taylor swift songs and reading at centennial park <3 discussion

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message 1: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
one line at a time with a ABCB rhyme scheme


I'LL START

yuh....yuh yuh yuh
girl you played me like a drum
cant believe i trusted u
i even bought you gum


message 2: by gabby ୨୧, for a moment, i was heavenstruck (new)

gabby ୨୧ (g4bby_8) | 4493 comments Mod
can’t believe i gave you my gum
yuh yuh yuh
you even said yum (yum, yum, yum)


message 3: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
thought i could see us
through the smoking mirrors
but you spat mud in my face
and now i'll never see clearer yuh yuh


message 4: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
we are the next ai ghost writers lol


message 5: by James (new)

James | 33 comments Playas tryna tell me
That it’s just some gum
But it was my last piece, girl
You take and give back none
Ay ayyyy


message 6: by James (new)

James | 33 comments (Take and give back none, I hate mobile GoodReads 💀)


message 7: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
you chewed it up and spit it out
just like you did my heart
you must be friends with Jeffery dhamer
cause i cant tell yo smiles apart yuh yuh


message 8: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
Mango wrote: "bled me dry so fast
girl i was giving you the most
switching up like traffic lights
now you up and left, a ghost
YUHYUH"


OKAYYYYYYYYYYYYY


message 9: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
YOU THOUGHT THAT YOU COULD PLAY ME
BITCH YOU ONLY PLAYED YOURSELF
YOU THREW ME DOWN THINKING IM NOTHING
WHEN I PUT YOU ON MY HIGHEST SHELF
YOU MIGHTVE SAT UP ON YOUR PEDASTOOL
BUT NOW IM HERE TO KNOCK YOU DOWN
YOU ONCE SAID IM PRETTY AS THE OCEAN WAVES
BUT NOW IM HERE TO WATCH YOU DROWN

that one was for you gabby


message 10: by gabby ୨୧, for a moment, i was heavenstruck (new)

gabby ୨୧ (g4bby_8) | 4493 comments Mod
it's pedestal....
LMAOFOAOA


message 11: by gabby ୨୧, for a moment, i was heavenstruck (new)

gabby ୨୧ (g4bby_8) | 4493 comments Mod
OKAY BUT THE "you once said i'm as pretty as the ocean waves, but now i'm here to watch you drown" SLAPS.


message 12: by gabby ୨୧, for a moment, i was heavenstruck (new)

gabby ୨୧ (g4bby_8) | 4493 comments Mod
yo he better watch out fr y'all are ANGRY


message 13: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
CAUSE YOU TOLD ME TO GROW UP
WELL BABE IM SLOWLY GETTING BIGGER
THE OCEANS OLD AS FUCK
BUT SHE'LL STILL DROWN YOUR ASS WITH VIGOR


message 14: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
damn that felt good


message 15: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
gabby (taylor's version) ♥ wrote: "yo he better watch out fr y'all are ANGRY"

YEAH I AM


message 16: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
gabby (taylor's version) ♥ wrote: "it's pedestal....
LMAOFOAOA"


damn i blame my concussion as im doing for all my mistakes rn


message 17: by gabby ୨୧, for a moment, i was heavenstruck (new)

gabby ୨୧ (g4bby_8) | 4493 comments Mod
GIRL IT'S OK I SHOULD BE THE ONE WRITING ANGRY LOVE POEMS, NOT YOU-


message 18: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
gabby (taylor's version) ♥ wrote: "GIRL IT'S OK I SHOULD BE THE ONE WRITING ANGRY LOVE POEMS, NOT YOU-"

im doing it for you bc u havent fully entered the revenge era yet but dw i'll be waiting when you do


message 19: by gabby ୨୧, for a moment, i was heavenstruck (new)

gabby ୨୧ (g4bby_8) | 4493 comments Mod
LOL


message 20: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
Mango wrote: "ZAYDA ALWAYS HAS BARSSSSS
i can’t angry write when im not angry 🤧🤧"


