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message 1: by nani, Grp Founder, Responds to PM's/ Happy Rewind everybody! (last edited Jul 09, 2024 07:15PM) (new)

nani (nani_vibe_fox) | 5043 comments Mod
Pick a song

Take a lyric's verse

turn it into writing, poem, wordly art.

This is to the writer's expectations. it doesnt have to rhyme, nor make sense.
Have fun <3

Take however long you need, And as many as you wish.


message 2: by nani, Grp Founder, Responds to PM's/ Happy Rewind everybody! (last edited Jul 09, 2024 01:49PM) (new)

nani (nani_vibe_fox) | 5043 comments Mod
"I had all of you,
most of you,
some, & now
none of you.

take me back
to the night
we met."


Take me back to the night we met,
So we can make it a night we never had.
To tell ourselves this night isnt meant to last.
To never say hello,
is easier than the inevitable Goodbye,
That was planted in the back our our throat's
well before, on eachother, we ever laid our eyes.

Take me back to that night
without all the memories we made.
The life we built, the promises, all left behind.
I'd rather long for something I never had,
& question the 'what if's'
Than have the answer's & miss what used to be mine.

"I dont know what i'm supposed to do,
Haunted by the ghost of you.

Take me back
to the night we met."


You're shadow still linger's in the creases of my heart.
Your voice still Echo in the back of my mind,
in a low whisper,
from when you said we would last.

& now your gone. & we're out of time.

Now i'll never forget, never move on, never be fine.
Because your no longer with me,
no longer by my side,
no longer alive.

& i'm alone.

I'll still keep our vow's on the tip's of my lip's,
Always remember our last kiss,
our promises,

yours, always
mine, forever

take me back to the night we met.



message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

It can't be said I'm an early bird
It's ten o'clock before I say a word
Baby, I can never tell
How do you sleep so well?
You keep telling me to live right
To go to bed before the daylight
But then you wake up for the sunrise
You know you don't gotta pretend, baby, now and then
Don't you just wanna wake up, dark as a lake?
Smelling like a bonfire, lost in a haze?
If you're drunk on life, babe, I think it's great
But while in this world


-Sometimes the world needs to understand, I can't handle all that sweetness. I need something dark and bitter.-

I think I'll take my whiskey neat
My coffee black and my bed at three
You're too sweet for me
You're too sweet for me
I take my whiskey neat
My coffee black and my bed at three
You're too sweet for me
You're too sweet for me


-Other times, it makes me feel too salty...bring in some savory details-

I aim low
I aim true and the ground's where I go
I work late where I'm free from the phone
And the job gets done
But you worry some, I know
But who wants to live forever, babe?
You treat your mouth as if it's Heaven's gate
The rest of you like you're the TSA
I wish I could go along, babe, don't get me wrong


-Either way, it's complicated.-

You know you're bright as the morning, as soft as the rain
Pretty as a vine, as sweet as a grape
If you can sit in a barrel, maybe I'll wait
Until that day
I'd rather take my whiskey neat
My coffee black and my bed at three
You're too sweet for me
You're too sweet for me
I take my whiskey neat
My coffee black and my bed at three
You're too sweet for me
You're too sweet for me


-But in the end?

Whoa, oh-oh
Whoa, oh-oh
Whoa, oh-oh
Whoa, oh-oh
Whoa, oh-oh
Whoa, oh-oh
Whoa, oh-oh
Whoa, oh-oh
I take my whiskey neat
My coffee black and my bed at three
You're too sweet for me
You're too sweet for me


You really are too sweet for me


message 4: by nani, Grp Founder, Responds to PM's/ Happy Rewind everybody! (new)

nani (nani_vibe_fox) | 5043 comments Mod
Soph wrote: "It can't be said I'm an early bird
It's ten o'clock before I say a word
Baby, I can never tell
How do you sleep so well?
You keep telling me to live right
To go to bed before the daylight
But then ..."


(vibes. sitting under the tree in fall type vibes <3)


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

||nani||-||the room holds too much tension|| wrote: "Soph wrote: "It can't be said I'm an early bird
It's ten o'clock before I say a word
Baby, I can never tell
How do you sleep so well?
You keep telling me to live right
To go to bed before the dayli..."


((Tyy))


message 6: by KyoAi (new)

KyoAi ♡ | 569 comments "In the troubling days, for the never-smiling you,
I give my utmost love in hopes for the dazzling tomorrow
In the never-ending night before we fall come and take my hand
Even the days that you hid inside, wanting to forget
I'll melt with the warmth of my embraces
No need to be afraid, until dawn comes someday, let's stay together"


Come now take my hand, let's do this together
Let's escape from this reality
It'll be just you and me, in our own universe
Let's stay together

(Note: The original lyrics are translated from Japanese so sorry if they don't sound right. Also sorry my lyrics are rushed.)


・゜-: ✧☾ The Enderian Elf ☽✧ :-゜・ | 55 comments "We were playing in the sand" You didn't have a hand, I gave you mine, we stepped into time, the world felt anew, "but all I wanted was you."


message 8: by [deleted user] (new)

Softīe wrote: ""In the troubling days, for the never-smiling you,
I give my utmost love in hopes for the dazzling tomorrow
In the never-ending night before we fall come and take my hand
Even the days that you hid..."


I love it <33


message 9: by Jinx "47" (new)

Jinx "47" | 1102 comments "I'm not playing fair with my love no more
Feelings I just can't ignore
Heartbreaks, we been here times before"

I'm not playing fair with my love no more
Feelings I just can't ignore
Heartbreaks, we been here times before
Baby, I really think you need some more
Ignored all day when you active at four
Heartbreaks, ain't tryna feel this pain no more
So Imma pour til I'm no longer torn

"So baby so long so long"


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