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Dark Equinox (Book 1 of the Iona Kyle Series)
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message 1: by Ian (new)

Ian Jarvis | 17 comments Hello there
I'd like to invite all fans of urban fantasy, paranormal, and supernatural thrillers to take a look at my website and let me know what they think
www.ianjarviswriter.com
I've gone for a dark atmosphere, and there are many photographs of the British locations used for scenes in my books. Please check it out and give me your opinion.
I have two novels on the site at the moment, sold in ebook and paperback through Amazon and other online book stores, with a third being released very shortly. Although many people have read them, I have very little in the way of feedback so far and I'd really like some reviews, short or lengthy from fellow group members.
Looking forward to hearing from you, take care and thanks for reading
Ian


message 2: by Mark (new)

Mark Henwick | 21 comments Nicely dark atmosphere to the site and very good work done on the covers of the existing books. Good consistency of imagery apart from background noted below. Succinct text, but I'd have explained why Crowley is there.

I don't like the Crowley backgrounds. I understand the Crowley family is worked into the story, but I didn't like the scrolling face. It didn't add anything for me. Just my opinion.


message 3: by Ian (new)

Ian Jarvis | 17 comments Hello and a big thank you for your time and comments Mark. I take any input on board and I'll look into the scrolling background. Crowley plays a large part in the novels, despite his not actually being present for much of them, but my problem has always been how to not give away too much information, as this would be a real spoiler for readers.
Take care and all the best
Ian


message 4: by Ian (new)

Ian Jarvis | 17 comments I took your advice, Mark, and changed the scrolling background with Crowley's face. I think it looks better now with just occult symbols


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