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I've written my fair share of short stories and scrapped books in progress, but I plan on finishing this one entirely. Before I progress any further, I wanna see if anybody has any ideas for how the plot should lay out.

PLOT: Betrayed by his own brother, Alexandros is cursed by a spell from the ancient tomes he was sworn to protect. Now branded with the mark of the Serpent, Alexandros is cast out from his clan and banished from his beloved country. As he wanders the outer lands, Alexandros hears rumors of a powerful sorceress with the knowledge of the curse that lives within the caves of the Ituval Mountains. He ventures there and find that the sorceress is a mysterious and tricky woman. After hearing of his plight, she vows to help Alexandros remove the curse. However, the ingredients for the cure lay deep within the caves—deeper than even the sorceress has dared to venture.

If you want to add anything onto the plot, or give opinions on what I could adjust and change, please do!!

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Alice ˚୨୧⋆｡˚ ⋆ wrote: "WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YAYAYAYAYAYAY >.< PERFECT"

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Oooh this is a cool combination of different tropes I see with fantasy plots. For me, it's so unique and I would TOTALLY read!