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Is it all your ideas? Or the publishers? Do you have total control? Just wondered.






Likewise with mine. Maybe that's one small advantage of small press; some will actually solicit your ideas for the cover.
btw, thanks for the Author Promo folder.

Like what would make the average consumer pick up a book from a shelf full of books and grab their interest enough to make them want to buy it.
For people like King, books are sold by name and reputation alone, not pictures.

I posted a short story on my profile which is technically part of my apocalypse novel. I'm hoping to see how well it comes across and if there should be any changes made overall.
Here's the link if you'd like to help:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I think in a short story, the rhythm and flow has to be highly condensed. Here is what I mean.
1. You're going to have to push the foreshadowing and the drama to get to your horror event. Since it is basically a foreshadowing scene, the jail cell and interrogation event has to be more concise and more descriptive, using choice, tense words that leads the reader to have a strong curious expectation. Maybe the scene could be depicted more crazily, more chaotic, using certain descriptive words, and rhythm and breaking of sentences. I would look at horror authors who wrote very effective foreshadowing scenes that builds expectations to what happened that lead to the current event.
2. The change of scenery between the present event and the past is nebulous. It took me a while to realize that was a past event I was moving to. You need a stronger transition.
3. The scene in the diner where he's waiting for his brother is overly long. It is not that important compared to the foreshadowing scene and the horror scene to have such a huge presence. It makes it boring. You could condense it down by building a tense psychological profile of him and his family, and a stronger but condense interaction with the diner patrons and environment.
4. The weirdness needs to be raised when meeting with the guy that wants the land. Also, why does he want the land? Does the alien need the land for a special reason. That question needs to be answered for me. All I get is somebody wants the land, somebody manipulated so that the brother's payment was lost, and for what reason? Then it jumped to the alien killing the people. ???? The reasoning isn't clear to me. I would replot the short story with the main plot, then answer any "why?" questions, then build the detailing and action around that. I think the replotting would also help you to see how big of a chunk you're allotting to each scene, and what needs to be put in to move it on to the next event. So you have the main thing of the aliens wanting the land? Or do the aliens just want to kill? Or did they kill because the people wouldn't give up the land? Why? Then you have the foreshadowing part, the build up, and the main horror. How would the foreshadowing, being the important intro., can be built so that the reader has a strong expectation to find out what happened. How can the momentum be carried in the past scene of the meeting at the diner, to the meeting with Mr. Kaufman, to the horror event. Horror, especially, needs to have a special foreshadowing and momentum to create the fear and tension in the reader.
5. The horror scene is good. Maybe rewrite to see how more momentum of horror can be put into it, via choice words, sentence rhythm, etc.
Anyway, that's my 5 cents, Amanda. Congratulations for finishing a piece. It's not easy to write, I know. Otherwise, I'd be a writer.

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Thanks for the critique Aloha :)
Well it is a bit from my Apocalypse novel that may be why some of the why isn't as clear although I think you're right probably aught to make that more clear (the book has to do with an author who writes the end of the world and is trying to make up for her mistakes. Part of doing that means gathering keys, the eye Alex finds at the farm is one of those keys and what the creature was after as he works for the bad guy) .
I agree on the length of the diner scene. I'm just trying to sort out what bits to cut since the girl at the diner does come back into the plot again later. Maybe some of the dialog between the brothers? The other thing is I debated making this piece an entire novel because of some of the loose ends there. I'm going to have to resolve that because if its a novel then I'd end up something more like a series than a single long novel for the apocalypse story.
It's interesting you interpreted the creature as an alien. The idea hadn't even occurred to me actually. I had intended him to be sort of an inexplicable demon beastie after Alex's family both to torture them for sport and to get the eye.

Because a character is going to come back, doesn't mean that their intro. scene has to be long. It could be made more significant by either a stronger description, or a stronger interaction between that character and the protagonist. I barely registered her as nothing more than a server, even if her scene is long. She needs a little more foreshadowing as to her importance.

Because a character is goi..."
Ok thanks for the advice :). I'm going to save this to a file so i can work on it later.

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Is Rot and Ruin a more extended version of the short story? I really love Joe Hill's story told in twitters, very scary and goofy!

As for Joe Hill's Twitter story in NEW DEAD, that was inspired. My favorite in the collection, however, was David Liss's chilling and disturbing "What Maisey Knew".

Jonathan, Rot & Ruin looks like a good story. Got good reviews, too. Congrats!

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I'm Thomas Amo, Book one of my paranormal/horror series "An Apple For Zoë" was released on Kindle this week.

I'm very much looking forward to be an active member of this group!
Thanks and good reading everyone!
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I did the artwork for my cover on "The Spell pf Zalanon" based on a scene inside the novel and I had it enhanced and copied. For my next novel entitled Wake Co. I am considering a different approach with photography.

My new novel "Wake Co." is in the edit process and will be released soon. I think both of these will leave an impression on the reader and shake you up a bit. You can check out the reviews on my page or on Amazon if you desire. Thank you for your consideration
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I couldn't find the "Heads Up" folder, so I'm sorry if this post is in the wrong place. I just wanted to let everyone know that I finished my first book! I finished it Friday night. I'm so pumped about it. It's a great feeling. There is still so much to do though. I'm going back through and rereading it and cleaning it up before I get it edited. Then I will work on the cover. I think I have a pretty cool vision of how I want the cover to look. Hope everyone has a great week. I'll keep you posted.

I couldn't find the "Heads Up" folder, so I'm sorry if this post is in the wrong place. I just wanted to let everyone know that I finished my first book! I finished it Friday night. I..."
Congrats Nelson I know how you feel! Its wonderful to finish a book and be able to see what you've accomplished :)

But it does feel great to make that kind of accomplishment! A lot of people do not and never will.
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