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I will do poems, songs, stories and fan fiction. :)I am a pretty darn fast writer.
I am interested in science fiction and fantasy things, like dragons, and a lot of cool science stuff. Also romance.
Fantasy or science fiction.
Um... stuff that start cussing and getting into the innapropriate stuff. I'm only 13! (not to mention my parents would kill me! that's why my novel doesn't have any bad words or inappropriate gestures.)
Sounds like Sam would be a good partner... but anybody, really!
lol nice. and i'll be your e.p. if there isna't anyone else who wants you to do the editing/writing with
So a person and their partner will do both jobs?
What you do (stories, songs, poems): Stories and PoetryAre you a fast or slow writer: Depends if someone is there to make me hurry with compliments.
What are you interested in: Unique but really good stories. Fantasy (Especially transformations and magic)
What Genre do you feel most comfortable writing in: Fiction
At what point are you out of your comfort zone (where you feel uncomfortable writing): Cussing, drugs, alcohol, smoking.
Who do you think would be best to be your partner: Depends if anybody wants to be my partner.
Ok well You and Kayla would be good since you both are against cussing.
So? I probably will like her stories, but she probably won't like mine.
When you are writing something, the first and only opinion that matters is whether you like it or not. Then when you love it, you can see who likes it or not.
How about this...... may I see who is best matching up to me? I will post my first chapter, and then I will ask for some editing. That way, I know who gives the best advice.
lol ok whatever is comfortable for you
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Have you even had a critique of your work?
As artists, it can be difficult to hear that our work may need to be improved. On a scale of 1-10 how much does it offend you to hear a not so glowing critique of your work?
I'll be the first to admit that I'm not a 10 in this catagory, but after many years and lots of reviews I am not proud to be an 8.
If anyone wants a partner, I'm willing to take on one or two that are writing SF or F.
You've already seen my SciFi novel. :) Probably, I am an... 8, I think. Or a 7. It isn't major, but it gets under my skin a lot.
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Perhaps I should clairify:
If someone says some harsh, but helpful stuff about your work, here is a basic scale:
1 - You either burst into tears or cuss at them.
2 – 3 You may cry or cuss, but then you move on, still completely ignoring the advice (who do they think they are anyways.
4 – 6 You quickly dry your eyes or mutter a profanity under your breath, but know you may need to look at what was said, especially if you’ve heard it more than once.
7 – 8 You grimace at the glaring light shining on your work, you may even slam a few doors that day, but by now you know everyone has an opinion and not all will favor your work. Taking a deep breath, you look at what has been pointed out to see if there is merit in it.
9 – 10 Very few authors ever make it to this point; only well seasoned veterans. If you don’t flinch when someone gives you some harsh words, if you can see the positive in any critique, then you have finally made it!
Kayla, at 13 years old, a 7 is remarkable. I think I was still a 4 or maybe even a 3!
You are leagues a head of where I came from.
I am not really one to be a 4-6, but then again, and not even as bad as 7-8, but not 9-10. I get a little upset with myself because I didn't do good enough, but I always believe that the critic is right and I need to improve.
Oh, okay! Um, in that case I think I am a... yeah, about a seven. I don't cuss, and I might cry a little bit, but that's pretty much it.
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Looking at a critique is a good thing, but you should never take every critique and change your work.
A good rule of thumb is if you hear the same thing 3 times, it is something you should look at changing.
Thomas, I'll take a look at your first chapter, if you'd like. Where can I find it?
There is a link in a different discussion. Posting
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I have a tendency to be pretty point blank and honest, so I like the fact that you can take a critique well. But it sounds like you are in good hands.
Okay, but thanks for the warning. One of my friends gave me a 5 paragraph long critic about my first chapter and it made me a little mad at myself for doing so poorly.
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The great thing about being able to handle a critique is that you learn quickly. The more you put yourself out there faster you develope.
Oh well..... the advice that Kayla gave me was a little bit what I was thinking of improving, but mostly new stuff, so I think I will stick with her as my partner,(If its okay with her,)) anyways, she was the only one that actually responded in this group.
Sorry buddy. i would have done it but you wouldn't like my kind of responses.
I'm fine with anything. Please, I know I am just an amateur with little knowledge of the grammatical world, but I think I have a good idea that needs to be molded, and I will take help in any form to mold it. Thanks, though, for being considerate.
Yup sure, though i hardly think i was that. So Kayla is your partner?
you were, because you don't want to hurt my feelings, but if people don't do that, then I will be under the impression that it is GOOD! I don't want people reading my stories as a reader until it is acceptable. Kayla is only my partner if she wants to be.
