Hi, I'm looking for a few people to give me some honest feedback on a sci-fi I wrote in the last lockdown. It is technically already published on wattpad but only because I used that as a medium to share it with my equally bored friends in 2020. I'm looking to send it to a publisher by the end of 2022. It's a YA (or on the cusp of being) dystopian sci-fi. Here is the blurb: Mission parameters: Future reconnaissance and technological recovery. Vehicle designation: Imperisky. The year is 2264 and Samantha Gospel has reluctantly received the orders she had always known were coming. She was a legacy, a member of the highest-ranking military family in the commonwealth. A mission to steal and destroy was always in her path. But when her ship gets knocked drastically off course, an act of sabotage threatens to unravel her whole existence. Responsible for her crew she has to decide whether to act and risk her crew or protect everyone from 'blasphemy' and let corruption rule. Not to mention keeping her best friend, her ex-lover, and her infuriating (if good-looking) CMO from going AWOL.
I'm just looking for some honest feedback because right now the only people who have read it are my friends and they are too nice to be helpful. If it interests you let me know! Thanks,
I'm looking for a few people to give me some honest feedback on a sci-fi I wrote in the last lockdown. It is technically already published on wattpad but only because I used that as a medium to share it with my equally bored friends in 2020. I'm looking to send it to a publisher by the end of 2022.
It's a YA (or on the cusp of being) dystopian sci-fi. Here is the blurb:
Mission parameters: Future reconnaissance and technological recovery.
Vehicle designation: Imperisky.
The year is 2264 and Samantha Gospel has reluctantly received the orders she had always known were coming. She was a legacy, a member of the highest-ranking military family in the commonwealth. A mission to steal and destroy was always in her path.
But when her ship gets knocked drastically off course, an act of sabotage threatens to unravel her whole existence. Responsible for her crew she has to decide whether to act and risk her crew or protect everyone from 'blasphemy' and let corruption rule.
Not to mention keeping her best friend, her ex-lover, and her infuriating (if good-looking) CMO from going AWOL.
I'm just looking for some honest feedback because right now the only people who have read it are my friends and they are too nice to be helpful.
If it interests you let me know!
Thanks,