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message 1: by Arlu (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments Hello, I'm new in writing and I'm in need of feedbacks to improve my work. My very first and currently working project is a paranormal gay romance/thriller novel. I have written my first chapter in Coursera, so if you please give me some honest feedbacks in there. It would really mean the world to me. Thank you so much.

https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...

If you want to, I could just paste here my chapter 1.


message 2: by Liavali (new)

Liavali | 237 comments Hi, I have left you a review, please review my chapter 1 on coursera

https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...


message 3: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 619 comments I reviewed it!


message 4: by Arlu (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments Liavali wrote: "Hi, I have left you a review, please review my chapter 1 on coursera

https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-..."


Hello, I've reviewed your chapter 1 in Coursera.


message 5: by Arlu (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments Andres wrote: "I reviewed it!"

Thank you.


message 6: by Arlu (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments Hi, I've finished my Chapter 2 pitch. If you have time, could you give a review? It would help a lot. Thank you and have a great day.

https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...


message 7: by Andres, Thaumaturge (new)

Andres Rodriguez (aroddamonster) | 619 comments I reviewed it!


message 8: by Arlu (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments thank you, the suggestion was really helpful.


message 9: by Arlu (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments Hello,
I've posted my Chapter 2 on Coursera, barely made it, yey! If you're free, could you give it a review? It will help a lot. Thank you and happy reading!

https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...


message 10: by Liavali (new)

Liavali | 237 comments Hi Arlu, have left review already, hope it is helpful. Looking good the story, how is your next chapter going? Curious as to what happens!!


message 11: by Arlu (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments Aliana wrote: "Arlu wrote: "Hello,
I've posted my Chapter 2 on Coursera, barely made it, yey! If you're free, could you give it a review? It will help a lot. Thank you and happy reading!

https://www.coursera.org..."


Hi, I submitted a review. Hopefully, it was helpful.


message 12: by Arlu (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments Liavali wrote: "Hi Arlu, have left review already, hope it is helpful. Looking good the story, how is your next chapter going? Curious as to what happens!!"

Hi Liavali, thank you for the review, again. I'm glad that you're excited about it. But I haven't started writing Chapter 3 yet, still outlining it. Hopefully, I could start writing and finish it by the end of this week.


message 13: by Arlu (last edited Sep 17, 2020 10:34AM) (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments Hello, finally Chapter 3 is done! Writing this chapter was such a pain; dragged me for two weeks (and it's not even that long), but it's done! Thankfully!

https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...

Please give it a review if you have time. Thank you and hope you enjoy reading it!


message 14: by Arlu (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments Hey, cranked up my words and voila! Chapter 4 is done! Please give it an honest review, it'll help me grow. Thank you and as always, happy reading!

https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...


message 15: by Arlu (last edited Oct 12, 2020 12:24PM) (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments Coursera Chapter 5: https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...

Google Drive Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1wNl3...

Man, what a struggle this chapter was, been rewriting this chapter over and over again (cuz the scenes don't feel right) but FINALLY I got it done! Please give it an honest review, it will help a lot (specially on my depression). Thank you and happy reading!


message 16: by Arlu (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments Coursera Chapter 6: https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...

Google Drive Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1V0Bm...

Please give it an honest review, thank you and happy reading!


message 17: by Liavali (new)

Liavali | 237 comments Hi Arlu, I have left a review on coursera on your chapter 6.

Well done, keep going the story is coming along very well.


message 18: by Arlu (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments Thanks Liavali! You're reviews are always on point, I honestly miss them. Haha!

Hope you have a fast recovery!


message 19: by Liavali (new)

Liavali | 237 comments Just reviewed chapter 5 also.

Recovery is slow but it is moving in the right direction at least!!


message 20: by Arlu (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments My first update after the hiatus and I'm anxious!

Chapter 7: https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...


message 21: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (rwicks) | 66 comments Arlu wrote: "Hi, I've finished my Chapter 2 pitch. If you have time, could you give a review? It would help a lot. Thank you and have a great day.

https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-......"

did it!


message 22: by Rachel (new)

Rachel (rwicks) | 66 comments Arlu wrote: "My first update after the hiatus and I'm anxious!

Chapter 7: https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-..."


Just reviewed.


message 23: by Arlu (new)

Arlu Bautista | 90 comments Hello guys.

I have deleted my previous account in Coursera (months ago) and (recently) made a new one, so the for those that made their feedback on the chapters posted in this channel, I haven't read them and I'm truly sorry for that.

Anyway, I've posted my editted/rewritten chapters in Coursera. Feel free to review them (and post your chapters too, I'll try to return the favor). Happy reading!

Chapter 1
https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...

Chapter 2
https://www.coursera.org/learn/write-...


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