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Ok, I'm reading Intensive Care: The Story of a Nurse by Echo Heron
"The large institutional clock read 2:50pm, and somewhere in the middle of the eight flights of stairs, I wondered what I would have to do for the next nine hours of my life."
I'm almost halfway through now, and enjoying it so far.
I'm also reading The Woman in White, but that is upstairs and I can't be bothered to go and get it :)

Kathy I've never read The Girls, but have to at least consider it from that 1st para. Loved that!

I am always drawn back to the places where I have lived, the houses and their neighborhoods. For instance, there is a brownstone in the East Seventies wher..."
Leila, your opening line made me really interested in the book!!!!

I read the Girls. I liked everything except the ending.
(I must have been tired when I first posted this comment. I put girls instead of ending. Ha!)

"You know it's Passover," her mother said, sighing, in a voice deliberately low. She kept smiling so thta no one at Rosemary's house would know they were arguing.
The Devil's Arithmetic

It was the summer of 1994, more than six years ago now, when I first heard about Rafael Sanchez Mazas facing the firing squad. Three things had just happened: first my father had died; then my wife had left me; finally, I'd given up my literary career. I'm lying. The truth is, of those three things, the first two are factual, even exact; but not the third. In reality, my career as a writer had never actually got started, so it would have been difficult to give it up.

I read the Girls. I liked everything except the ending.
(I must have been tired when I first posted this comment. I put girls instead of ending. Ha!)"
LOL! I had read your original posting and must admit I was thinking, if you didn't like the girls, what else was there. But, then I thought, I think she posted it to be funny. Now with you edited post, I know what you really meant, although I think the first one was catchier (ha, ha). Even though I loved this book, one of my best friends didn't like it at all. I was really disappointed that she didn't like it, since I absolutely loved it, but everyone has different tastes and brings different experiences to the table when they read a book. I decided to keep her as a best friend anyway.

Sepulchre

The Lace Reader


Wife of GR author: Michael J. Sullivan | The Crown Conspiracy (10/08) | Avempartha (04/09)

Oooooooh! Definitely on my TBR list.
The book I'm currently reading is Founding Father by Richard Brookhiser. It is for a challenge that I'm taking part in to read one book about each of the presidents. So the opening paragraph isn't nearly as interesting as the ones in this thread. But here goes:
"The state begins in violence. However lofty the ideals of a new country or a new regime, if it encounters opposition, as most new regimes and countries do, it must fight. If it loses, its ideals join the long catalogue of unfulfilled aspirations."

The gate was packed with weary travelers, most of them standing and huddled along the walls because the meager allotment of plastic chairs had long since been taken. Every plane that came and went held at least eighty passengers, yet the gate had seats for only a few dozen.

(This book is his new collection of short stories, so my 1st paragraph is from the introduction.)
One day in 1972, I came home from work and found my wife sitting at the kitchen table with a pair of gardening shears in front of her. She was smiling, which suggested I wasn't in too much trouble; on the other hand, she said she wanted my wallet. That didn't sound good.

OK, my opening paragraph.
Umberto Eco's The Name of the Rose:
In the beginning was the Word and the Word was with God, and the Word was God. This was beginning with God and the duty of every faithful monk would be to repeat every day with chanting humility the one never-changing event whose incontrovertible truth can be asserted. But we see now through a glass darkly, and the truth, before it is revealed to all, face to face, we see in fragments (alas, how illegible) in the error of the world, so we must spell out its faithful signals even when they seem obscure to us and as if amalgamated with a will wholly bent on evil.
I know it's an odd opening paragraph to read coming from someone who is a member of the atheists/skeptics group on GoodReads, but the story is told from the point of view of a monk, after all. ;)

When he woke in the woods in the dark and the cold of the night he'd reach out to touch the child sleeping beside him. Nights dark beyond darkness and the days more gray each one than what had gone before. Like the onset of some cold glaucoma dimming away the world. His hand rose and fell softly with each precious breath. He pushed away the plastic tarpaulin and raised himself in the stinking robes and blankets and looked toward the east for any light but there was none. In the dream from which he'd wakened he had wandered in a cave where the child led him by the hand. Their light playing over the wet flowstone walls. Like pilgrims in a fable swallowed up and lost among the inward parts of some granitic beast. Deep stone flues where the water dripped and sang. Tolling in the silence the minutes of the earth and the hours and the days of it and the years without cease. Until they stood in a great stone room where lay a black and ancient lake. And on the far shore a creature that raised its dripping mouth from the rimstone pool and stared into the light with eyes dead white and sightless as the eggs of spiders. It swung its head low over the water as if to take the scent of what it could not see. Crouching there pale and naked and translucent, its alabaster bones cast up in shadow on the rocks behind it. Its bowels, its beating heart. The brain that pulsed in a dull glass bell. It swung its head from side to side and then gave out a low moan and turned and lurched away and loped soundlessly into the dark.

The Alienist by Caleb Carr
Theodore is in the ground. The words as I wr..."
OMG Dorie I hope you love this book Half as much as I did. His second with the same charcters, is not as well written but is still good.


Tell No One: There should have been a dark whisper in the wind. Or maybe a deep chill in the bone. Something. An ethereal song only Elizabeth or I could hear. A tightness in the air. Some textbook premonition. There are misfortunes we almost expect in life--what happened to my parents, for example--and then there are other dark moments, moments of sudden violence, that alter everything. There was my life before the tragedy. There is my life now. The two have painfully little in common.
The Pact: A Love Story - There was nothing left to say. He covered her body with his, and as she put her arms around him she could picture him in all his incarnations: age five, and still blond; age eleven, sprouting; age thirteen, with the hands of a man. The moon rolled, sloe-eyed in the night; and she breathed in the scent of his skin. "I love you," she said. He kissed her so gently she wondered if she had imagined it. She pulled back slightly, to look into his eyes. And then there was a shot.

