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June 20, 2025
Cover Reveal: Beloved Beauty

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Alex and Magnolia have survived lies, long-distance heartbreak, and the kind of silence that could’ve ruined everything. Now, they’re engaged and finally chasing forever—together.
But love isn’t always smooth sailing.
When Magnolia decides to trade her American roots for a life in Australia, it feels like the beginning of everything they’ve dreamed of. A home. A future. A second chance to build what was almost lost.
Until the past returns—with claws.
Tyson. Celeste. The paparazzi. The shadows they thought they’d outrun come roaring back, threatening not only their peace but their future.
And Alex is done running.
As the final showdown looms, Magnolia and Alex will have to fight harder than ever—for each other, for their privacy, and for the love that was always worth the war.
Because true love doesn’t cower.
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It defends.
It wins.
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Published on June 20, 2025 04:00
May 27, 2025
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Magnolia Steel returns home from Australia, but her heart is still tangled up in Alex Sebring—the former rugby star who made her believe in something real.
Real enough to try the impossible––long distance.
The time zones are brutal. The distance, worse.
But they make a promise—to hold on, even when everything else tells them to let go.
Until someone in the shadows pulls the strings.
Two messages.
Two lies.
Two broken hearts—each left believing the other walked away.
For Alex, the silence becomes unbearable. The heartbreak. The what-ifs. It all spirals into a storm of anxiety and depression he can’t outrun.
Then—hope. A chance to reclaim the life he lost.
A shot at a professional comeback. One last opportunity to fight for the game torn away from him. To take it, he’ll need surgery.
The procedure brings him to the States… and back into the path of the woman he never forgot.
The heat between them hasn’t faded.
If anything, it burns hotter than ever.
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May 23, 2025
Cover Reveal: American Beauty


Magnolia Steel returns home from Australia, but her heart is still tangled up in Alex Sebring—the former rugby star who made her believe in something real.
Real enough to try the impossible––long distance.
The time zones are brutal. The distance, worse.
But they make a promise—to hold on, even when everything else tells them to let go.
Until someone in the shadows pulls the strings.
Two messages.
Two lies.
Two broken hearts—each left believing the other walked away.
For Alex, the silence becomes unbearable. The heartbreak. The what-ifs. It all spirals into a storm of anxiety and depression he can’t outrun.
Then—hope. A chance to reclaim the life he lost.
A shot at a professional comeback. One last opportunity to fight for the game torn away from him. To take it, he’ll need surgery.
The procedure brings him to the States… and back into the path of the woman he never forgot.
The heat between them hasn’t faded.
If anything, it burns hotter than ever.
They weren’t meant to fall apart. But they’ll have to fight like hell to come back together.

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Published on May 23, 2025 11:41
May 7, 2025
Beauty from Pain

Jack McLachlan has it all—wealth, power, and the title of Australia’s most eligible bachelor. But life at the top comes with its fair share of complications, and Jack has found the perfect solution: carefully arranged, no-strings-attached relationships that last just long enough to keep things fun.
No emotions. No messy breakups. Just three perfect months.
Then Laurelyn Prescott walks into his life.
The gorgeous, fiercely independent American musician is everything Jack didn’t know he was missing. She challenges his rules, breaks down his walls, and turns his world upside down. What starts as a casual arrangement quickly becomes something neither of them expected—something that changes everything.
Jack’s rules were meant to keep his heart safe, but Laurelyn makes him question if some risks are worth taking.
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I try to calculate how much longer it is until we land in Sydney. My exhaustion makes it difficult for me to do the simple equation in my head, but it looks like it’s still almost two hours until I will feel solid ground beneath my feet again. I sigh and tell myself to be patient. I’ve made it this far. I can take another two hours. I mean, I don’t really have a choice at this point, right?
I look at my best friend sleeping in the seat next to me and I’m irritated. Addison has slept most of the flight, leaving me to entertain myself. She offered to share her Valium, but I declined, certain I wouldn’t need it. Wrong.
I climb over Addison and take a walk up and down the aisle to stretch my legs, which helps me feel better. Upon returning to my seat, I decide reading will help pass the time, so I grab my e-reader and pick up where I stopped on the slutmance I’d started earlier. Only at chapter six and of course, the woman is in love with the hot new guy but is in denial. How typical.
Chapter twelve is winding down when the pilot announces that we’ll be landing in Sydney in ten minutes. Addison doesn’t stir, so I put my naughty tale away and nudge her, knowing it will take the next ten minutes to get her out of her drug-induced slumber.
“Wake up, Addison. We’re almost in Sydney.”
She barely stirs so I nudge her again. “Addison. Get up. We’re in Sydney. You need to get buckled for the landing.”
She lifts her head and stares at me with unfocused eyes. She straightens in her seat and takes a moment to get her bearings. “Wow, that went faster than I expected.”
“I guess so since you were in a freakin’ coma. It was the longest thirteen hours of my life. I didn’t sleep a wink the whole flight because I was too busy wondering if we were going to end up being shark food.” That came out a little pissier than I’d intended.
“Well, there’s no reason to be miserable when you don’t have to be. You should’ve taken a happy pill and then maybe you wouldn’t be so cranky right now.” She won’t have to offer twice on the flight home three months from now. Lesson learned.
Buckled into my seat, I squeeze my eyes as the plane’s wheels screech against pavement. Our fellow passengers erupt into cheer and clapping when we’re safely on the ground. I’m not the only one glad to be getting off this plane.
We collect our three months’ worth of luggage and take a seat in the terminal to wait for our last flight. With an hour layover, I decide to visit the airport bar. “I’m gonna grab a much-needed and well-deserved toddy.”
Addison’s phone rings and I recognize her brother’s ringtone. Before she answers, she gives me a warning. “Be back in thirty minutes or I’m sending security for you.” I don’t reply in words but make sure she sees the hand gesture I have for her.
The airport bar isn’t far from our terminal and I plop down on a stool. “What can I get you?” I might not be able to tell by my surroundings, but I know I’m in Australia when I hear his accent.
“I’d like something from a local brewery. I tend to favor lighter flavors.”
He serves me a pale ale from a Sydney brewery. It’s stout, but good.
I sit at the bar enjoying my ale. The bartender doesn’t try to talk about where I’m from or where I’m heading. He appears to be in his fifties, so I can only assume he’s heard more shit than he’d like over the years and thus isn’t interested in mine. Works fine for me.
When I finish, I go back to where Addison is guarding our huge pile of luggage. “Was Ben calling to check on us?”
“Yeah. He was making sure our flight was running on time. I told him to expect us to arrive around three. He said he’s bringing a friend to help with our luggage.”
I see how many bags we have and I swear we look like a traveling band of gypsies. Most of it is Addison’s, but I have my fair share—there’s no way to pack lightly for a three-month stay. “That’s not a bad idea.”