SAME but im angry af rn


message 21: by Katelyn (old soul country girl's version) (last edited Nov 02, 2023 01:23PM) (new)

Katelyn (old soul country girl's version) Honestly wheezing while reading this, the yuh yuhs get me every time! 😂😂


message 22: by mona ♡ (wishbone edition), if you ever think you got it wrong i'm right where you left me (new)

mona ♡ (wishbone edition) (mona_tv) | 9828 comments Mod
gabby (taylor's version) ♥ wrote: "OKAY BUT THE "you once said i'm as pretty as the ocean waves, but now i'm here to watch you drown" SLAPS."

fr omg


message 23: by mona ♡ (wishbone edition), if you ever think you got it wrong i'm right where you left me (new)

mona ♡ (wishbone edition) (mona_tv) | 9828 comments Mod
zayda spitting straight fire omg


message 24: by mona ♡ (wishbone edition), if you ever think you got it wrong i'm right where you left me (new)

mona ♡ (wishbone edition) (mona_tv) | 9828 comments Mod
Mango wrote: "zayda we’re gonna start a go fund me to get you DRIPPED OUT
then we’re gonna film an mv and go viral

YUHYUH"


YES I LOVE THAT IDEA


message 25: by gabby ୨୧, for a moment, i was heavenstruck (new)

gabby ୨୧ (g4bby_8) | 4493 comments Mod
YES SERIOUSLY LMAO


message 26: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
Mango wrote: "zayda we’re gonna start a go fund me to get you DRIPPED OUT
then we’re gonna film an mv and go viral

YUHYUH"


A GO FUND ME IM DEAD 😂


message 27: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
Mango wrote: "zayda we’re gonna start a go fund me to get you DRIPPED OUT
then we’re gonna film an mv and go viral

YUHYUH"


i mean like 21 savage could never fr-- (im jk guys dw)


message 28: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
Mango wrote: "21 WHO???
we gotta get you a drake feature"


MAN I COULDVE SLAYED IN FOR ALL THE DOGS


message 29: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
what would my rapper name be tho


message 30: by allie (new)

allie | 80 comments .*zayda*. wrote: "what would my rapper name be tho"

zaydog


message 31: by gabby ୨୧, for a moment, i was heavenstruck (new)

gabby ୨୧ (g4bby_8) | 4493 comments Mod
ALLISON I WAS LITERALLY ABOUT TO TYPE THAT
except maybe z dawg?
zay dawg?
zayder dawg?
zaydawgerson?


message 32: by allie (new)

allie | 80 comments z dawg omg yes


message 33: by gabby ୨୧, for a moment, i was heavenstruck (new)

gabby ୨୧ (g4bby_8) | 4493 comments Mod
HAHAHA


message 34: by [deleted user] (new)

we all be vibin and and y'all haters just be TRYIN


message 35: by allie (new)

allie | 80 comments

z dawg + crew - gum


yuh....yuh yuh yuh
girl you played me like a drum
cant believe i trusted u
i even bought you gum
got me feeling like i’m dumb
YUHHH
all you ever did was lie
got you messing with my mind
now all i ever do is cry
and try to figure out why
YUH
can’t believe i gave you my gum
yuh yuh yuh
you even said yum (yum, yum, yum)
thought i could see us
through the smoking mirrors
but you spat mud in my face
and now i'll never see clearer yuh yuh
Playas tryna tell me
That it’s just some gum
But it was my last piece, girl
You take and give back none
Ay ayyyy
you chewed it up and spit it out
just like you did my heart
you must be friends with Jeffery dhamer
cause i cant tell yo smiles apart yuh yuh
bled me dry so fast
girl i was giving you the most
switching up like traffic lights
now you up and left, a ghost
YUHYUH
YOU THOUGHT THAT YOU COULD PLAY ME
BITCH YOU ONLY PLAYED YOURSELF
YOU THREW ME DOWN THINKING IM NOTHING
WHEN I PUT YOU ON MY HIGHEST SHELF
YOU MIGHTVE SAT UP ON YOUR PEDASTOOL
BUT NOW IM HERE TO KNOCK YOU DOWN
YOU ONCE SAID IM PRETTY AS THE OCEAN WAVES
BUT NOW IM HERE TO WATCH YOU DROWN
CAUSE YOU TOLD ME TO GROW UP
WELL BABE IM SLOWLY GETTING BIGGER
THE OCEANS OLD AS FUCK
BUT SHE'LL STILL DROWN YOUR ASS WITH VIGOR
we all be vibin and and y'all haters just be TRYIN




