The Sword and Laser discussion



The Character Development was brilliant and Hobb didn't finish yet! I even started the second book!



If I wasn't getting ready for GenCon, I'd go find the book & read it again so I could pull up specifics. Maybe after that...



As for Fitz, he did seem to struggle with things I wouldn't have. But he was in his preteen and teen years. When I was that age, my biggest dilemmas were when my mom made me clean up my room or wouldn't let me stay out as late as I wanted to. It seemed realistic that he would be confused about what to do in even basic moral dilemmas since he was left to his own devices. He spent most of his youth wandering around, hanging out with the betters by the wharf, and then went under the tutelage of an assassin. Probably not the best way to give someone a solid foundation of right and wrong. Keeping this in mind, I found his navigating of the complex politics of the world he was thrown in to be admirable.


The only thing I didn't enjoy was the climactic battle. The description was too exaggerated for my liking.
It didn't make me want to pick up the next book in the trilogy, maybe because it felt a bit too generic.
I read Assassin's Apprentice about a year ago and I have trouble remembering the details. I keep confusing Fitz with Edeard from Peter F. Hamilton's Void trilogy. Even though Edeard was just a character in the dreams of one of the protagonist, his coming of age story was much more captivating and memorable.


The second audiobook is 29 hrs and 21 mins long. I rather catch up on four books by Isaac Asimov or Philip K. Dick in the same time. :)


The only thing I didn't enjoy was the climactic b..."
I sort of considered the Forged as zombies. Yeah, they were not technical living-dead zombies, but very, very close IMO.

I agree, they are close to zombies, but I give her credit for not calling them zombies as opposed to James S.A. Corey and their "vomit zombies".

I actually enjoyed the final battle scene. I felt it really helped to develop Verity as a powerful character. For me he started weak, then his strength as he battles the raiders with his skill is revealed. But that final battle reveals him as far more powerful than I had originally thought. It was those final scenes that made him one of my favorite characters. It was also the first time I felt that Fitz didn't allow himself to be just a pawn but actually tried to make a stand.


While I wouldn't agree with this statement I do feel the third one was too bloated and lost its way. The first one however was excellent. Great characters and a fantastic story that moved a long at a gentle yet compelling pace. I enjoyed it just as much now as I did ten years ago.

However, (view spoiler)
That said, I loved the writing and the world building. I really liked the idea of The Forged and didn't think of them as zombies. To me, zombies go about chewing up brains, and I thought that the forged, who (view spoiler) to be quite refreshing. I thought they would factor in the story more, but alas, were just a sideshow.

I completly agree. It has been a long time since I have had a book that is hard to put down. With this book Hobb found a way to tell a great story and completly suck me in without a big epic quest and cliff hangers at every turn.

Chad and Shrewd were using the same techniques of grooming as other adults who want children to do distasteful things - sell drugs, have sex, steal things....

I'm almost done with book 2 and I think it is a better book in many ways. I'm still enjoying Hobb's portrayal of a male psyche, but my very male alter ego(not to say that I have any female alter egos) is missing the detailed "stylized violence" such as Steven Erikson is good at in his Malazan series. Or the very realistic and visceral violence and detailed battle tactics such as Bernard Cornwell's Warlord Series or Saxon series.
But the intrigue and characterization are top notch, more so even in the second book - I'm regularly outraged, frustrated and generally wanting to wrap my hands around certain evil characters' necks and yell "This is how you deal with murderous traitorous scum, Fitz!" I probably wouldn't last all that long in Fitz' world.

Oooh, I've just started that bit! At least Fitz has expanded his hand to hand technique to include ax fighting. The thing about ax fighting though is, you actually need an ax.

I agree, they are close to zombies, but I give he..."
You guys had to go and say the zed word.


All that being said I really enjoyed the last part of the book, It compelled me enough that I am going to pick up the second book, even though I had been reasonably sure throughout the rest of it that I would not.



Yeah, but you also gotta keep in mind it's established early on that Fitz must tread carefully. The fact he has royal blood in him is every bit as problematic as his being a bastard. More so since he gained the attention of King Shrewd. Passivity probably seems like the best way to avoid unfavorable confrontation from the likes of people like Regal and Galen or the people closer to his age group who curry favor to the likes of Regal and Galen. That Fitz doesn't comes into his own until the end is - I think - a perfectly acceptable progression to his character arc.
I did think Verity was a wonderful character as well. It's definitely good to have someone like him in your court and as your King-In-Waiting. The Fool I thought was an intriguing character. I definitely found myself wanting to know more about him.

Good call. The funniest part of the book is when Fitz first talks to the Fool. At first the Fool is speaking nonsense, but then he speaks with perfect clarity. That was great.


The first book sets the character up. In the next books it becomes more fast paced with Fitz right in the middle of things and going and doing more stuff.

