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Promised (Birthmarked, #3)
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Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) So, what do you think is going to happen?


message 2: by Alessia (last edited Jul 11, 2012 03:51PM) (new) - rated it 4 stars

Alessia (siriostars) um well...
basically Sage's fanfic... its really good (I helped her make the plot and I edited it a bit for her.)
But instead of Leonjust giving Gaia the bracelet this is what will happen:
Gaia's POV
Leon takes a deep breath. "I know I've already asked this twice before but Gaia..." I could see him swallow. Dread, or was it excitement, clawed at my stomach. "I can't afford to lose you. I love you Gaia. I love you more than anything. Nobody and nothing could ever replace you." He bends down on one knee, takes another deep breath and pulls out a bracelet.
"What?" I blurt out. Leon's face reddens.
"Well, I don't exactly have a big enough finger to put a ring on it." He holds up his hand and I see the ring finger that is only half there. I wince and suck in a finger.
"What about the other hand?" I ask him. Leon looks at me puzzled. I feel my face heat up as I realize that I shouldn't have asked that.
"What... you don't know... oh wait sorry I forgot you didn't learn the same stuff we did inside the wall." I nod and he continues to explain. " If you put on the right hand (sorry if this is wrong im not very sure about things like this) that means you have had a divorce with the person you married." At my puzzled look he explains what a divorce is. "A divorce is when people are married but wish that they weren't married anymore." I nod.
"Oh."
"You sorta ruined the moment back there."
"Well, I'm sorry. I just..."
"I know. I know. But I had it all written out and then you just interrupt me."
"I said I was sorry." I pout, crossing my arms over my chest. "I'm just..."
"Nervous? Be in my position. I'm the person actually proposing."
I let out a quiet laugh while Leon smiles at me.
"Gaia... I love you."
"Love you too, Leon."
"We've been through so much... This might be the last time we ever see each other... please?" I stare at Leon. His eyes are full of love. And that's when it hits me how much he meant to me. He was the universe to me. Everything. He meant more to me than even Maya. I sigh pull Leon up to his feet and pull him in for a kiss. Once we pull away Leon smirks.
"I'm going to take that as a yes."

*fangirl squeal* <3 they're so cute together.


Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) I know, I've read what she has of the fan fic, but what other ideas to you have? Like: how important is her brother going to be? Will wwe find who her other brother is? And from the description I'm worried something bad is going to happen to Leon.


Alessia (siriostars) omg ikr! I feel like something bad is either going to happen to Leon or Gaia...
YES! BOTH OF HER BROTHER'S SHOULD BE IMPORTANT!! that's what I would write if I was Caragh but unfortunetly I'm not ;(. hmm :/


Alessia (siriostars) Sage wrote: "Moss wrote: "um well...
basically Sage's fanfic... its really good (I helped her make the plot and I edited it a bit for her.)"

Just so you know, I added betrayals and Rhea and pairings. Moss want..."


-__- WHY?? I DONT LIKE KYLE! HE'S LIKE A PEDOPHILE OR SOMETHING!!


Alessia (siriostars) Sage wrote: "I've always wondered what Birthmarked would be in a parallel universe... *evil grin*"

... are you going to write a crossover?


Alessia (siriostars) Sage wrote: "If I were caragh I would feel very strange right now. OMG that was such a sweet moment... I've been writing out sweet moments like that for the epilogue except... well, unfortunately my fanfic won'..."

yes yes you are just rambiling (LIKE NUDGE!! wait why am I talking about MR in a Birthmarked thingy...). But good ideas! update soon please?


Alessia (siriostars) Well if you make grizzly details... Hehehe... We will be having some pretty gross Calaysee and Katniss POVs...


Alessia (siriostars) ... this has gotten random...
and the 50th
SO WHAT HAPPENED TO THE AWESOME ODIN? DID HE DIE? WHAT WILL THE BRACELET BE ABOUT? WHAT WILL GAIA HAVE TO SACRIFICE?? SO MANY QUESTIONS!!


