Would love it if I could get some eyes on book 1 of an YA urban fantasy series, standing at 54k words. I would appreciate it if you could read the entire manuscript and do notes or in-text comments. Happy to do a swap. For fans of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Jade City and Practical magic.
Synopsis:
The Human Realm faces a threat: Fae flood the earth with their darkness, driving the world as we know it into an unforeseeable future. In response to the mortals’ cries, the heavens brought a light to vanquish those who wished to destroy them: Seers. Or so they say. I’m not too caught up on my Fae lore, but what I did know was that, at the moment, we were so screwed. I’m Olivia Thorn, a Seer. You know, protector of mortals, defender of the realm and all that stuff. After a woman was found dead— her heart ripped out of her chest— everything I thought I knew has been flipped on its head, and now I face a danger that threatens to destroy the world as we know it.
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Would love it if I could get some eyes on book 1 of an YA urban fantasy series, standing at 54k words. I would appreciate it if you could read the entire manuscript and do notes or in-text comments. Happy to do a swap. For fans of Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Jade City and Practical magic.
Synopsis:
The Human Realm faces a threat: Fae flood the earth with their darkness, driving the world as we know it into an unforeseeable future. In response to the mortals’ cries, the heavens brought a light to vanquish those who wished to destroy them: Seers.
Or so they say. I’m not too caught up on my Fae lore, but what I did know was that, at the moment, we were so screwed. I’m Olivia Thorn, a Seer. You know, protector of mortals, defender of the realm and all that stuff.
After a woman was found dead— her heart ripped out of her chest— everything I thought I knew has been flipped on its head, and now I face a danger that threatens to destroy the world as we know it.