“He’s my brother. He knows how high maintenance I am.” I sit and prop my feet on the suitcase in front of me. “He didn’t say it, but he’s really excited to meet you.”
He’s really excited to meet me. This is a huge red flag. I hope she isn’t thinking of playing matchmaker.
“Don’t you dare even think about encouraging him.” I’m not interested in dating anyone right now. She knows this better than anyone. This whole Australia gig is about getting away from all that shit, not finding another pile of it.
“He hasn’t dated many Aussies while he’s lived here. I’m just saying you shouldn’t be surprised if he tries to start something with you.”
Oh, hell no. We’re not even there yet and she’s already trying to hook us up. “It’s not happening, Addison.”
“You’ll be living in the same apartment with him for the next three months. Who knows what could happen?”
Okay. Now, I’m getting pissed because it feels like I’m being ambushed. “I might not know what will happen, but I know what won’t, so forget it.”
“Fine, fine, I won’t mention it again. Ben wants to take us out tonight, but I know you haven’t slept much. I told him you might not feel like it.”
“Maybe I’ll feel up to it if I can catch a power nap on the flight to Wagga Wagga.”
This time it’s Addison nudging me when our flight is preparing to land. “Laurelyn. Wake up. We’re finally here.”
I sit up and fluff my long brown hair. I look terrible when it’s flat and I’m sure it’s lying against my head after my nap.
I couldn’t have slept more than forty minutes, but I welcome the overall refreshed feeling it brings—except for my mouth. The combination of mouth breathing, beer drinking, and lack of oral hygiene during our travels has skunked things up. I don’t want to meet Addison’s brother for the first time and have him question which end is my face. “I need some gum. Do you have any on you?”
Addison reaches into her purse and holds out the lime-green pack in my direction. “Doublemint work for you?”
I take two pieces because I’m fairly certain it’s going to take two shots of Doublemint to do the job. “Thanks.”
We walk out of the jet bridge with our carry-ons and I see two great-looking guys standing in the terminal watching the disembarking passengers. I know Ben as soon as I see him. I could pick him out of a crowd anywhere, even if I’d never seen his picture. There’s no way to miss him; he’s the perfect male version of Addison. His blond hair is darker than hers (her monthly date with the hairdresser helps those playful highlights). Their olive skin presents a striking contrast with their light hair. He is stunning, just like his sister, but in a masculine way. It’s too bad I’m not interested in dating because he is hot.
He puts his arms around his sister’s middle and squeezes as he lifts her from the floor and spins several times. “I can’t believe my little sister has come all this way to see me.” He lowers her feet to the floor and looks at me. “And you must be Laurelyn.”
“Indeed I am.”
Addison and I have been best friends since we met our freshman year at Vanderbilt, but my path has always failed to cross Ben’s for one reason or another. Now that we’re meeting after four years, I’m not sure if I should extend my hand for a shake or lift my arms for a hug, so I wait for his cue.
He goes for the hug. “It’s good to meet you, Laurelyn. I’ve been hearing about you for years, so I feel like I already know you.”
“I hope my best friend hasn’t ruined your opinion of me.”
“Never.” His crooked grin shows off one of his deep dimples. It’s not a friendly nice to meet you smile. He’s flirting with me already, so I’m wondering what my good pal might have told him.
Addison clears her throat. “Are you going to introduce us to your friend?”
The vibe I’m getting from Ben makes me uncomfortable, so I’m happy to shift my focus from him to his buddy. Zac is tall with an athletic build. His dark hair is buzzed close to his scalp except for the spiked tuft on top, and long, sooty lashes frame his almost-black eyes. He’s wearing a fitted black T-shirt and I spy the tribal art tat wrapping around his bicep. His whole exterior screams trouble and that means one thing: my bad-boy-loving pal is going to be all over him.
He offers his hand to Addison first. “It’s very nice to meet you.”
Oh, swoon. I’m not into guys like him, but I could listen to his smooth Aussie accent all day.
I think I hear a sigh from Addison, and I know she’s thinking the same thing. “It’s great to meet you. Love your accent.”
He offers his hand to me, but not his attention—that still belongs to Addison. “I hope your trip has been a pleasant one.”
The trip here wasn’t a damn bit pleasant, but it’s rude to complain to someone I’ve just met. Addison replies, so I’m neither forced to lie nor complain because she is eager to keep Mr. Dark and Handsome’s attention. “We had a super trip.”
“Do you ladies feel up for hitting a club tonight?”
I feel like hitting something, but it’s called a bed.
Addison is well rested from her snooze on the plane, so that means I’ll be the party pooper if I decline, which I’ve never been labeled as, and I don’t intend to start now. “I’m like an Energizer bunny, ready to go.”
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Enjoy Chapter One “First of all, I’m not looking for a man. So let’s start there.”
Joy––my coworker and hopeless romantic who fancies herself a matchmaker––leans back in her chair. She eyes me like I’ve said the most absurd thing she’s ever heard. “Not looking for a man? Magnolia, that’s like saying you don’t want sunshine in your life.”
I fold my arms across my chest. “Sunshine? Puh-lease. Men are not sunshine. They’re more like passing clouds—here one minute, gone the next. Some of them are full-on thunderstorms, leaving nothing but chaos and destruction in their wake. Thanks, but I can live without that kind of sunshine in my life.”
Joy takes out her phone and turns the screen toward me, displaying a picture. “My brother is perfect for you. He’s tall, handsome, successful, and he has hair. Not just hair—magnificent hair. Do you realize how many men in this world are bald? Ethan is as rare as rocking-horse manure.”
Not every woman’s out here building a dream man from a checklist. Looks aren’t everything—God knows some of the best-looking men have taught me the hardest lessons. Great hair won’t hold you when you’re falling apart. A sharp jawline doesn’t make you feel safe. And charming smiles? Those fade fast when the truth comes out. Some of us have learned to want more. A man who listens. Who shows up. Who stays when it’s hard, not just when it’s easy.
“You compared your brother to manure.”
“Fitting since he can be a little shit sometimes. But otherwise, he’s great. You’d love him.”
I glance at the photo. Ethan isn’t fugly—in fact, he’s good-looking—but he’s a little too pretty. He looks like he spends more time on his hair than I spend on mine.
“Yeah, well, I’m sure Ethan is fantastic, as is his hair, but I’m not in the market for a man.”
Violet jumps into the conversation with a smirk. “Unless he’s Dak Prescott. In that case, she’d drop everything and start planning their football-themed wedding.”
I let out a dreamy sigh. “I mean, why wouldn’t I? The man is perfection wrapped in a football jersey. And let’s be honest, I’d make the perfect Mrs. Prescott.”
Joy laughs, undeterred. “Unless Dak shows up at the front desk asking for you, I’d say my brother still has a shot.”
I shake my head though a smile tugs at my lips. “I’m happy biding my time until Dak realizes I’m his soulmate.”