Alessia (siriostars) SHE WILL SACRIFICE MAYA!! D: or she could pretend to be in love with Peter and then the Protectorat will be like, "GIVE ME PETER OR EVERYONE WILL DIE!" so Gaia will just be like, "OKAY HAVE HIM!" XD i dont like Peter...


Alessia (siriostars) I KNOW BUT IM TALKING ABOUT THE ACUAL PROMISED!!

.. You WANT to sacifice Maya or you want Gaia to pretend?


Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) Okay, I just started re-reading Birthmarked and I'm wondering if Old Meg will show up in Promised? What do you guys think?


Alessia (siriostars) ... I kinda just thought she died... I mean she was kinda old. (it's in her nickname... XD) and Gaia almost couldn't save Maya so I don't know. Maybe she did survive but idk...


Alessia (siriostars) ... noooo... dont finish... I dont want you to finish... it'll make my fanfic seem so loooooooong because I started before you and still not done... and you're about to be finished and ugh...


Alessia (siriostars) YAY!! *claps*


Alessia (siriostars) Odin: WHAT HAPPENED TO HIM??


Alessia (siriostars) WHY DO YOU WANT DRAMA?? its annoying sometimes


Alessia (siriostars) ikr


Alessia (siriostars) no i havent


Alessia (siriostars) no i hope he lives his life in a prison cell all alone, rotting away. Dying horribly isn't that bad. He has to pay for what he did.


Alessia (siriostars) i want him to live with the guilt


Alessia (siriostars) ... Then i'll burn the book along with nevermore if its not fax.


Alessia (siriostars) IF FANG AND MAX DONT END UP TOGETHER ILL DIE!! AND THEN KILL JAMES PATTERSON WHILE IM A GHOST AND REWRITE THE WHOLE SERIES WHERE DYLAN DOESNT EVEN EXIST!!


Alessia (siriostars) I pre orderd it already :D FAXY FAX FAX!! :D


bailey blu (itbeblu) PROMISED in the birthmarked trilogy it just arrived although its checked out.=(Although i get it next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!=)


Elizabeth (fantasynerd365) What? It doesn;t come out until October!


Alessia (siriostars) .... You live in a different country or somethin'??


Alessia (siriostars) They werent hidden...


Alessia (siriostars) Yep.


Alessia (siriostars) Nope. Cuz it wasnt that big of a spoiler. I kinda saw it coming


Alessia (siriostars) *facepalm* oh sage-y


Alessia (siriostars) Same


Alessia (siriostars) XD im reading 23 XD


Alessia (siriostars) I know... But its fun.


Alessia (siriostars) I cant do that...


Alessia (siriostars) No it wont!! Ack. Too confusing


Alessia (siriostars) Ohhh ok idk


Alessia (siriostars) Whats my name?
Simon: ITS BILL!
Me in head: -_- shut up please


Alessia (siriostars) UGH!!! PICKLES SIMON PICKLES!!
Did you remember what sophie said?
When my cousin's got married they use the word pickles to each other to tell the other that they're stressed out.
They .. Married... Each other?


Alessia (siriostars) But it doesnt work like that...


Alessia (siriostars) It doesnt.


Alessia (siriostars) So.... BLECH EW!! ARGH!!! ACK!! *erases mind* so... Whats up?


Alessia (siriostars) AACCCKK NOOO!!! *erases mind again* WAAAATTTTSSSSSSOOOOOONNN!! NICOOOO IM WEIRD!!!


Alessia (siriostars) Ka- ka killa ka ka killa bees what? Ka- ka killa ka ka killa bees what? Ka- ka killa ka ka killa bees what? Ka- ka killa ka ka killa bees what?


Alessia (siriostars) Osh asha sh sh sha Or somethin like that..


Alessia (siriostars) PLANKING!!!!! XD
A jellyfish a jellyish a jellyfish


Alessia (siriostars) IKR!! ITS SO AWESOME!!!


bailey blu (itbeblu) it showed in my library page when i searched at the library


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