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i know a few people who also really didn’t like ouabh and found both jacks and evangeline quite annoying


i mean, it's ok not to like ouabh, everyone is entitled to their own opinion ofc, but i LOVE evangeline and jacks and the plot. part of why i love evangeline is that, unlike a lot of fmcs, she's not a pick-me and she's very girly. she can be brave, escape death, and be adventurous while still owning her identity and holding on to her love of true love and fairy tales (her innocence). she's very real, at least for me. HOWEVER, i do think you should've read caraval first. idk how i would've enjoyed ouabh without caraval, it's very necessary if you want to understand the characters, their motives, and the type of world they're in.

i think reading the caraval trilogy first is the smartest move, cause it introduces you to the universe and also shows you how the characters are. Specifically, i think it’s in Legendary when Jacks is introduced, and therefore, when you get to once upon a broken heart the nicknames and “flirtatious” behavior doesn’t seem so cringy.
also, once upon a broken heart it’s an good book, but the great one is the ballad of never after
tell us if u decide to keep reading ♡

before that... you've to deal with it. please don't DNF it. it's worth reading till the end.



i was also confused for about 99% of caraval but everyone’s saying to give legendary a go so i might as well


Anyway, I will push through but I think my main problem is that I have the biggest beef with Evangeline. I like very bossy female reads, more rational ones I guess 😪
And I feel like every “intimate” moment is soooo forced. Like when he hugged her after the poisoned tears and she was on his lap idk it really gave me the worst second hand embarrassment.
Anyway I will finish it and see how it goes, and if in the end I wanna also continue the series.
If you want some updates you can add me because I’ve post a bunch by reading it, but don’t take it personal if you really LOVED it bc I’m just stressed by it right now ahahah



but yeah. it worked slightly better in Finale.

but the entire ending of caraval confused me am i supposed to like julian or not and is legend bad or is he good


i feel like my opinion of the sisters depended on the pov. like i HATED tella for what she did at the end of caraval, but her pov in legendary made me like her more and hate scarlett, and the dual povs of finale made me like them both. i like that the characters can make bad decisions and redeem themselves, but it's definitely very odd that when it's one sister's pov, i end up disliking the other sister.



in legendry and Finale, I kept CRINGING EVERYTIME Jacks called Tella "Love" and randomly being head over heels for her.... I kept going like..... " only if u have put this much effort and trust in your and Eva's relationship you scoundrel!!!.... "

I hate Evangeline, she’s so naive and stupid and the book is so repetitive. Every time Jacks calls her “little fox” or “pet” I cringe so bad. And those moments that I think were supposed to be sexy when he approaches her and gets blood on her lips and all of that just gave me second hand embarrassment.
Like it was marketed as a YA romantasy but to me this is giving… middle school. Idk ahahah
What got me into YA fantasy books with romance was daughter of the moon goddess, or the girl who fell beneath the sea. Those were 5 stars mainly because I loved the female leads but Evangeline.. oh girl if I only I could slap some sense into her.
I’m never so “mean” about a book but this time I feel like I’ve been deceived ahahah please tell me that I’m not the only one disappointed by this book