Joy raises a brow. “You know my brother’s a private chef, right? He could cook gourmet dinners for you every night.”
I stop in my tracks; the idea of perfectly prepared meals every day is tempting. A plate of something fresh—straight from the farmer’s market—has a certain appeal.
“Just think of the roasted vegetables fresh from his private garden.” Joy winks, aware of my weakness for anything fresh and unprocessed, clearly trying to use it to her advantage.
I click my tongue, smirking. “You sneaky little vegetable pusher.”
Joy’s lips curl into a devious smile. “Well, you are a vegetable harlot. All it takes is a good-looking carrot, and you’re ready to commit.”
I laugh. “Hey, I have standards. It’s only the finest carrots for me.”
Before Joy can come back with another reason I should drop everything and date her brother, Gabby’s voice cuts through the office buzz, pulling everyone’s attention toward her. “All right, everyone, conference room in five.”
“Saved by the boss,” I say to Violet, keeping my words between us as I stand up and grab my notebook.
Violet smirks and leans in closer. “Makes you wonder why Joy’s so eager to play matchmaker for her brother if he’s truly as rare as rocking-horse manure.”
I grin, whispering back, “Probably because she only got the manure part right.”
We file into the conference room where Gabby stands. “All right, let’s settle in, everyone.”
Elijah catches my eye from across the room, his grin wide. He leans back in his chair, tossing a wink my way. I give him a polite nod though my fingers tighten around the edge of my notebook. I focus elsewhere, pretending not to notice when his gaze lingers a little too long.
Gabby clears her throat, and the room gradually quiets. Her gaze sweeps over us, and she gives a small, proud smile. “As all of you know, Soul Sync started as a crazy idea in my living room and has grown into something bigger than I ever imagined. We didn’t want to be just another matchmaking service. Our goal has always been to help people find meaningful connections, not swipe-right hookups.”
I’m reminded of my passion for this job as Gabby speaks. Soul Sync isn’t just my job; it’s my home. I can’t see myself doing this kind of work anywhere else.
“I know I’ve asked a lot from each of you along the way, but look at us now. Soul Sync is thriving, and that’s thanks to your hard work and dedication.”
She pauses, looking around the room, her eyes softening. “You’ve all helped build something truly special here—an elite service where we prioritize genuine, soul-deep partnerships over superficial nonsense. And trust me, that’s rare these days.”
Rare as rocking-horse manure.
Gabby continues, “We’re not just matching people. We’re changing people’s lives, and that’s because of you.”
She’s right. Finding something real in a world of shallow connections and fleeting encounters is like stumbling upon a rose among briars.
The irony isn’t lost on me, though—working for a company dedicated to helping people find deep connections while I’ve only ever had fleeting, surface-level relationships myself.
The mood lightens as she cracks a grin. “And if I can survive launching a company fueled mostly by caffeine and blind optimism, I think we can handle whatever comes next.”
A ripple of nods and smiles spreads through the room as her words sink in.
“Speaking of what comes next… as you all know, Soul Sync has been testing the waters internationally. We’ve received news that our beta test in Australia is successful. We’ve officially landed clients down under.”
A round of applause erupts, and I clap along. Soul Sync’s expansion to Australia is huge, and the excitement in the room is undeniable.
Gabby beams, waiting for the applause to die down. “This is a huge win for us, but the real challenge starts now—delivering our services on the other side of the world. We’re talking about building a sister company from the ground up: designing entire matchmaking sets, coordinating events, and managing client experiences in a brand-new market.”
She pauses, her gaze sweeping the room. “I need volunteers for a three-month assignment in Sydney. This is more than a job. It’s an opportunity to help shape the future of Soul Sync. Please understand––you will be leaving home and living out of hotels while you’re building something new from the ground up. Your responsibilities will include overseeing installations, working directly with clients, and ensuring that every detail runs smoothly. This is your chance to be part of something truly monumental.”
I glance around, noticing the hesitant faces. This is a big ask—three months away from home, working in a high-pressure environment. But for me, it feels like exactly what I need. I love a challenge, and the thought of leading set designs in an entirely new market has my mind racing with possibilities. A new city, new people, a chance to prove myself and focus on my work—no distractions.
And no matchmaking or blind dates I didn’t ask for.
But best of all? No constant feedback from Macy. She’s excellent at what she does, but we always have to collaborate on set designs, which means compromises. I wonder what it would be like to have full creative control, to bring my ideas to life without running every decision by someone else. This Sydney assignment could be my chance to do precisely that.
Besides, Sydney? Who wouldn’t jump at the chance to work there for three months?
Gabby continues, “I know some of you have families or commitments that might make this difficult, and that’s completely understandable. We need people who are flexible and ready to take on the challenge.”
Without hesitating, I raise my hand. “I’ll go. The other set designers are married, and I’m single. This is the perfect opportunity for me.”
Gabby smiles. “Thank you, Magnolia. I knew I could count on you.”
From the corner of my eye, I catch Macy’s reaction. Her lips press into a tight line, and she adjusts her posture, crossing her arms. The slight narrowing of her eyes is all I need to see to know that she’s not thrilled about me stepping up for this. She’s never liked it when I get a bit of the spotlight.
I feel Violet’s eyes on me, and when I turn, she’s smiling, her raised eyebrow saying it all—she’s proud of me, maybe even a little impressed. The look says, I knew you had it in you.
I wish she could come too. Violet would be the perfect person to share this adventure with—her sharp wit and calm presence would make any high-pressure situation bearable. But it’s not possible. Not with her mom battling cancer. Violet wouldn’t leave her mom’s side for anything, not even an opportunity like this. She’s the kind of daughter who’d drop everything to be there for her family, and honestly, I admire her for it.
Elijah’s hand shoots up next. “I’ll go too. Magnolia and I work well together.”
Great. Just what I need.
Elijah has been hovering around me for months, always finding excuses to stick close—offering to carry materials, hanging around after meetings, and dropping hints about grabbing dinner. It’s obvious what he wants, but I’m not interested. Not in him, and certainly not like that. He tries too hard, always grinning like he’s auditioning for a toothpaste commercial.
Don’t get me wrong. Elijah’s nice, but his persistence is smothering. I feel like I need a personal bubble to breathe around him.
Gabby nods. “Thank you, Elijah. Your skills will be a valuable addition to the team. We are going to need all the help we can get.”
Sophie and Whitney, who handle client experience, raise their hands next.
They’re both sharp, hardworking, and—like me—single. If anyone could make this trip productive and fun, it’s them. We’ve always worked well together, and I’m already imagining the late-night brainstorming sessions turning into laughter-filled conversations over a bottle of wine. Or three. There’s a sense of camaraderie among us, an unspoken understanding that we’ve got each other’s backs.