message 36: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
allison (oaken's version) wrote: "
z dawg + crew - gum




yuh....yuh yuh yuh
girl you played me like a drum
cant believe i trusted u
i even bought you gum
got me feeling like i’m dumb
YUHHH
all you ever did was lie
got y..."


DAYUMMMMMM BUT LIKE FUCK ME IF THAT DOESNT SLAY SO HARD AND THAT LAST LINE??!! DAYUMMMMMMMMMMMMM


message 37: by allie (new)

allie | 80 comments it slaps frfr


message 38: by mona ♡ (wishbone edition), if you ever think you got it wrong i'm right where you left me (new)

mona ♡ (wishbone edition) (mona_tv) | 9828 comments Mod
DAMN LIKE THAT SLAPSSSS Y'ALL


message 39: by mona ♡ (wishbone edition), if you ever think you got it wrong i'm right where you left me (new)

mona ♡ (wishbone edition) (mona_tv) | 9828 comments Mod
z dawg + crew really needs to take the show on the road dayum


message 40: by allie (new)

allie | 80 comments faxx
i'd buy those tickets so fast
and i don't even like rap


message 41: by mona ♡ (wishbone edition), if you ever think you got it wrong i'm right where you left me (new)

mona ♡ (wishbone edition) (mona_tv) | 9828 comments Mod
sameeee omg


message 42: by kai ✫꩜ (new)

kai ✫꩜  | 2344 comments b!tch looks like a rat
but im so desperate
id still hit that

my cash stacks stay fat
but my patience thin
this better be a hit
man f#ck the charts
im breaking in

and entering
b and e
this ain't tv
check yourself
its reality

(get it bc some people call it 'breaking into the charts' or whatever when a song starts at the bottom of the charts and starts to move up and b&e standings for breaking and entering and the tv line w/ the reality line, reality tv, yk?)

sorry yall idk what tf i just wrote i just came up w sh!t that rhymes😭


message 43: by mona ♡ (wishbone edition), if you ever think you got it wrong i'm right where you left me (new)

mona ♡ (wishbone edition) (mona_tv) | 9828 comments Mod
kai (will and jem's version). ✫・。. wrote: "b!tch looks like a rat
but im so desperate
id still hit that

my cash stacks stay fat
but my patience thin
this better be a hit
man f#ck the charts
im breaking in

and entering
b and e
this ai..."


ok but you actually ate that omg


message 44: by kai ✫꩜ (new)

kai ✫꩜  | 2344 comments thanks pookie 😘


message 45: by mona ♡ (wishbone edition), if you ever think you got it wrong i'm right where you left me (new)

mona ♡ (wishbone edition) (mona_tv) | 9828 comments Mod
of course babes 😘


message 46: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
WAIT BUT FACTS SHE ATE SO HARD WTF THAT WAS AWESOME


message 47: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
i copy pasted it in my notes just in case i ever get in a pickup rap battle


message 48: by modeziree. (new)

modeziree. (wheredowegonow) STAWPPP CAUSE WHY IS THIS SUCH A BOP


message 49: by [deleted user] (new)

YESSSSSS


message 50: by .*zayda*., i know my love should be celebrated but you tolerate it (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 4672 comments Mod
its the next billboard #1 hit


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