Writing Passionates discussion

Hi, I've finally got a bit of my story on this site. So please read it and give any advise you can on it. Thanks! :D

-Dylan
Drunk on Blood:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I've got chapter 2 finished. Please read it. :D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I've got the 3rd chapter up, PLEASE READ!!! I need more critism, and for those of you who have read and gave a review, I thank you. :D

Ch.3:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Enjoy!!! :D

It's really good! I love it! You just have a few mistakes.

Thanks Riley, I appreciate it. So what are other readers thoughts? I'd like more people to read it. :D

Oh, there are a few topics where you can advertise your stories.
Goodreads Writing 2 is one of them.

I've got ch.4 finished. Please give feedback!

-Dylan

I'm done with #5. This is where it gets exciting. Tell me what you think. :D

gaaah i need to catch up. XD

Tell me what you think when you read the new chapters! :D

okay XD

I'm done with chapter's 6 & 7! Please read and give feedback! :D

Chapter 8's done. Oh this one was fun to write. Please read and give feedback! :D

-Thanks!

Hey! Loosing an earring is important. Well, at least to me, it is :p

Chapter 9's almost done. Enjoy it! :D

-Dylan

Im skipping around. Im not going to post everything...sorry. I hope you will like it
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

So how's everyone liking it so far? I'm working on chapter 10 now. :D

I thought it was rather good. Keep Writing.

Thanks, I took it off of goodreads though.

Aw man. D:

Did you want to read it?

yup. I got really behind cuz my parents cut my comp time.

Well, I'll put it back on sometime. I want to finish it first.