Well i did read your story and i thought it was good. even if i tried, i don't think i could have come up with anything. some writings, to me, are perfect the way they are. sometimes i can be harsh, others not so bad.
i'll ask her later or see if she replies here.
i'll ask her later or see if she replies here.
Ok, thanks! So you didn't see anything wrong? Sometimes, I am like that too. If it is one of my friends, then I will try not to find anything bad......
I'm not one of those people who look purposely to find something bad. i read it, then think about it and see if there is anything to make it better. But your writing is very good Thomas
Okay, then I will add the editing that I believe should be added. Thanks for your compliments.
Hi! Did I hear you say that I am your partner, Thomas?
yeah you heard right. do you agree to be his partner Kayla?
What you do (stories, songs, poems): Stories, scriptsAre you a fast or slow writer: Well, I'm medium when I have an idea, but it takes awhile to actually get a knock-your-socks-off idea.
What are you interested in: I love most stories because it's the story line I'm always interested in. fantasy, especially when it comes with magic.
What Genre do you feel most comfortable writing in: Fantasy
At what point are you out of your comfort zone (where you feel uncomfortable writing): Cursing, smoking, drinking, all that stuff.
Who do you think would be best to be your partner: I don't know
Have you even had a critique of your work? Well if you count friends, then yes. If not, then no.
As artists, it can be difficult to hear that our work may need to be improved. On a scale of 1-10 how much does it offend you to hear a not so glowing critique of your work? I guess a 5.
What you do (stories, songs, poems): Stories (but I can write poems, too)Are you a fast or slow writer: It depends. If I have some insperation I can finish a chapter in a day, but sometimes it takes a few.
What are you interested in: Stories that invole
What Genre do you feel most comfortable writing in: Fantasy and YA
At what point are you out of your comfort zone (where you feel uncomfortable writing): Cursing (there are other things but I can't think of them right now.)
Who do you think would be best to be your partner: Someone who can spell. My spelling skills are really sad compared to how much I read and write. It is improving but I still need some help.
Have you even had a critique of your work: Yes. People will tell me what's wrong and honestly, I really appreaciate it. It helps me get better at the thing I love.
As artists, it can be difficult to hear that our work may need to be improved. On a scale of 1-10 how much does it offend you to hear a not so glowing critique of your work? Hmmm. It honestly depends on whether that person just wanted to be mean or is trying to help. If they are trying to help I'd probably be aroung a 6-7, but if they are just being me then I might ignore that comment completely.
What you do (stories, songs, poems): Stories, blank verse (i CAN'T rhyme)Are you a fast or slow writer: when i'm inspired, my fingers can't keep up with my brain.
What are you interested in: when i'm inspired, my fingers can't keep up with my brain.
What Genre do you feel most comfortable writing in: FANTASY. Duh. And sci-fi. i can do pretty much any fiction, though.
At what point are you out of your comfort zone (where you feel uncomfortable writing): I can pretty much write about anything. Seriously.
Who do you think would be best to be your partner: Someone who doesn't care if I'm rude or blunt and who doesn't mind me telling them about every single spelling and grammar mistake they make.
Have you even had a critique of your work: Yes. But the only peeps who tell me something's wrong are grownups, basically. My peers just seem to ADORE my writing. Which is annoying.
As artists, it can be difficult to hear that our work may need to be improved. On a scale of 1-10 how much does it offend you to hear a not so glowing critique of your work? 4-6.
Kelsie wrote: "What you do (stories, songs, poems): Stories (but I can write poems, too)Are you a fast or slow writer: It depends. If I have some insperation I can finish a chapter in a day, but sometimes it ..."
Hi Kelsie! I happen to be a really good speller. Would you like me to help you?
Haha, Kelsie - I am only 13 but I've won four spelling bees and one of my pet peeves is a wrong spelling, especially on words I think are easy. ;)
I totally agree. (You know, if spelling bees weren't spelling aloud, I would win every single one available...)
ok so bobbie and kelsie are partners?
Bad news is that you have to fill out more questions. Sorry guys!
What you do (stories, songs, poems):
Are you a fast or slow writer:
What are you interested in:
What Genre do you feel most comfortable writing in:
At what point are you out of your comfort zone (where you feel uncomfortable writing):
Who do you think would be best to be your partner:
Have you even had a critique of your work:
for example:
What you do (stories, songs, poems):Stories
Are you a fast or slow writer: medium
What are you interested in writing about: Anything that deals with magic, mythical creatures, my beliefs, any ideas i get randomly
What Genre do you feel most comfortable writing in: Fantasy/scifi but i'll do any kind of fiction
At what point are you out of your comfort zone (where you feel uncomfortable writing): haven't figured it out yet
Who do you think would be best to be your partner: don't know because no one joined yet :)
Have you even had a critique of your work: Yup, by four or five people, including two teachers