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message 51: by [deleted user] (new)

The clock is ticking
The dark is coming
how can nobody but me see
the horror that lies within the darkness
see all the faces that come out at night
how can nobody but me hear all the voices
screaming and mumbling
what happens if I close my eyes?
what happens if I open them again?
what will I see? Who will be standing behind
me, waiting to kill?

I don't want to know
so I stay awake

I feel the fear rising in me
as my eyes begin to close of their own accord
I won't be able to fight the demons
as they come for me. I'm weak
and only weaker still as the hours crawl by
the voices keep whispering, warning that
these monsters wait underneath my bed
if I fall asleep, I will never wake again.

"We must stay awake to stay alive.
Never sleep, never die."


message 52: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Woah. The last one you posted gave me chills. Ah-mazing!


message 53: by [deleted user] (new)

Sorarin?! Bunny????

Sora???

SORA?!

:'o


message 54: by Kamiko (new)

Kamiko (kamiko1108) | 1125 comments SHE'S DELETED

NOOOOOOO


message 55: by [deleted user] (new)

:(


message 56: by Sorarin (new)

Sorarin | 569 comments Eммelιɴe wrote: "Woah. The last one you posted gave me chills. Ah-mazing!"

Thank you Emmeline.


message 57: by em_panada (new)

em_panada SORAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU'RE BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


*A THOUSAND HUGS*


message 58: by Sorarin (new)

Sorarin | 569 comments Goodness.
e.e

I just needed a serious delete-everything-and-run break.


message 59: by em_panada (new)

em_panada Sora wrote: "Goodness.
e.e

I just needed a serious delete-everything-and-run break."


XD - but, it's still nice to have you back!


message 60: by [deleted user] (new)

Sora, glad you're back!


message 61: by Sorarin (last edited Apr 02, 2015 09:25AM) (new)

Sorarin | 569 comments "Why can we never go back to bed?
Whose is this voice ringing in my head,
Where is the sense in these desperate dreams?
Why should wake when I'm half past dead?



message 62: by Sorarin (new)

Sorarin | 569 comments i'm not crazy, i know what i saw,

he had the pages of my diary pinned to the wall.

he said her momma don't listen, she's sick of her life,
we'll give her something good to help her sleep at night.

so they wrote me a record, you know to help with the pain,
i let the medication off my ears into my brain

i learned to mirror my life with the lyrics you write.

how'd you get in my head? how'd you know what it's like?
you made it seem so attractive that i wanted to be,

hell i wanted to be you, i wanted to feel it.

i put the songs on repeat and im eating up what you're feeding me

i play along to the beat and im in the world that you're keeping me

STOP
and make me put up a fight, like you know i'm alright being whatever you like.

you know what it's like right? tell me you understand? if you're crazy and you know it

Come on and clap your hands


AlistairBookEater Mellifluous


message 64: by Sorarin (new)

Sorarin | 569 comments 1) no clue what that means

2) didn't feel well when posting that so don't take it seriously

3) it makes me nervous, you being in this thread. You're a frickin celebrity. :o


AlistairBookEater Silly SoraBunny :P

I like how this poem musically flows


message 66: by [deleted user] (new)

O.O

She is? Could I have a typed autograph?


message 67: by [deleted user] (new)

Sorarin? Do you have any more poetry? You haven't post for a while, I miss your poetry... :)


message 68: by Sorarin (new)

Sorarin | 569 comments Julane wrote: "Sorarin? Do you have any more poetry? You haven't post for a while, I miss your poetry... :)"

I have much poetry. I am wary to post it because it is bad (a word which here means "sad, disturbing, and rather upsetting") enough to make me never want to see it again. So what would it do to the children? ...


message 69: by [deleted user] (new)

.o.

I doubt it is bad!!!!!!!!!! I love your poetry. Unless, of course, you mean explicit. I usually attempt to avoid those... But please post!!!!!! If you can, please?


message 70: by Sorarin (new)

Sorarin | 569 comments Sad, disturbing, and rather upsetting. Very upsetting. It's okay, Julane, have a biscuit.


message 71: by Sorarin (new)

Sorarin | 569 comments It Is about my shithead of a therapist. And my mother. And my ex. And it hurts. I wasn't well when I wrote that, okay.


message 72: by Sorarin (new)

Sorarin | 569 comments MmmmmmmmmmmmmokAY


message 73: by Sorarin (new)

Sorarin | 569 comments I am your mother now.


message 74: by [deleted user] (new)

XD


message 75: by Sorarin (new)

Sorarin | 569 comments Blue eyes empty to all


message 76: by Sorarin (new)

Sorarin | 569 comments Sorarin wrote: "Blue eyes empty to all"

I wonder what i was thinking when i wrote this...


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