Action/Adventure Aficionados discussion

I am blog-serializing my mystery/action novel Return of the Falcon a new chapter every few days—until this is all over— for all GoodReads "quarantinies" to read.

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I like it! Especially how you've written in the style of mid-20th century detective story's. Slight criticism in that I think you explain matters in greater depth than needed, most notably in how Joe came to know Stragler. I thought the account of how that happened just took up space without adding to the story. A couple of sentences saying Joe once helped him with a fake insurance claim would have done, but maybe I'm being picky. I look forward to the next instalment.

John wrote: "I like it! Especially how you've written in the style of mid-20th century detective story's. Slight criticism in that I think you explain matters in greater depth than needed, most notably in how J..."

I'm glad you like Return of the Falcon .

I have five chapters posted so far on the blog. You can access any chapter from the "Contents" link which appears at the end of each chapter or you could go directly to the "Contents." Here is a LINK.

My intent with extra details when introducing "Strugala" was to show the relationship he has with the protagonist, which plays out later in the story.