Goodreads Authors/Readers discussion

Dear All
I am a first time author. seek a review of my first book. Commoner's Anecdotes. Book is available globally on amazon. as well as ebook version on Kindle, Kobo, ibooks and play store.
thanks in advance
warm regards,
aman

Hi Aman, I hope you’re well. I too am a first time author and we’re a similar age (I was born in July 1980). I read a free sample, which covered the first 5 stories. A couple of minor issues first. Obviously, English isn’t your first language, although you write very well, but some of the words or phrases you use are a little obscure, but forgivable, as are the minor grammar errors. One paragraph was repeated though so be mindful of your editing. Your book is a bit pricey though, so it may be a good idea to look at that again. Overall, I liked it. Your writing style is warm, relatable, and made me think of similar incidents in my own life.