Kids/Teens Book Club discussion

Hey, hey, heeeey! I'm Kaylin and I loooove to write! My current peice is called "He Loves Me ~ He Loves Me Not" and it's been a hit! I'm so excited about it, so I want to share it with you.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

It's a novel in progress, so I hope you guys stay along for the ride!


I've also written and uploaded two short stories. Both very depressing, they are based off of true stories.


http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

The Night He Left Me is my favorite! It was written with a lot of passion, so I hope you like it.


http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

But Sometimes People Lie was written based off of my friend and her experiences.


Thank you soooo much! Love ya! :D

Nope. It was based of my bff Rielly. Not that you're not one of my bff's.

New story!


Dreams

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


Based off yet another friend. But also myself. Kind of just a little personal element about me that no one really knows... So... It's pretty personal; just some things that go on in my head.

That was absolutely amazing.

:D

Thanks, Chloe! It came straight from the heart.

Chloe, I read your comments and it brought a huge smile to my face! You're the best! Go read my reply on "Dreams".

kaylin i really loved that last story you posted, dreams, it was amazing!

Kaylin ;) wrote: "Chloe, I read your comments and it brought a huge smile to my face! You're the best! Go read my reply on "Dreams"."

You're so very welcome!!!!

I LOVE reading people's writing, especially when it's as amazing as yours.

You guys are the best! :D I just posted "Dreams" like, half an hour ago! It took me 12 minutes to write, edit, and post. You guys rock!

Haha.
You rock more!

Again, awesome! Amazing! Wonderful!........There is nothing as awesome as this! ok. I'm runing out of complements.

You guys are seriously the best. I don't even know what to say about you.

Aw! Thanks! You're just blessed with the awesome power of the pen and paper! Three cheers for Kaylin!

*Cheers for Kaylin*

WHOOP WHOOP WHOOP GO KAYLIN:D LOVE YOUR STORIES GIRLY:D

:D

Do i really need to say how amazing you guys are again?

Yes you do. We enjoy being praised for our psyconess enthusiasim.

Okay. Here goes;

You people rock! You are absolutely amazing. You make my day and bring a smile to my face whenever I read your comments. It's people like you that make me want to keep writing. I have never thought that I was any good until today. So thank you. Thank you so much!

Good enough, Faith?

You're really good at writing. I'm up to chapter 7 of he loves me he loves me not and I read the other ones you posted here.

I just finished chapter 7. Is Emma's last name Jones or Johnson? In the other chapters and in the description it said Jones and in chapter 7 it says Johnson.

Sorry, i screwed it up. Thanks for letting me know, though!

Yes. That was good enough. Thank you.

Lol. Okay!

no, thank you kaylin for your awesome writing!!!

:D Teehee!

You guys rock!

So, the worst thing just happened; I wrote this other short story that I was pretty proud of. Of course, it was sad and had a twist to it. My laptop died and I thought I uploaded it to here so I wasn't worried. Turns out, I didn't upload it! And it didn't save, so all my writing is gone. :C And I can't do it again. I'm so sad right now. And mad! >:(

wow, i just read The Night He Left Me and i almost cried, that was amazing! seriously, i'm tearing up right now....

:D

Well, that cheered me up, Hannah. For a second. But I'm so sad that I lost my other peice... :C

oh no!!!! i'm really sorry to hear that kaylin!! :'C

*sniff sniff, cry cry*

I'm trying to write it again. It's not that big of a deal, I'm just upset that I put work into it and now it's gone.

But I'm glad you like "The Night He Left Me"!

It was AMAZINGLY AWESOME AWESOMENESS KAYLIN:D

awwww! *hugs* i hope you write it again and its even more amazing this time!

I loved it too. My favorite is He Loves Me ~ He Loves Me Not. I feel so bad for Emma. She was just a tool! I'm kind of glad he's dead now. Let me guess, Damien was the one who killed him? Or was it truely an accident?

I also love Broken Dreams. I can defeatly relate. Would you read and comment on mine? Here's the link. http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2... It's about a girl (I can't say her name, it would spoil a part of the story) who's best friend gets kidnapped and how she deals with it. It has a very sad ending, just btw.

Faith wrote: "I loved it too. My favorite is He Loves Me ~ He Loves Me Not. I feel so bad for Emma. She was just a tool! I'm kind of glad he's dead now. Let me guess, Damien was the one who killed him? Or was it..."


I don't know why, but I'm laughing so hard. I'm kind of in shock that I did this to him. And who said he's dead? I guess that's why I'm laughing. I don't know. Hahaha. *sigh*. I don't know who did it. I don't know. Payton, the one above, is my best friend and she kind of helps me along with it so... she'll help me decide.

yes, but you should probably make your own topic for it faith.

Hannah wrote: "awwww! *hugs* i hope you write it again and its even more amazing this time!"

I actually did re-write it. It's called "Chaos"

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3...

True. Will do in a sec. One minute.

Faith wrote: "I also love Broken Dreams. I can defeatly relate. Would you read and comment on mine? Here's the link. http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2... It's about a girl (I can't say her na..."

I love sad ending, in case you haven't noticed! Of course I'll read it.

wow, that was really powerful kaylin! again, i'm super impressed by your writing and keep doing an amazing job!!

Thank you very much, Hannah! Do you write? I wanna read your writing. But right now, I'm reading Faith's story.

I love it, love it, love it!!!!

I love yours, too! I'm like, addicted. But a little confused. Where is she? Didn't she go to the police station? And if so, Sam wouldn't be in the same room with her kidnapper.

no problem! i write a little bit but honestly i dont love it, i'm more of a visual artist -drawing- tthanks though.

Oh, okay. Well, I'll read you things none the less. But I have to go right now. Thanks for reading my stories, by the way!

She's in the police staion. There's a sentance that says she darts over to the walkie-talkie. So, that's how they are talking. Her kidnapper was checking on her when the line went dead, but he's typicaly guarding the door. Hope that clears it up some!

Kaylin ;) wrote: "Hannah wrote: "awwww! *hugs* i hope you write it again and its even more amazing this time!"

I actually did re-write it. It's called "Chaos"

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/3..."

This is really good just like your others. When it says 'and that’s when it hit me' do you mean she suddenly understood or the car hit her or both? The first time I read it I thought she committed suicide and when I read it the second time I thought she was hit by the car.

car.

*goes to edit*

I totally see the confusion, and I will fix that right away! :D

New chapter for "He Loves Me ~ He Loves Me Not"!!! I hope you guys enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed writing it.

I'm going to read it now.