Soul Sync has its pressures, but the women here—mostly—are a team. There’s no cattiness, no competition—only support. I’m hopeful this assignment will be a career boost and a chance to make some unforgettable memories with Sophie and Whitney along the way.
Gabby’s gaze settles on me. “Magnolia, you’ll be leading the set designs, but would you consider also serving as a social coordinator with Rebecca’s help? She’ll be assisting remotely from the U.S. You would have her support, even from a distance.”
This will definitely be different. Gabby can’t send an entire team, so with a smaller crew, it’s crucial for everyone to step up and take on multiple responsibilities—even those outside their comfort zones. I’m used to designing sets, not managing the social flow of events, but this is a huge opportunity, and flexibility is part of the deal. We’ll all have to juggle roles we didn’t necessarily sign up for if this is to succeed.
I nod. “I’d be happy to.”
Rebecca leans forward with a reassuring smile. “Don’t worry, Magnolia. I’ve got your back with the social coordination stuff. We’ll make sure everything runs smoothly. Think of it as your chance to flex some new skills.” She finishes with a wink.
Gabby smiles. “That’s what I love to hear. It’ll take some creative problem-solving, but I know we’ll make it work.”
A few more hands go up as Gabby thanks each new volunteer with her usual enthusiasm. The team is starting to take shape, and the room hums with excitement as others begin murmuring about the possibilities ahead.
The meeting wraps up with more applause, and as we head out, Violet nudges me with a smirk. “Elijah volunteering? Guess he’s still convinced he’s got a shot with you, huh?”
I cut my eyes toward Elijah and notice him looking pleased with himself. “Hell has a better shot at hosting a snowball-throwing convention.”
Violet leans in, her words dropping to a whisper. “Maybe you should send him a fruit basket. Like a ‘thanks, but no thanks’ gesture.”
Some men don’t understand that when a woman says she’s not interested, she means it. They think persistence is romantic when it’s really just fucking exhausting.
“With my luck, he’d think it was an invitation to a picnic. You know me, Vi. I’m not looking for romance with him or anyone else. Sydney is about work and furthering my career. So the dude needs to chase someone else’s… fruit basket.”
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Joy––my coworker and hopeless romantic who fancies herself a matchmaker––leans back in her chair. She eyes me like I’ve said the most absurd thing she’s ever heard. “Not looking for a man? Magnolia, that’s like saying you don’t want sunshine in your life.”
I fold my arms across my chest. “Sunshine? Puh-lease. Men are not sunshine. They’re more like passing clouds—here one minute, gone the next. Some of them are full-on thunderstorms, leaving nothing but chaos and destruction in their wake. Thanks, but I can live without that kind of sunshine in my life.”
Joy takes out her phone and turns the screen toward me, displaying a picture. “My brother is perfect for you. He’s tall, handsome, successful, and he has hair. Not just hair—magnificent hair. Do you realize how many men in this world are bald? Ethan is as rare as rocking-horse manure.”
Not every woman’s out here building a dream man from a checklist. Looks aren’t everything—God knows some of the best-looking men have taught me the hardest lessons. Great hair won’t hold you when you’re falling apart. A sharp jawline doesn’t make you feel safe. And charming smiles? Those fade fast when the truth comes out. Some of us have learned to want more. A man who listens. Who shows up. Who stays when it’s hard, not just when it’s easy.
“You compared your brother to manure.”
“Fitting since he can be a little shit sometimes. But otherwise, he’s great. You’d love him.”
I glance at the photo. Ethan isn’t fugly—in fact, he’s good-looking—but he’s a little too pretty. He looks like he spends more time on his hair than I spend on mine.
“Yeah, well, I’m sure Ethan is fantastic, as is his hair, but I’m not in the market for a man.”
Violet jumps into the conversation with a smirk. “Unless he’s Dak Prescott. In that case, she’d drop everything and start planning their football-themed wedding.”
I let out a dreamy sigh. “I mean, why wouldn’t I? The man is perfection wrapped in a football jersey. And let’s be honest, I’d make the perfect Mrs. Prescott.”
Joy laughs, undeterred. “Unless Dak shows up at the front desk asking for you, I’d say my brother still has a shot.”
I shake my head though a smile tugs at my lips. “I’m happy biding my time until Dak realizes I’m his soulmate.”
Joy raises a brow. “You know my brother’s a private chef, right? He could cook gourmet dinners for you every night.”
I stop in my tracks; the idea of perfectly prepared meals every day is tempting. A plate of something fresh—straight from the farmer’s market—has a certain appeal.
“Just think of the roasted vegetables fresh from his private garden.” Joy winks, aware of my weakness for anything fresh and unprocessed, clearly trying to use it to her advantage.
I click my tongue, smirking. “You sneaky little vegetable pusher.”
Joy’s lips curl into a devious smile. “Well, you are a vegetable harlot. All it takes is a good-looking carrot, and you’re ready to commit.”
I laugh. “Hey, I have standards. It’s only the finest carrots for me.”
Before Joy can come back with another reason I should drop everything and date her brother, Gabby’s voice cuts through the office buzz, pulling everyone’s attention toward her. “All right, everyone, conference room in five.”
“Saved by the boss,” I say to Violet, keeping my words between us as I stand up and grab my notebook.
Violet smirks and leans in closer. “Makes you wonder why Joy’s so eager to play matchmaker for her brother if he’s truly as rare as rocking-horse manure.”
I grin, whispering back, “Probably because she only got the manure part right.”
We file into the conference room where Gabby stands. “All right, let’s settle in, everyone.”
Elijah catches my eye from across the room, his grin wide. He leans back in his chair, tossing a wink my way. I give him a polite nod though my fingers tighten around the edge of my notebook. I focus elsewhere, pretending not to notice when his gaze lingers a little too long.
Gabby clears her throat, and the room gradually quiets. Her gaze sweeps over us, and she gives a small, proud smile. “As all of you know, Soul Sync started as a crazy idea in my living room and has grown into something bigger than I ever imagined. We didn’t want to be just another matchmaking service. Our goal has always been to help people find meaningful connections, not swipe-right hookups.”
I’m reminded of my passion for this job as Gabby speaks. Soul Sync isn’t just my job; it’s my home. I can’t see myself doing this kind of work anywhere else.
“I know I’ve asked a lot from each of you along the way, but look at us now. Soul Sync is thriving, and that’s thanks to your hard work and dedication.”
She pauses, looking around the room, her eyes softening. “You’ve all helped build something truly special here—an elite service where we prioritize genuine, soul-deep partnerships over superficial nonsense. And trust me, that’s rare these days.”
Rare as rocking-horse manure.
Gabby continues, “We’re not just matching people. We’re changing people’s lives, and that’s because of you.”
She’s right. Finding something real in a world of shallow connections and fleeting encounters is like stumbling upon a rose among briars.
The irony isn’t lost on me, though—working for a company dedicated to helping people find deep connections while I’ve only ever had fleeting, surface-level relationships myself.
