Book Haven discussion

Hi I am a debut fantasy author, I've spent a long time working on my writing, but the thing it comes down to is people like you. I would really appreciate comments on the first volume of my 'A Tale of Cataclysm' series, 'Fay'.

Please sample it (available in lots of formats), read the first few lines, paragraphs or chapters, what ever you like and comment back. If anyone wants to buy it after that then please use the code GH99J for 40% off your views are more than appreciated!

A brief blurb:

'The wolves howl at the smell of things to come, the strangers to become kings. Their black globes looking up at the night sky and the fiery city that signals the dawn of the last days of order. A familiar ragged man kneels nearby, scrambling at the dirt for worms, the packs adopted protector.'

If you have any questions about the book, or grill me on my influences feel free!

The book is available at:

http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/...

Many Thanks

Painter John

I used your link, but it says that the book is no longer published at smashwords. Did you give the correct link?