🌸 A Glimpse of Love from “Kadashus” — Feedback Welcome! 📖💬
Body of my story:
In the heart of a vast, open field blanketed with wildflowers, Sir Geigel held Bruemerchy close, his strong arms wrapped around her as he spun her in a wide, joyful circle. The late afternoon sun hung low in the sky, a golden orb casting radiant light over the landscape, painting the world in hues of amber, rose, and soft gold. Wisps of clouds drifted lazily across the heavens, their delicate forms glowing with sunlight as they sailed toward the horizon.
Around them, the field danced with color—lavender, poppies, and daisies swaying gently in the breeze. The air smelled of blooming earth and sweet meadow grass. A nearby stream shimmered as it flowed gently over polished stones, its waters whispering a soft song that blended with the rustling leaves and distant birdsong.
Birds flitted overhead, their feathers gleaming in the sunlight—bluejays, finches, and doves, their wings catching glints of gold as they circled above the lovers. Some settled briefly in nearby trees, watching curiously with tilted heads as if nature herself had paused to witness the moment.
Bruemerchy laughed, her voice like a bell as Sir Geigel lifted her higher into the air. Her long hair flowed behind her, catching the light like spun silk. Her dress fluttered like petals in the wind as he spun her once more, then gently lowered her into his embrace.
Their foreheads touched as he gazed into her eyes, the sun reflecting in both their faces, making their skin glow with warmth and life. “I’ve never seen anything so beautiful,” he whispered.
She smiled, breathless. “The world, or this moment?”
“Both,” he said, before pressing his lips to hers, tender and full of wonder. The wind sighed around them, the stream sang on, and the sun continued its slow descent, blessing their love with golden light that seemed to promise forever.
If this moment touched you, I'd love your thoughts! As a debut author, I’m still learning and growing with every page. Any feedback, reviews, or even just thoughts are a huge help to me. If you’ve read Kadashus or are curious, I’d truly appreciate your support on Amazon with a quick review—it means the world. 🙏
https://a.co/d/5sEJ30s
Medieval Romance
🌸 A Glimpse of Love from “Kadashus” — Feedback Welcome! 📖💬
Body of my story:
In the heart of a vast, open field blanketed with wildflowers, Sir Geigel held Bruemerchy close, his strong arms wrapped around her as he spun her in a wide, joyful circle. The late afternoon sun hung low in the sky, a golden orb casting radiant light over the landscape, painting the world in hues of amber, rose, and soft gold. Wisps of clouds drifted lazily across the heavens, their delicate forms glowing with sunlight as they sailed toward the horizon.
Around them, the field danced with color—lavender, poppies, and daisies swaying gently in the breeze. The air smelled of blooming earth and sweet meadow grass. A nearby stream shimmered as it flowed gently over polished stones, its waters whispering a soft song that blended with the rustling leaves and distant birdsong.
Birds flitted overhead, their feathers gleaming in the sunlight—bluejays, finches, and doves, their wings catching glints of gold as they circled above the lovers. Some settled briefly in nearby trees, watching curiously with tilted heads as if nature herself had paused to witness the moment.
Bruemerchy laughed, her voice like a bell as Sir Geigel lifted her higher into the air. Her long hair flowed behind her, catching the light like spun silk. Her dress fluttered like petals in the wind as he spun her once more, then gently lowered her into his embrace.
Their foreheads touched as he gazed into her eyes, the sun reflecting in both their faces, making their skin glow with warmth and life. “I’ve never seen anything so beautiful,” he whispered.
She smiled, breathless. “The world, or this moment?”
“Both,” he said, before pressing his lips to hers, tender and full of wonder. The wind sighed around them, the stream sang on, and the sun continued its slow descent, blessing their love with golden light that seemed to promise forever.
If this moment touched you, I'd love your thoughts! As a debut author, I’m still learning and growing with every page. Any feedback, reviews, or even just thoughts are a huge help to me. If you’ve read Kadashus or are curious, I’d truly appreciate your support on Amazon with a quick review—it means the world. 🙏
📚 Here’s the link to the book: https://a.co/d/5sEJ30S
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