The mood lightens as she cracks a grin. “And if I can survive launching a company fueled mostly by caffeine and blind optimism, I think we can handle whatever comes next.”
A ripple of nods and smiles spreads through the room as her words sink in.
“Speaking of what comes next… as you all know, Soul Sync has been testing the waters internationally. We’ve received news that our beta test in Australia is successful. We’ve officially landed clients down under.”
A round of applause erupts, and I clap along. Soul Sync’s expansion to Australia is huge, and the excitement in the room is undeniable.
Gabby beams, waiting for the applause to die down. “This is a huge win for us, but the real challenge starts now—delivering our services on the other side of the world. We’re talking about building a sister company from the ground up: designing entire matchmaking sets, coordinating events, and managing client experiences in a brand-new market.”
She pauses, her gaze sweeping the room. “I need volunteers for a three-month assignment in Sydney. This is more than a job. It’s an opportunity to help shape the future of Soul Sync. Please understand––you will be leaving home and living out of hotels while you’re building something new from the ground up. Your responsibilities will include overseeing installations, working directly with clients, and ensuring that every detail runs smoothly. This is your chance to be part of something truly monumental.”
I glance around, noticing the hesitant faces. This is a big ask—three months away from home, working in a high-pressure environment. But for me, it feels like exactly what I need. I love a challenge, and the thought of leading set designs in an entirely new market has my mind racing with possibilities. A new city, new people, a chance to prove myself and focus on my work—no distractions.
And no matchmaking or blind dates I didn’t ask for.
But best of all? No constant feedback from Macy. She’s excellent at what she does, but we always have to collaborate on set designs, which means compromises. I wonder what it would be like to have full creative control, to bring my ideas to life without running every decision by someone else. This Sydney assignment could be my chance to do precisely that.
Besides, Sydney? Who wouldn’t jump at the chance to work there for three months?
Gabby continues, “I know some of you have families or commitments that might make this difficult, and that’s completely understandable. We need people who are flexible and ready to take on the challenge.”
Without hesitating, I raise my hand. “I’ll go. The other set designers are married, and I’m single. This is the perfect opportunity for me.”
Gabby smiles. “Thank you, Magnolia. I knew I could count on you.”
From the corner of my eye, I catch Macy’s reaction. Her lips press into a tight line, and she adjusts her posture, crossing her arms. The slight narrowing of her eyes is all I need to see to know that she’s not thrilled about me stepping up for this. She’s never liked it when I get a bit of the spotlight.
I feel Violet’s eyes on me, and when I turn, she’s smiling, her raised eyebrow saying it all—she’s proud of me, maybe even a little impressed. The look says, I knew you had it in you.
I wish she could come too. Violet would be the perfect person to share this adventure with—her sharp wit and calm presence would make any high-pressure situation bearable. But it’s not possible. Not with her mom battling cancer. Violet wouldn’t leave her mom’s side for anything, not even an opportunity like this. She’s the kind of daughter who’d drop everything to be there for her family, and honestly, I admire her for it.
Elijah’s hand shoots up next. “I’ll go too. Magnolia and I work well together.”
Great. Just what I need.
Elijah has been hovering around me for months, always finding excuses to stick close—offering to carry materials, hanging around after meetings, and dropping hints about grabbing dinner. It’s obvious what he wants, but I’m not interested. Not in him, and certainly not like that. He tries too hard, always grinning like he’s auditioning for a toothpaste commercial.
Don’t get me wrong. Elijah’s nice, but his persistence is smothering. I feel like I need a personal bubble to breathe around him.
Gabby nods. “Thank you, Elijah. Your skills will be a valuable addition to the team. We are going to need all the help we can get.”
Sophie and Whitney, who handle client experience, raise their hands next.
They’re both sharp, hardworking, and—like me—single. If anyone could make this trip productive and fun, it’s them. We’ve always worked well together, and I’m already imagining the late-night brainstorming sessions turning into laughter-filled conversations over a bottle of wine. Or three. There’s a sense of camaraderie among us, an unspoken understanding that we’ve got each other’s backs.
Soul Sync has its pressures, but the women here—mostly—are a team. There’s no cattiness, no competition—only support. I’m hopeful this assignment will be a career boost and a chance to make some unforgettable memories with Sophie and Whitney along the way.
Gabby’s gaze settles on me. “Magnolia, you’ll be leading the set designs, but would you consider also serving as a social coordinator with Rebecca’s help? She’ll be assisting remotely from the U.S. You would have her support, even from a distance.”
This will definitely be different. Gabby can’t send an entire team, so with a smaller crew, it’s crucial for everyone to step up and take on multiple responsibilities—even those outside their comfort zones. I’m used to designing sets, not managing the social flow of events, but this is a huge opportunity, and flexibility is part of the deal. We’ll all have to juggle roles we didn’t necessarily sign up for if this is to succeed.
I nod. “I’d be happy to.”
Rebecca leans forward with a reassuring smile. “Don’t worry, Magnolia. I’ve got your back with the social coordination stuff. We’ll make sure everything runs smoothly. Think of it as your chance to flex some new skills.” She finishes with a wink.
Gabby smiles. “That’s what I love to hear. It’ll take some creative problem-solving, but I know we’ll make it work.”
A few more hands go up as Gabby thanks each new volunteer with her usual enthusiasm. The team is starting to take shape, and the room hums with excitement as others begin murmuring about the possibilities ahead.
The meeting wraps up with more applause, and as we head out, Violet nudges me with a smirk. “Elijah volunteering? Guess he’s still convinced he’s got a shot with you, huh?”
I cut my eyes toward Elijah and notice him looking pleased with himself. “Hell has a better shot at hosting a snowball-throwing convention.”
Violet leans in, her words dropping to a whisper. “Maybe you should send him a fruit basket. Like a ‘thanks, but no thanks’ gesture.”
Some men don’t understand that when a woman says she’s not interested, she means it. They think persistence is romantic when it’s really just fucking exhausting.
“With my luck, he’d think it was an invitation to a picnic. You know me, Vi. I’m not looking for romance with him or anyone else. Sydney is about work and furthering my career. So the dude needs to chase someone else’s… fruit basket.”

Alex and Magnolia’s journey continues in Book 2 on May 27. Thank you for being part of this journey with me.
I couldn’t do this without readers like you.
I hope Steel Beauty steals your heart…
the way Alex stole Magnolia’s.
Let's be buddies
Published on April 29, 2025 04:48
June 6, 2024
Deepening Character Development in Your Novella
Crafting compelling characters is at the heart of any great story, but every word counts in a novella where space is limited. In this sixth installment of our series on how to write a novella, we’ll delve into the art of character development. We’ll explore how to create memorable, dynamic characters that drive your plot and resonate with readers long after they’ve turned the last page.
