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message 1: by Abdul (new)

Jul 02, 2023 07:47AM

I need feedback on the first chapter (2K) words of a middle grade kids book about a pair of twins who win a scholarship to the most luxurious school in the world and solve mysteries.
Txs

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message 2: by Jan (new)

Jul 03, 2023 10:40AM

will take a look with pleasure. Used to teach middle grade.

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message 3: by Abdul (new)

Jul 03, 2023 07:20PM

Paige wrote: "Hello Abdul!

I would be interested in giving you some feedback on your first chapter.

Send it in .PDF format if possible to [email protected]"
Sent! Thank you so much!

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