Titles suck. I'm not playing this game right now. discussion

Characters awaiting approval. I'll basically just spell-/format-check and then we'll put them in The Treasure Box. (Delete characters from here once they've been moved.)

Clary :: Female



Height: 5'7"
Weight: 123 lbs
Build: Slender but muscular
Hair: Brown
Eyes: Brown
Skin: White; slightly tanned
Vocal: Quiet; thoughtful

「Updates」

Please embed the image and the first part of the template is missing. Also looks like you didn't finish Vocal...? I've got a couple of more comments but they can wait.

Okay

Two blank lines between the name/gender line and the embedded picture, please.

Height: "

Skin: Only "White" should be capitalized.

Vocal: Delete "and" and replace with semi-colon.

How's that?

Very close. The top line should match the formatting of these characters.

There.

Cool, she's set. :)

Okay thank you!

Sure thing.

Just be sure to add her to the treasure box and read the gameplay and everything before you open a scene.