Why Character Development Matters
Character development is crucial in any story, but it’s essential in a novella, where you have less time to establish deep connections between your characters and readers. Well-developed characters are the ones who stick with readers—they’re relatable, believable, and emotionally engaging. They’re the heart and soul of your story and will keep readers invested in your novella from beginning to end.
Developing romantic characters: The heart of every love story. Critical Aspects of Character Development
1. Understand Your Characters’ Motivations
Every character in your novella should have clear motivations driving their actions. What does each character want? What are they willing to do to get it? Understanding these motivations will help you create characters that are complex and multidimensional.
For example, the protagonist’s desire for love and acceptance drives much of the narrative tension in Sweet Torment. Understanding this underlying motivation adds depth to her character and makes her actions throughout the novella more compelling.
2. Show Character Growth
Your characters should not remain static throughout your novella. They must change, grow, and evolve in response to their challenges. This growth can be internal (a change in mindset or beliefs) or external (achieving a goal or overcoming an obstacle). Showing this progression is critical to keeping readers engaged.
3. Use Dialogue to Reveal Character
Dialogue is a powerful tool for character development. How your characters speak—their word choices, tone, and rhythm—can reveal much about who they are. Dialogue can also reveal the dynamics between characters, revealing relationships and underlying tensions.
4. Create Conflict
Conflict is the engine that drives your story forward. In a novella, where you have less room to explore subplots, the central conflict should be tightly linked to your characters’ goals and motivations. This conflict should push your characters out of their comfort zones, forcing them to confront their fears, make difficult choices, and ultimately grow.
Crafting love stories: Bringing romantic characters to life. Practical Tips for Developing CharactersCreate Character Profiles: Before you start writing, create detailed profiles for your main characters. Include their backstory, personality traits, goals, and motivations. This will serve as a reference point throughout the writing process.Use Character Arcs: Plan your characters’ journeys from start to finish. Consider how they will change throughout the novella and what events will trigger these changes.Show, Don’t Tell: Instead of telling your readers what a character is like, show them through actions, dialogue, and interactions with other characters. This approach is more engaging and allows readers to draw their own conclusions.Link Characters to the Plot: Ensure your characters’ actions and decisions are integral to the plot. Every choice they make should have consequences that propel the story forward.
Bringing It All Together
Incorporating strong character development into your novella is essential for creating a story that resonates with readers. By understanding your characters’ motivations, showing their growth, using dialogue effectively, and creating meaningful conflict, you can craft characters that are not only believable but also unforgettable.
For more tips on writing novellas and creating compelling characters, visit Georgia Cates’ website, where you’ll find additional resources and insights.
Stay tuned for the next post in our series, where we’ll dive into the art of pacing and tension in a novella. Meanwhile, explore more about character-driven storytelling on Georgia Cates’ blog.
Why Character Development Matters
Character development is crucial in any story, but it’s essential in a novella, where you have less time to establish deep connections between your characters and readers. Well-developed characters are the ones who stick with readers—they’re relatable, believable, and emotionally engaging. They’re the heart and soul of your story and will keep readers invested in your novella from beginning to end.

1. Understand Your Characters’ Motivations
Every character in your novella should have clear motivations driving their actions. What does each character want? What are they willing to do to get it? Understanding these motivations will help you create characters that are complex and multidimensional.
For example, the protagonist’s desire for love and acceptance drives much of the narrative tension in Sweet Torment. Understanding this underlying motivation adds depth to her character and makes her actions throughout the novella more compelling.
2. Show Character Growth
Your characters should not remain static throughout your novella. They must change, grow, and evolve in response to their challenges. This growth can be internal (a change in mindset or beliefs) or external (achieving a goal or overcoming an obstacle). Showing this progression is critical to keeping readers engaged.
3. Use Dialogue to Reveal Character
Dialogue is a powerful tool for character development. How your characters speak—their word choices, tone, and rhythm—can reveal much about who they are. Dialogue can also reveal the dynamics between characters, revealing relationships and underlying tensions.
4. Create Conflict
Conflict is the engine that drives your story forward. In a novella, where you have less room to explore subplots, the central conflict should be tightly linked to your characters’ goals and motivations. This conflict should push your characters out of their comfort zones, forcing them to confront their fears, make difficult choices, and ultimately grow.

Bringing It All Together
Incorporating strong character development into your novella is essential for creating a story that resonates with readers. By understanding your characters’ motivations, showing their growth, using dialogue effectively, and creating meaningful conflict, you can craft characters that are not only believable but also unforgettable.
For more tips on writing novellas and creating compelling characters, visit Georgia Cates’ website, where you’ll find additional resources and insights.
Stay tuned for the next post in our series, where we’ll dive into the art of pacing and tension in a novella. Meanwhile, explore more about character-driven storytelling on Georgia Cates’ blog.
Published on June 06, 2024 22:00
May 2, 2024
Structuring Your Novella: Creating a Gripping Beginning, Middle, and End
Writing a novella can be an exhilarating journey, but it can quickly become manageable with a clear structure. One of the most critical aspects of novella writing is ensuring that your story is well-structured, with a compelling beginning, a strong middle, and a satisfying end. This structure is not just a guideline—it’s the backbone of your narrative, helping to maintain reader interest and delivering a story that resonates.
A writer captures ideas in a journal while enjoying a warm cup of coffee. The Importance of Structure
The structure of a novella is crucial because it dictates the flow of the story. A well-structured novella will guide the reader through the narrative seamlessly, while a poorly structured one may leave them confused or disinterested. Think of your novella as a journey; with a clear path, your reader might gain their way.
A traditional story structure consists of three parts: the beginning (introduction), the middle (development), and the end (resolution). These elements work together to create a cohesive and engaging narrative. Crafting a Compelling Beginning
The beginning of your novella is where you set the stage. This is your opportunity to hook your readers and convince them to continue reading. A firm beginning introduces the main characters, sets the tone, and presents the central conflict or question that will drive the story.
To create an engaging opening, consider starting in the middle of the action (in media res) or with a compelling question or statement immediately grabbing attention. Introduce your protagonist early, and give readers a reason to care about them—whether through their goals, struggles, or unique personality.
Example: In Sweet Torment , the novella opens with a solid emotional hook—unrequited love and the tension of forbidden romance. This immediately sets up the central conflict and pulls the reader into the story.
Developing a Solid Middle
The middle of your novella is where the story takes place. Here, you’ll develop your characters and deepen the plot, adding layers of complexity and tension. This section should explore the protagonist’s journey as they face challenges, make decisions, and move closer to their goal.
Maintaining momentum in the middle can be challenging, but it’s essential. Avoid letting the story stagnate by introducing new conflicts or complications. This is also a great place to develop subplots that complement the main narrative without overshadowing it.
Illustrating character growth and development through reflective writing.
The end of your novella is your chance to tie up loose ends and deliver a resolution that would help your readers. Whether your ending is happy, tragic, or somewhere in between, it should feel earned and appropriate for the story you’ve told.
