Quentin about her, “if it wasn’t me it would be some other guy.” Quentin is torn about the sister/whore thing - what he feels (tenderness/love) vs. what he’s been taught by the Southern macho culture he’s been reared in.
Not sure what to make of the episode where Quentin walks all over with the little Italian girl who turns out to have a brother who beats Quentin up for leading her on. It parallels his own story with Caddy and Dalton Ames, but what does it reveal or add to our understanding?
So far TSATF is pretty tough stuff. First Faulkner put us into the limited mind of Benjy, now into the disintegrating mind of Quentin. The last few pages of this chapter are especially intense, with a stream of consciousness that is partly a kind of conversation between an “i” and a “he.” These pages deserve another reading, yet they’re so depressing that it’s hard to do.
However, Faulkner’s writing! So great - just one example, taken midway from a two page sentence: “...man who is conceived by accident and whose every breath is a fresh cast with dice already loaded…” Wow.

The last few pages are ... a kind of conversation ...."
That's Quentin and his father.
As you intimate, between Quentin and Caddy, he seems the more "feminine" of the two. (I really like the bit about Caddy always wanting to be the king when the children played make-believe.) Caddy also seems to be the most proactive and balanced of the four siblings, in childhood and even as an adult (though she does have her own problems) and yet, she's the only sibling whose point of view isn't given in the novel through section of her own.
In the appendix Faulkner wrote several years later, he expands on what Quentin "loved" about Caddy, and what Caddy loved about Quentin.
Family! Ya can't live with 'em, and ya can't live without 'em!


Your last comment would have been better placed at the end discussion. Or maybe had a spoiler, that was really a shock to read without it being flagged.

Your last comment would have been better placed at the end discussion. Or maybe had a spoiler, that was really a shock to read without it being flagged."
Sorry Kathryn! Not sure which comment you mean, but I apologize! I'm about half-way through the book, so will post further comments on the "already read" stream.

Wow, that made it so much clearer. Thanks, I think I'm beginning to see through some of the murkiness!

"That's Quentin and his father. I imagine it takes place about the same time he tells his father he committed incest with his sister." I actually stopped reading after that.
I am not getting notifications for each post, I saw you respond thus I thought you wrote this spoiler.
Talking about a critical part of the story is not within the bounds of initial impressions without a spoiler...
Thanks everyone for being mindful of where you post comments regarding stories.

Yeah, that was me. Sorry.
I edited my comment to remove the spoiler.

Faulkner is one of my top three authors; I've read most of his books many times. True, you do have to get used to him--like figuring out the POV sometimes--but there is a vast reward for sticking with him, and when you've worked through a Faulkner novel, you're satisfied. What did you get from Absalom, Absalom!, considered one of the greatest novels of all times? It inspired my first novel and trilogy, but sort of inside out--I'm no Faulkner, nobody is. The Sound and the Fury is a quote from Macbeth when he's surrounded: "{Life] is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, signifying nothing."
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One Matchless Time: A Life of William Faulkner (other topics)Brother to a Dragonfly (other topics)