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message 1: by C.S. Splitter (new)

C.S. Splitter | 979 comments Hi Folks,

I have finished my second book in the "Crayder Chronicles" and am looking for beta readers. It would also be good to have one or two new readers who never read the first book so they can tell me if the background info in book two is sufficient.

(not the official blurb below)

"The Willing" : Friends will help you move. True friends will help you move bodies.

How far would you go to protect your friends and family?

Tom Crayder is the All-American guy next door with a business, a wife, a son, a mortgage, and an expensive hobby. He is also a politically incorrect, wisecracking, operative working for a shadowy organization dedicated to administering justice outside of a broken system. No one knows of his other life, including his wife who finds herself unwittingly involved in a drug war.

Strap in with Tom as he navigates his way through the strata of a drug cartel. Lock and load with Lorena, a hard hearted assassin, as she lends her deadly skills to Tom’s fight for his family.

Sit back and watch Tom and Lorena figure out how to work together without killing each other. Join the rest of the cast from The Reluctant (Crayder Chronicles) by C.S. Splitter as they pitch in to track down the hitman that threatens their associate.

Some mysteries are solved. Some questions are answered. Some live. Some die.


If you would like to be one of my test subjects, please leave a note here or send me your email address via PM. I will convert the book to MOBI, PDF, or any other format you wish. I will make the book available on Smashwords for free download or I can email you your copy.

Please note, I am not yet looking for reviews, just feedback. However, you can maybe keep your impressions in mind for when I officially publish the book and will NEED reviews.

Splitter


message 2: by J.A. (new)

J.A. Clement (jaclement) | 1328 comments Good blurb, Splitter!


message 3: by Cambria (new)

Cambria (cambria409) | 3305 comments Splitter, i will beta for you if you like... just let me know. you have my email. :)


message 4: by Tricia (new)

Tricia Kristufek | 181 comments If you need more readers, let me know.


message 5: by Dale (new)

Dale Ibitz (goodreadscomdale_ibitz) | 298 comments Me too, Splitter. I didn't read the first one (sorry) so I fit the second category there.


message 6: by C.S. Splitter (new)

C.S. Splitter | 979 comments To those who have already volunteered, THANK YOU! If you have not received your copy yet, please feel free to yell at me and tell me I forgot you :).

I still need more guinea pigs...er...volunteers :). Hey, you'll get a free read out of it!

Splitter


message 7: by Cambria (new)

Cambria (cambria409) | 3305 comments LOL. got my copy...


message 8: by Jenn (new)

Jenn  (greeneyez2012) You guys TOTALLY want in on the this one, I PROMISE!
Splitter is a kick ass writer!


message 9: by Phil (new)

Phil Cantrill | 313 comments C.S. Splitter wrote: "Hi Folks,

I have finished my second book in the "Crayder Chronicles" and am looking for beta readers. It would also be good to have one or two new readers who never read the first book so they ..."



message 10: by C.S. Splitter (new)

C.S. Splitter | 979 comments Hey Phil, Does that mean you want to be a beta reader?

:)

Splitter


message 11: by Phil (new)

Phil Cantrill | 313 comments C.S. Splitter wrote: "Hey Phil, Does that mean you want to be a beta reader?

:)

Splitter"


Love too, Splitter. I hit the post bar by mistake too soon. Can you e-mail to ?


message 12: by C.S. Splitter (new)

C.S. Splitter | 979 comments ON it's way.

THANK YOU!

Splitter


message 13: by C.S. Splitter (new)

C.S. Splitter | 979 comments Hey all,

If you have not yet finished or not yet begun The Willing, contact me or post here and I will send you the REVISED version based off of the first beta recommendations.

I have fixed such wonderful prose such as, "those people were expandable." :)

Splitter


message 14: by Tricia (new)

Tricia Kristufek | 181 comments Well, I guess they were!

Me please! I'm going to try to read it this weekend.


message 15: by Jenn (new)

Jenn  (greeneyez2012) C.S. Splitter wrote: "Hey all,

If you have not yet finished or not yet begun The Willing, contact me or post here and I will send you the REVISED version based off of the first beta recommendations.

I have fixed such ..."
Lmao


message 16: by C.S. Splitter (new)

C.S. Splitter | 979 comments Jenn aka Texas Long Hair wrote: Lmao

Yeah, someone called me out on that mistake on their BLOG!

http://www.indiesupporter.com/2011/10...

No names though :)

I did LMAO when I saw it there.

Splitter


message 17: by Cambria (new)

Cambria (cambria409) | 3305 comments I just finished The Willing and it was a great read! I highly reccomend it!!!! :)


message 18: by Tricia (new)

Tricia Kristufek | 181 comments Shush! Some of us are behind!


message 19: by Jenn (new)

Jenn  (greeneyez2012) C.S. Splitter wrote: "Jenn aka Texas Long Hair wrote: Lmao

Yeah, someone called me out on that mistake on their BLOG!

http://www.indiesupporter.com/2011/10...

No names though ..."
Dude! I said it anyonmously, FISH DUCKY called you out!!!


message 20: by C.S. Splitter (new)

C.S. Splitter | 979 comments Yeah, but it was too funny to pass up :)

Fishducky IS good people, btw. You were right as usual lol.

Splitter


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