Sci-Fi, fantasy and speculative Indie Authors Review discussion

Okay, I am starting to like this process. I have now had a successful beta swap and I loved the process. I would like to do more. Here is what I can do.

I can read and tell you what I think about the story, flow, character development etc... I am still learning all the ticky tack grammar rules.


My book is 90k words about a con artist that can read minds. I am looking for a readers perspective. Does the book flow well? Are there places the story stalls? Are the characters developed enough to make you want to know them? Those types of questions.