In the final act, resolve the central conflict and show the outcome of the protagonist’s journey. This is also the moment to address any remaining subplots and ensure all storylines are concluded. A strong ending gives readers closure and a lasting impression of your novella.
Example: In Beauty from Pain , the conclusion wraps up the characters' intense emotional journey while leaving enough intrigue for the next installment in the series.
Examples and Analysis
To illustrate these points, let’s look at a few examples of well-structured novellas:
Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck: This novella is a masterclass in structure, with a clear beginning that introduces the main characters and their situation, a middle that escalates the central conflict, and an ending that provides a powerful resolution.Animal Farm by George Orwell: Another example of tight structure, Animal Farm effectively uses its middle section to build tension and develop its themes, leading to a thought-provoking conclusion.
Focused work on a laptop, with a to-do list nearby, for planning and organizing the novella’s structure. By analyzing these works, you can see how each part of the novella contributes to the overall narrative and why structure is essential.
Common Pitfalls to Avoid
When structuring your novella, beware of these common pitfalls:
Rushing the Beginning: Take the time to set up your story correctly. Readers may struggle to connect with your characters or understand the stakes if the beginning feels rushed.A Sagging Middle: Avoid letting the middle of your novella become repetitive or uneventful. Keep the tension high by introducing new challenges or developments.An Inconclusive Ending: Ensure that your ending provides a sense of closure. Even if you’re writing a series, each novella should have a self-contained resolution.
Conclusion
Structuring your novella is essential for crafting a story that keeps readers engaged from start to finish. Creating a solid beginning, maintaining momentum in the middle, and delivering a satisfying end ensures that your novella is compelling and memorable. Remember, the structure is the foundation upon which your narrative is built—so take the time to get it right.

The structure of a novella is crucial because it dictates the flow of the story. A well-structured novella will guide the reader through the narrative seamlessly, while a poorly structured one may leave them confused or disinterested. Think of your novella as a journey; with a clear path, your reader might gain their way.
A traditional story structure consists of three parts: the beginning (introduction), the middle (development), and the end (resolution). These elements work together to create a cohesive and engaging narrative. Crafting a Compelling Beginning
The beginning of your novella is where you set the stage. This is your opportunity to hook your readers and convince them to continue reading. A firm beginning introduces the main characters, sets the tone, and presents the central conflict or question that will drive the story.
To create an engaging opening, consider starting in the middle of the action (in media res) or with a compelling question or statement immediately grabbing attention. Introduce your protagonist early, and give readers a reason to care about them—whether through their goals, struggles, or unique personality.
Example: In Sweet Torment , the novella opens with a solid emotional hook—unrequited love and the tension of forbidden romance. This immediately sets up the central conflict and pulls the reader into the story.
Developing a Solid Middle
The middle of your novella is where the story takes place. Here, you’ll develop your characters and deepen the plot, adding layers of complexity and tension. This section should explore the protagonist’s journey as they face challenges, make decisions, and move closer to their goal.
Maintaining momentum in the middle can be challenging, but it’s essential. Avoid letting the story stagnate by introducing new conflicts or complications. This is also a great place to develop subplots that complement the main narrative without overshadowing it.

Delivering a Satisfying End
Tip: Use character development to keep the middle of your novella engaging. As your protagonist encounters obstacles, let their reactions and growth drive the story forward. This not only maintains reader interest but also adds depth to your characters.
The end of your novella is your chance to tie up loose ends and deliver a resolution that would help your readers. Whether your ending is happy, tragic, or somewhere in between, it should feel earned and appropriate for the story you’ve told.
In the final act, resolve the central conflict and show the outcome of the protagonist’s journey. This is also the moment to address any remaining subplots and ensure all storylines are concluded. A strong ending gives readers closure and a lasting impression of your novella.
Example: In Beauty from Pain , the conclusion wraps up the characters' intense emotional journey while leaving enough intrigue for the next installment in the series.
Examples and Analysis
To illustrate these points, let’s look at a few examples of well-structured novellas:
Of Mice and Men by John Steinbeck: This novella is a masterclass in structure, with a clear beginning that introduces the main characters and their situation, a middle that escalates the central conflict, and an ending that provides a powerful resolution.Animal Farm by George Orwell: Another example of tight structure, Animal Farm effectively uses its middle section to build tension and develop its themes, leading to a thought-provoking conclusion.

Common Pitfalls to Avoid
When structuring your novella, beware of these common pitfalls:
Rushing the Beginning: Take the time to set up your story correctly. Readers may struggle to connect with your characters or understand the stakes if the beginning feels rushed.A Sagging Middle: Avoid letting the middle of your novella become repetitive or uneventful. Keep the tension high by introducing new challenges or developments.An Inconclusive Ending: Ensure that your ending provides a sense of closure. Even if you’re writing a series, each novella should have a self-contained resolution.
Conclusion
Structuring your novella is essential for crafting a story that keeps readers engaged from start to finish. Creating a solid beginning, maintaining momentum in the middle, and delivering a satisfying end ensures that your novella is compelling and memorable. Remember, the structure is the foundation upon which your narrative is built—so take the time to get it right.
Published on May 02, 2024 22:00
April 4, 2024
Crafting a Strong Hook in Your Novella
Introduction:
The hook of your novella is the bait that lures readers in and keeps them turning pages. A robust and compelling hook is essential to grab the reader’s attention from the first sentence and maintain it throughout the story. A well-crafted hook will set the tone for your novella, whether you aim to pull at the reader’s heartstrings, tickle their curiosity, or thrill them.
Reflecting on story elements while jotting down notes in a cafe. Understanding What a Hook Is:
A hook is not just a catchy first sentence; it’s the premise, the question, or the situation that grabs the reader’s interest. It should be intriguing enough to make readers ask, “What happens next?” and should resonate with the themes of your novella. The hook should set up the story’s stakes, introduce a compelling character or situation, and hint at future conflicts. Types of Hooks:The Intriguing Statement: Start with an unusual, surprising, or shocking statement that demands an explanation.
Example: “It was the last time she would ever see the sunrise.”The Unanswered Question: Could you propose a question the reader wants answered?
Example: “Who could have known that a single decision would lead to such chaos?”The Conflict Introduction: Jump straight into the middle of a conflict, making readers want to see how it unfolds.
Example: “He didn’t know if he would survive the night, but he had to try.”The Character Revelation: Introduce a unique or relatable character compellingly.
Example: “Jane never believed in fate until the day it turned her world upside down.”
Crafting Your Hook:Keep it Concise: Your hook should be sharp and concise. Avoid lengthy explanations or backstories at the beginning.Make it Relevant: Ensure your hook directly relates to your novella's central theme or conflict.Use Active Voice: An active voice creates a sense of urgency and immediacy, drawing readers in more effectively.Engage the Senses: Use descriptive language that appeals to the senses to create a vivid picture in the reader’s mind.