Wonderful! I will have to give it a go :)

That said, I found the setting too depressing to want to spend time in it. I think I am probably too old to have come to this book new. Fitz is in a right fix from the beginning. There is no way for him to completely get what he wants, and most of the characters in the book are in a similar position. I don't need a happy ending; but I if I want to read something painful, I'll read something for work.
I liked the world building in general, but there were a few things that bugged me. The size and scale of the duchies seems off. Maybe it was just the way I took it when I read, but the "feel" for the travel is as important as how far things actually are. I think Ms. Hobb did a very good job of writing men generally, but the changes that Fitz's body goes through seem to be too quick at times and too slow in others.
I have no real issue with Fitz being emo. He is the right age to feel that way, and is actually in an awkward position socially on top of it. He is also in the thrall of drugs from an early age (some his doing, some not), and drugs and alcohol only make depression worse.
I actually thought if anything, her women were the ones that seemed flat and one-note. Part of that could be that even N-Fitz doesn't understand women and sees them more simply than they are, but I don't think so. The women in all three books seemed to have a sign on them stating their archetype and tropes. Verity, Burrich, Chade and Shrewd are all much more nuanced portrayals, in my humble opinion.
So I guess I would say I liked the books, but they aren’t my favorites. I wouldn’t recommend them, but I wouldn’t dissuade anyone from reading them either.


I was a bit confused at the end when (view spoiler) Did anyone else get it?
I did find (view spoiler) at the very end a bit of a deus ex machina. There was absolutely no foreshadowing of this, and it seemed a bit too pat.
Like Dwayne, I also thought Fool was a very interesting character. I also had a lot more respect for Verity by the end of the book and a lot less for Shrewd.

I did want to question one point though but I am going to make a thread on that topic alone I think.

However - I am with veronica I love these books. The fact that its dark and depressing and magic is hard, and the fact that Fitz is human and has a mix of good and bad qualities, makes this a great read. I think its one of the first fantasy series I read that took a more gritty and realistic take on the genre, and then there have been lots more like Joe Abercrombie that have carried that on. But still rates as one of my favourite 'Sword' series.


I know what you are saying, but compared to the average person in the town his life is pretty good. When I read your comment this immediately went through my head:
MORTICIAN: Who's that then?
CUSTOMER: I don't know.
MORTICIAN: Must be a king.
CUSTOMER: Why?
MORTICIAN: He hasn't got shit all over him.

My review.

I agree, they are close to zombies, but I give he..."
THANK YOU. I just finished Leviathan Wakes, and really enjoyed it, but as soon as I saw "vomit zombies" as a term they were taking seriously and not just using as a one-off quip, I was pretty annoyed.

Normally I discuss books with a small group of friends who seem to have similar opinions as I do about most of the books.
I am enjoying the first person perspective that limits your knowledge of events and motivations of the other characters.
I've been catching up on the SoIaF books this year and it's been great contrast to the multiple person perspectives that you get from those books.

I loved this book. I was interested by it from the first page and continued to enjoy it but my love for it grew as I read more and more. I really enjoyed it's pace and found that the more I read the more I wanted to read and the story built. By the time I reached the last few chapters I think I was literally on the edge of my seat, finding that the final sequence of events kept taking turns as soon as I thought I had to figure out, which kept me on my toes.
I didn't dislike Fitz, I'm interested to see his character grow. But my favorite character by far was the Fool. Now there's a mystery!
I would not recommend reading this book with your dog curled up on your lap though.

Finished reading it last night. I've only been with the club since The Magicians. Although I liked The Assassin's Apprentice, this was my least favourite book I've read since I joined the club. I have a couple of friend though who I will be recommending this book to, so I get that some people are going to connect more with the story than I did.
My issue is simply that first-person narration is harder to pull off because if the reader doesn't fall in love with your main character, they're going to find your book a bit of a slog to get through. I found Fitz's story interesting, but I didn't find Fitz all that interesting as a character. I read about things happening to Fitz rather than hearing about Fitz making things happen.
And because the story was told in first person, it was harder to flesh out the other characters. I think this happened eventually, but it was rather time consuming. A lot of people have pointed out that the book does pick up steam around chapter 17. While this is true, I think some readers would like to be hooked a bit sooner.
Who would I recommend this book to? Those new to fantasy, those who get annoyed with fantasy books with 15+ major character to keep track of and animal lovers. I will probably read the next book in the series, but I don't feel the need to run out and get it immediately, like I have with some of our more recent picks.

I really enjoy the world and I'm interested to see what becomes of young Fitz after his ordeal at Jhaampe. I found Fitz engaging enough a character to want to see him mature. As is the case for other media, good character development is key to writing a good book. If you don't care about the character, it's hard to care about what happens to him/her and what's going on around him/her. And as with everything, one person's good character development is another's annoyance.
TL;DR: Good book with interesting characters.
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