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Lacey
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May 08, 2011 10:19PM

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Hehehe yeah, you might be a BIT better than me...
Well, I'll post or message you if I find specific issues?

But yes, you can message me whenever, I have finals going on this week but I promise to get back to you in a timely matter, I do go on here often enough. But I'm here if you need me.

Good luck with your finals!!!

But don't hesitate to ask!!
and something that might help you, try to write creatively on your own time, it can both expand your writing skills and you can express your emotions through it, you'd be suprise on what you could come up with.

But I lack ideas... Well, I think I'm gonna TRY writing something anyway!!! My friend came up with the story, but I think I could put it together well... =)
When I finish my Maths, Science, English and Geography assignments, that is... >.<
Haha, and if I could help you with anything (most likely not), ask away!!!



What do you have to do? I'm not quite sure what you need help with....are you writing a poem or finding one?

What kind of story are you trying to write? Fictional, supernatural, nonfiction, young adult?
I'm actually writing a story right now that I love and what I found to help is just skip a scene that's giving you issues and just move onto a different one and then come back.

I'm having trouble with beginnings,I just hate them!



So no tips then?

April showers bring May flowers! The sun is still slightly out as the warn rain falls upon me. As the precipitation comes to an end, I see the beginnings of a rainbow. A rainbow is waves of light and color. In spring everyone is outside enjoying the fresh light air. This is the season full of love, hope and happiness. Spring is the season I put above the other three. I prefer spring because of the light weather, the vast array of budding flowers and the awakening animals. Spring is the most enjoyable season because of all its beauty, it leads to a new beginning.
The weather in spring is warm and comfortable. The soft wind and crispness of the air caresses my skin. The weather is quite different from the prior season of frigidness. The weather is the perfect combination of warmth and breeziness. Although, I love the warmth of spring the rain is refreshing, also. Have you ever tasted the rain as it fell from the sky? The taste and smell of it is rejuvenating. The rain smells of wet earth, so clean and fresh. From the heavens above, the thirst quenching rain falls so pure. Overall, the climate in the second season is cozy conformability.
To add, spring is my favorite season because of the lush vegetation. The vibrant flowers are growing slowly out of the previously frozen ground. Its tantalizing when her run your fingers along a flower petal. The natural color of the flower rubs off onto your fingers like dust. The delicate leaves of the trees are finally coming back. They come back every year greener than before. The dewy, wet leaves whisper in the warm wind. The spring flora is most spectacular. It was a way of regenerating itself over and over again.
Another, one of my favorite things about spring is the awakening animals. In the spring the animals arouse from their state of hibernation or come back from their hot southern homes. The irritating bird chirping it back, replacing the isolated stillness of winter. Squawking geese feed upon the fish in the pond. Cute, fluffy rabbits pop their heads from their underground nests. They feast upon the green grass. Its amusing to watch the living creatures as they become alert. I’ve always been an animal person and the spring is the ideal time to watch them in their indigenous accommodations.
Therefore, the most desirable of the four seasons to my standards is spring. Spring is full of lush greenery, perfect weather and active animals. Spring is worthy of my affections. The season sneaks up on you slowly. It appears in small places then suddenly it is everywhere, flooding your vision. It is impossible is depict the intricate serenity of spring’s beauty.