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message 1: by [deleted user] (new)

rules:
~ if two ppl comment at the same time I will delete the persons whose comment came after! don’t worry it’s not anything personal I just don’t want it getting too messy!
~ dirty language or inappropriate talk is not allowed and will be deleted!
~ try to be creative!! make a fun story!!
~ please try not to make your comment too long or tmi

i’ll start:
it was a gloomy november day, and pearl and her brother david were going on a walk


message 2: by modeziree. (new)

modeziree. (wheredowegonow) then pearl's aunt cassandra came running up to her and david


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

and cassandra tripped while running and broke her nose


message 4: by Melli (new)

Melli Herondale (readingwithmelli) | 6 comments David laughed at her and her aunt started screaming


message 5: by khashya♛ (new)

 khashya♛ pearl freaked out and rushed at her aunt cassandra


message 6: by Liz (HIATUS) (new)

Liz (HIATUS) She didn't know what to do. She didn't have her phone and people were starting to crowd around them making her anxious


Deb ~I promise that I'll love you for the rest of my life~ her breathing picked up as she hid her face in her aunts shirt


message 8: by Jola (last edited Nov 20, 2023 01:35PM) (new)

Jola | 8 comments but then she realised: the worls was spinning. not just from the dread that had crept up pearls spine but the actual world seemed to be spinning all of the sudden.


♡♥︎Maymoona♥︎♡୨ৎ | 11 comments she didn't know what to do and started running in circle while pulling he hair


message 10: by khashya♛ (new)

 khashya♛ "DAVID" she screamed, shaking her brothers shoulders "WHY ARE YOU LA-"
she opened her eyes and screamed


message 11: by Alea (last edited Nov 25, 2023 04:17AM) (new)

Alea M (monarchquirrel) Khashya wrote: ""DAVID" she screamed, shaking her brothers shoulders "WHY ARE YOU LA-"
she opened her eyes and screamed"


her brother's eyes didn't match the laughter that filled the air. They had turned what was seemingly bottomless grey. The bleak colour of ash now filled the sockets had held the warm hazel pupils that matched her own.
Something was very wrong


message 12: by lulu ☆ (new)

lulu ☆ (lulureads_) | 1 comments Mod
pearl was panicking like crazy, and then david fell down and didnt seem to be breathing. the world was spinning so fast, she saw people taking pictures, and thats the last she remembered then the world went black


message 13: by khashya♛ (new)

 khashya♛ She woke up to flickering lights and murmurs.
"DAVID, AUNT CASSANDRA"


message 14: by charlie (new)

charlie | 34 comments Pearl screamed. Then she quieted.She was in some sort of storage room. Foot steps came from in the hallway. "Is she in there?" A familiar voice muttered. It wasn't David's or aunt Cassandra's


hilary (Taylor’s version) | 15 comments “Where am I?” Though Pearl, wearily


message 16: by charlie (new)

charlie | 34 comments "Quite! She might be awake." Said the anther voice in the hallway. The door handle moved and Pearl immediately faked sleeping.


hilary (Taylor’s version) | 15 comments Then she heard footsteps coming toward where she was


message 18: by brithebusybee (new)

brithebusybee | 15 comments The door opened and two people walked in. "You're such an idiot, Wilson." A feminine voice said. "Well what was I supposed to do? Leave her on the street?" A country drawl surprised pearl in the big city. "Yes, obviously." Clipped British, pearl noted.


message 19: by kaylin ౨ৎ (new)

kaylin ౨ৎ pearl didn’t recognize the name Wilson.


message 20: by lillie ᥫ᭡ (new)

lillie ᥫ᭡ (ihymuyd) pearl is stuck on the name Wilson. who is Wilson ? why is here.


message 21: by rae (last edited Mar 22, 2024 09:37AM) (new)

rae Who is Wilson, and why do I recognize her voice?
Pearl thought.
A memory flew at her from her mind's murky archives.
Wilson was my mother's maiden name. That's her sister. Aunt Claire.


message 22: by ray (new)

ray  | 5 comments She vividly tried to remember her aunt but found no recent memories of her. Then it dawned on her that she had supposedly died of a stroke last year.


message 23: by kinley (last edited May 08, 2024 01:16PM) (new)

kinley (kinleysarchive) pearl thought, are they after aunt cassandra? because why would her sister, aunt claire be supossedly 'kidnapping' her?


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