I wish I did - finish flight that is ... I agree it seemed like a nice fast read - I read it on a train going to see Twilight with some frineds and LOST IT in the movie theater! It got me mad because I wanted to read it on the train back home - and I thought it was interesting. The worst part --- it was a library book ;-(. I have one on order but it has not arrived yet.
Robin.

Prologue: 18 May 1152
In the Romanesque cathedral of Poitiers a man and a woman stood before the high altar, exchanging wedding vows. It was a simple ceremony. The young man, aged nineteen, was stocky, with red hair, and restless with pent-up energy, knowing he was doing a daring thing. The woman, eleven years his senior, and with long auburn locks, was exceptionally beautiful, very sophisticated, and a willing accomplice in this furtive ceremony.


and i'd agree..Oskar was definitely the main attraction in EL&IC! i freakin love him!
have you ever seen the movie of Everything is Illuminated? I absolutely loved it!
and now i'm definitely going to have to up Prodigal Summer up on my list because i've heard soo many good things about it lately.


Robin, OUCH! I'm sorry to hear that you lost the book (doubly so that it was a library book). I thought Flight was a great story. Of course, Sherman Alexie is one of my all time favorite writers, so I might be a bit biased. ;)

The Stolen Child: A Novel
Hmmm, the opening paragraph, now that I think about it, doesn't seem too interesting. The book is great, though. Really entertaining.

Linda~I hope you like Tell No One...that's one of my favs!
The Unseen by T.L. Hines
"Perched on top of the elevator, Lucas peered at the woman below and created an elaborate history in his mind."

Moon, Glorious moon. Full, fat, reddish moon, the night as light as day, the moonlight flooding down across the land, and bringing joy, joy, joy. Bringing too the full-throated call of the tropical night, the soft and wild voice of the wind roaring through the hairs on your arm, the hollow wail of starlight, the teeth-grinding bellow of the moonlight off the water.

It was Christmas Eve in New York City. The cab slowly made its way down Fifth Avenue. It was nearly five o'clock. The traffic was heavy and the sidewalks were jammed with last-minute Christmas shoppers, homebound office workers, and tourists anxious to glimpse the elaborately trimmed store windows and the fabled Rockefeller Center Christmas tree.

"Oh no!" cried Mary Anne Spier. "Please tell me you're not going to make that." She was staring down at the health food cookbook I held in my lap. Her eyes were wide with horror. "Dawn, I really don't think anyone will want to eat tofu apple nut loaf at this party," she added.

The valley that had no name ran between barren hills, a long mottled floor of gray and green covered with soldier moss, lichens, and carpha grasses. It was mid-January--the height of summer--and the crevasses between the patches of broken rock were mortared with tiny pinguicula flowers. To the east, the wall of a snowfield gleamed a bottomless blue. Blackflies and mosquitoes droned in the air, and the summer fogs that shrouded Isla Desolación had temporarily broken apart, allowing a watery sunlight to speckle the valley floor.


To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee

Oh, and since this is the first paragraph thread ...
The haunt of Grand Central Station was a small girl with matted hair and dirty clothes. She appeared only in the commuter hours, morning and evening, when the child believed that she could go invisibly among the throng of travelers in crisscrossing foot traffic, as if that incredible face could go anywhere without attracting stares. Concessionaires reached for their phones to call the number on a policeman's card and say, "She's back."
Find Me

About the Road - While I'm glad you are liking it I must say it is one of my least favorite books - I found the style "annoying" not poetic. I realize he is doing it for a reason - but the lack of puncutation and the strange wording totally did not work for me....
For instance..."Nights dark beyond darkness and the days more gray each one than what had gone before."
I posted that on a writer's forum once and they all ripped it apart as one of the worst sentences they have ever seen -- then I told them who wrote it and they were all like -- Oh no that is great!! Your opinion on writing shouldn't change once you know it is from a Pulitzer winner!
Robin.

Outwardly, I suppose, our street looked pretty much the same as any other in the working-class section of a Lancashire mill town did in those days. They were all dreadfully alike, with their endless sad rows of houses facing another across the cobblestones, the brick darkened by age and soot, the short, stubby chimmeys jutting out of the slate roof into murky skies, along with the tall, slender stacks of the mills that were sometimes half-buried in the smoke and clouds.
-- The Invisible Wall: A Love Story That Broke Barriers by Harry Bernstein


I'm glad that you're enjoying Flight, though. I hope you get to read more of Alexie. A good place to go, if you're interested, is his book The Lone Ranger and Tonto Fistfight in Heaven. It's a collection of short stories, and it was my introduction to his work. Truly some powerful writing.
Sherry, I'd definitely give The Road one of my top spots this year. I've just been incredibly impressed throughout. :)
Fiona, I loved Stiff. Mary Roach really has a way of making potentially grotesque subject matter really funny while at the same time being respectful. And I totally want to be a head in a roasting pan now. ;)

That's the worst sentence I've ever read. :)
The thing is, many great books are written in a particular voice that's peculiar to the book. That's the quality that makes them great. That's the difference between writers who are merely competent and writers who are truly great.
There's a fine line between crappiness and genius, and the merely competent are afraid to approach it.
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