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message 1: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments Here we are x).


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

Mkay so do you have a plot in mind or nah?


message 3: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments Nah, i'd rather just go with the flow until i think of anything. Unless you have anything good in mind?


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

Mkay then I suppose we should figure out characters then.


message 5: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments Wait, do you want romance? I don't mind.


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

Sure, but I would need at least a basic plot there, so I know how to make her/him


message 7: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments Uhh. Okay. Umm.

How about they meet at a party or a club or something and then the girl is being mugged and the guy swoops in and saves the day xD.


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah but if they are both supernatural. Ugh sorry I'm just super picky.


message 9: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments Lol it's fine. But i can't think of anything. Thats the first idea. I got.


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

Humph oh well we can....oh oh oh.

What if there is the supernatural warlord type deal being that are capturing other supernatural beings for his army. And the girl is a fugitive and the guy saves her when she almost gets recaptured and now they are on the run together?


message 11: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments Thats a great idea! Yes lets do that.


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

Cool could I possibly be the girl? I'm fine with either way though.


message 13: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments It's alright.
Can you post a quick form.

Name: Ezra Smith
Age: 19
Appearance: (i'll post when I get a laptop)
Species: Vampire.


message 14: by [deleted user] (new)

Name: Marley Antoinette
Age: seventeen
Species: Phoenix
Appearance:



message 15: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments What's a pheonix exactly? XD.


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

User with this ability either is or can transform into an phoenix a mythical sacred fire bird, that symbolizes rebirth, immortality, and renewal in the mythologies of the Arabian, Persians, Greeks, Romans, Egyptians, Chinese, Turks, Indians and Phoenicians/Canaanites.

Phoenix are described as a bird with a colorful plumage and a tail of gold and scarlet (or purple, blue, and green according to some legends) with a 500 to 1000 year life-cycle. Near the end of which it builds itself a nest of twigs (or whole trees) that then ignites; both nest and bird burn fiercely and are reduced to ashes, from which a new, young phoenix or phoenix egg arises, reborn anew to live again.


message 17: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments Ohhhhhh


message 18: by [deleted user] (new)

Yeah. Pretty much a very powerful being that tend to be quite hard to control XD


message 19: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments Lol okay.


message 20: by [deleted user] (new)

So shall we start and where do you want to start. Right before they meet up or already met up?


message 21: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments Yeh, right before they meet up. Can you start?


message 22: by [deleted user] (new)

Sure-------


Panting echoed in the alleyway as a girl in white laboratory like garments stood hunched over, trying to catch her breath. She had been running for a couple hours and had hoped that she had lost them, but she heard the sound of a howl, they had caught her scent. She bolted once again, adrenaline pumping the energy her limbs needed for her to be able to even attempt to escape. She had fled from the confides of what most called the brainwashing process. She had set fire to the men who held her and shifted into a phoenix.

She then ran, and man had the followed. It seemed like they wouldn't give up and she knew she wouldn't be able to keep this up for much longer. She glanced behind her to see if they were gaining on her yet, when she turned back around she ran right into someone and bounced off falling onto the ground. She winced and fear sparked in her eyes, thinking he was one of them.


message 23: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments ((Do you want like.. Really long paragraphs or do you not mind anything?))


message 24: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments ((Okay, i'll try long too. But i'm in class so i can't right now xD))


message 25: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments (('Cause i can only make quick comments xD))


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

((you there?))


message 27: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments ((Yeh, Sorry, I just took the laptop now,))

Ezra stumbled back, he'd been undercover there for a while now but never once bumped into a supernatural creature. Finally, he did. A pheonix. He knew because of her blood scent. "Shhh," He leaned down, "I wont hurt you." He wondered if there were more but right now he had to get this one out. Maybe she's the only one. "I'm not one of them."


message 28: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments description
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message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

The girl gazed up at him fearfully. Though when she heard the hounds, she jumped to her feet and hid behind him, pressing herself into his back. She was trembling and within moments three hellhounds were coming at the them, their jaws snapping viciously. Not long after them came their owners the elite force of the warlords army tasked with capturing any and all supernatural being, but they made a mistake that had given her the chance to escape. "Please don't let them take me back." She begged the man who had said that he wouldn't hurt her.


message 30: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments "Damn," He said because he basically blew his cover but he didn't have a choice. He pondered it for a few moments before throwing a bone. He grinned because the hounds were distracted, He put his arm under her knees and and one under her neck. With lightening speed he ran. He reached the door and hit the passcode. Just 2 more doors to go.


message 31: by [deleted user] (new)

"Damn mutts get her." One of the men yelled angrily as they got distracted. The girl watched and before she knew it he was carrying her bridal style. She grabbed his shirt and cuddled into his chest. She had stopped trembling and was curious as to where he was taking her, but didn't complain. In that moment he was saving her life and as he ran she knew he had to be a vampire.


message 32: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments "Sorry, but it's the quickest way," He whispered as he passed the second door. The last door's combination was a bit more complicated, it was the same passcode backwards. He quickly typed it and it was wrong. The room immediately flooded with tear gas and suddenly the door blasted open thanks to the emergency bomb he installed that morning.


