hopeless romantic society discussion
Writing advice pt 2
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Mickenzie
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May 23, 2024 03:55PM

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In this case what was character a's motivation to kill character b's best friend and found family? Maybe you could use that in the reasoning for character b to be a little less devastated. I still feel that character a would need to do quite a bit to be accepted by character b again. Mostly because character b must feel really betrayed and seeing character a while knowing what they did is not fun for character b. (I don't think it should be easy for character a.)
Now for character a being the light in the darkness for character b. To be honest this can still be there in a corner tucked away. It doesn't need to be gone. As long as it's not easy for character a to come back in. It can't hurt to make character b despise character a.
Also if character b trusted charater a alot or quite a bit. This would most definetly be gone. Maybe character b even fears character a. They might think character a was planning to murder them too??
That's kind of what i'd think the change in dynamic would be. I hope it anwsers you question. :)