fiction files redux discussion
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Bright Lights, Big City was a bit precious, which I think is the risk
not sure what is gained when you start using the second person - any immediacy gained is probably traded off for the off putting nature of the voice leaving you at best right where you started and at worst with a reader who is rolling her eyes and thinking you a git
not sure what is gained when you start using the second person - any immediacy gained is probably traded off for the off putting nature of the voice leaving you at best right where you started and at worst with a reader who is rolling her eyes and thinking you a git
Mainly it's because I've just read If on a winter's night a traveler by Italo Calvino. A novel made up of beginnings of novels and narrated in the second person. I cannot recall reading any other novel written in the second person. It was quite intriguing, and for me, it was a very novel reading experience. I was pulled in and made a part of the story. At times there was a part of me that objected to being drawn in this way. I felt that I wasn't allowed to just sit back and observe, it felt a bit like going to see a show and being pulled up on stage for some audience participation. I've never liked audience participation and I have certainly never had any desire to be the audience participant. However, once I let go, I did quite enjoy it.
The book predominantly deals with reading, the experience of reading and to some extent analyses the reader's relationship with books. This is a topic that always sparks my interest, and I think in part this is why the second person narrative works so well. However, I am now intrigued, and I am considering something I would never normally consider; I have thought about going out and buying books with a second person narrative and altering my reading list so that I can read them now.
Does anyone else have any thoughts on the use of second person narrative, and in when its use is effective?