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

"It's ok, thank you." She replied. She heard the hounds howling and the cursing of her chasers. "Get that open!" A booming voice was heard and the girl cuddled even closer to him. She grew comfortable in his arms she relaxed a bit and knew for at least now she was safe. At least she thought that until the year gas flooded into the room and slammed her eyes shut and buried her face into his chest to try and evade it, though failed terribly.

And if things seemed to not be able to get worse, the explosion occurred. She yelped and winced as a piece of the metal door got flung into her skin. It hurt so much and tears sprung from her eyes. "W-what happened?" She squeaked.


message 34: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments Over the chaos, Ezra didn't hear her. He ran into the forests surrounding the compound. He ran until he was on the other side where he always left his car. He opened the back door and slid her in, "It's okay. You're safe. Relax, I've outrun them by hours," He closed the door and rounded so he was in the driver's seat.


message 35: by [deleted user] (new)

She clung onto him for dear life as he continued to run. She prayed that he wouldn't drop her and knew that they had evaded capture. As he set her in the back seat she sighed glad that everything was settling. Instead of sitting as she normally would've done, she curled onto her side and closed her eyes. In her thigh was a piece of metal from the door. Her leg had grown quite bloody, but she didn't want to touch it knowing it would just hurt even more.


message 36: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments "This is about an hours drive, please don't die on me," He said quietly as he rushed out of his parking spot and to his house.


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'm not going to die and even if I do I'll just turn to ashes and then regenerate about an hour later." She snapped indignantly. "Thanks again." She then added more gently. She really was grateful for him doing this. She stayed curled up on the back seat and sighed at the comfort she felt.


message 38: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments He raised his eyebrows and though okayyyyy...


message 39: by [deleted user] (new)

"I'm a Phoenix it's just something do, ash resurrection." She explained though figure he knew that already. "What was the whole tear gas and explosion deal thing?" She then asked changing the subject.


message 40: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments "I know what a Pheonix does," He said, staring at the road, "I'll explain tomorrow, get some rest."


message 41: by [deleted user] (new)

"Well you made it seem like I was crazy or something." She replied and rested and against the seat. "Okay." She murmured and eventually as her eyes closed she couldn't open them again and fell into a slumber.


message 42: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments About an hour and 5 minutes later, they got to his house. He turned the engine off and went to where she slept. He picked her up like he did before and took her inside.


message 43: by [deleted user] (new)

The young girl continued to sleep soundlessly. She snuggled into his chest again, as he picked her up. She wasn't very heavy or big for that matter. She had quite a petite figure, yet was well proportionate as well. The garments she had on, hung loose against her body and didn't fit well at all. Her right pant leg was doused in scarlet liquid, causing the formerly white fabric to cling to her skin.


message 44: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments He didn't turn on the lights, afraid she'd wake up. It didn't really matter since vampires see better in the dark. He took her up to the spare room and placed her on the bed as gently as he could, as not to wake her.


message 45: by [deleted user] (new)

She felt the bed beneath her and at first looked confused before curling onto her side. She woke up as she bumped her injury causing pain to through her leg. She woke up and immediately put pressure on her leg as she cursed under her breath about how it hurt.

"Do you have any way of removing this? It hurts so much, plus I don't think it's good to keep a piece of metal lodge in my leg." She asked.


message 46: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments "Holy F.. I was so fixated on getting you out, I hadn't realised." He shook his head, "I'll have to call my brother, just don't touch the wound and lay on your back."


message 47: by [deleted user] (new)

She nodded slowly and bit her lip eventually feeling blood on her tongue. She had forgotten that he was a vampire and so she really was too worried about the blood. Heck he wasn't going too crazy with her leg so. Why should she worry about her lip. She relaxed as much as she could and laid back closing her eyes. The blood that welled from her lip, crept out from the corner of her mouth.


message 48: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments He took a tissue and wiped the blood when he came back, "He's on his way." He smiled at her. "In the mean time let's take your mind off it. Whats your name?"


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

She opened her eyes when the tissue was on her lip. She gazed up at him and smiled softly, though her brow furrowed when he asked her what her name was. They had been in the middle of the brain wiping process when she escaped and so some things were still fuzzy, like what her name was. "I-it's....I'm pretty sure it's Mary Ann." She replied uncertainly. In reality her name was Marley Antoinette, but that information was no longer in her mind at least in that moment it wasn't.


message 50: by Eden (new)

Eden Kabeer (edenk) | 47001 comments "Pretty sure?" He asked, confused, "you don't know your name?" He dabbed her lip once more.


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