Organizing creative ideas with Post-it notes in a journal. Examples of Effective Hooks in Popular Novellas:The Great Gatsby by F. Scott Fitzgerald: “In my younger and more vulnerable years, my father gave me some advice that I’ve been turning over in my mind ever since.”Animal Farm by George Orwell: “All animals are equal, but some animals are more equal than others.”
Conclusion:
A strong hook is the first step in capturing your reader’s imagination and setting the stage for the rest of your novella. Ensure your story starts correctly by making your hook intriguing, relevant, and concise. Don’t underestimate the power of a well-crafted hook—it could be the difference between a reader finishing your novella and putting it down after the first page.
This post can help readers understand how to start their novellas effectively, making it a valuable resource for new and experienced authors. Feel free to let me know if you need any more adjustments!
The hook of your novella is the bait that lures readers in and keeps them turning pages. A robust and compelling hook is essential to grab the reader’s attention from the first sentence and maintain it throughout the story. A well-crafted hook will set the tone for your novella, whether you aim to pull at the reader’s heartstrings, tickle their curiosity, or thrill them.

A hook is not just a catchy first sentence; it’s the premise, the question, or the situation that grabs the reader’s interest. It should be intriguing enough to make readers ask, “What happens next?” and should resonate with the themes of your novella. The hook should set up the story’s stakes, introduce a compelling character or situation, and hint at future conflicts. Types of Hooks:The Intriguing Statement: Start with an unusual, surprising, or shocking statement that demands an explanation.
Example: “It was the last time she would ever see the sunrise.”The Unanswered Question: Could you propose a question the reader wants answered?
Example: “Who could have known that a single decision would lead to such chaos?”The Conflict Introduction: Jump straight into the middle of a conflict, making readers want to see how it unfolds.
Example: “He didn’t know if he would survive the night, but he had to try.”The Character Revelation: Introduce a unique or relatable character compellingly.
Example: “Jane never believed in fate until the day it turned her world upside down.”
Crafting Your Hook:Keep it Concise: Your hook should be sharp and concise. Avoid lengthy explanations or backstories at the beginning.Make it Relevant: Ensure your hook directly relates to your novella's central theme or conflict.Use Active Voice: An active voice creates a sense of urgency and immediacy, drawing readers in more effectively.Engage the Senses: Use descriptive language that appeals to the senses to create a vivid picture in the reader’s mind.

Conclusion:
A strong hook is the first step in capturing your reader’s imagination and setting the stage for the rest of your novella. Ensure your story starts correctly by making your hook intriguing, relevant, and concise. Don’t underestimate the power of a well-crafted hook—it could be the difference between a reader finishing your novella and putting it down after the first page.
This post can help readers understand how to start their novellas effectively, making it a valuable resource for new and experienced authors. Feel free to let me know if you need any more adjustments!
Published on April 04, 2024 22:00
February 29, 2024
Refining Your Novella: Creating a Strong Plot Structure
Introduction
Welcome back to our ongoing series on writing a novella with a hook. In our first two posts, we discussed brainstorming ideas and crafting an attention-grabbing opening. Now, it’s time to dive into the heart of your story: the plot. A well-structured plot is the backbone of your novella, guiding your readers through a journey that keeps them engaged from start to finish.
An author jotting down ideas and notes during an engaging virtual writing workshop. Understanding Plot Structure
The plot structure of your novella needs to be clear and purposeful. Typically, a novella follows a three-act structure, similar to full-length novels. Each act has its role in building the story’s tension and ultimately delivering a satisfying resolution. Act One: The SetupI'd like you to introduce your main characters, setting, and the initial situation.Establish the stakes and present the central conflict to drive the story forward. Act Two: The ConfrontationHere, your protagonist faces challenges and obstacles that complicate their goal.This act should build tension, deepen character development, and keep the reader invested in the outcome. Act Three: The ResolutionThe final act should bring the story’s conflict to its climax and resolution.Ensure the ending is satisfying and consistent with the story’s tone and themes.
An author in deep thought, finding inspiration while writing notes in a journal. Key Elements to Consider
When refining your novella’s plot structure, consider the following:
Pacing: Ensure that your plot moves at a pace that maintains interest but doesn’t rush the story.Character Arcs: Your characters should grow or change throughout the story, reflecting the plot’s progression.Subplots: Incorporate subplots sparingly to add depth without detracting from the main narrative.
Final Thoughts
Plot structure is crucial in maintaining readers’ interest and delivering a resonant story. Take the time to outline your plot carefully, ensuring each act serves its purpose in building toward a compelling conclusion.
Next Up:
In our next post, we’ll explore the art of creating memorable characters who drive your plot and connect with readers on a deeper level.
Welcome back to our ongoing series on writing a novella with a hook. In our first two posts, we discussed brainstorming ideas and crafting an attention-grabbing opening. Now, it’s time to dive into the heart of your story: the plot. A well-structured plot is the backbone of your novella, guiding your readers through a journey that keeps them engaged from start to finish.

The plot structure of your novella needs to be clear and purposeful. Typically, a novella follows a three-act structure, similar to full-length novels. Each act has its role in building the story’s tension and ultimately delivering a satisfying resolution. Act One: The SetupI'd like you to introduce your main characters, setting, and the initial situation.Establish the stakes and present the central conflict to drive the story forward. Act Two: The ConfrontationHere, your protagonist faces challenges and obstacles that complicate their goal.This act should build tension, deepen character development, and keep the reader invested in the outcome. Act Three: The ResolutionThe final act should bring the story’s conflict to its climax and resolution.Ensure the ending is satisfying and consistent with the story’s tone and themes.

When refining your novella’s plot structure, consider the following:
Pacing: Ensure that your plot moves at a pace that maintains interest but doesn’t rush the story.Character Arcs: Your characters should grow or change throughout the story, reflecting the plot’s progression.Subplots: Incorporate subplots sparingly to add depth without detracting from the main narrative.
Final Thoughts
Plot structure is crucial in maintaining readers’ interest and delivering a resonant story. Take the time to outline your plot carefully, ensuring each act serves its purpose in building toward a compelling conclusion.
Next Up:
In our next post, we’ll explore the art of creating memorable characters who drive your plot and connect with readers on a deeper level.
Published on February 29, 2024 22:00
February 1, 2024
Finding Your Hook—The Heart of Your Novella
Welcome back to our 12-part series on how to write a novella with a hook that captures readers from the very first page. In our first post, we introduced the concept of a novella and discussed why writing one can be an excellent strategy for authors. Now, it’s time to delve into the heart of your novella—the hook.
Crafting the perfect hook: Write the opening lines of your novella to captivate readers. What is a Hook?
A hook is the element of your story that grabs the reader’s attention and keeps them turning the pages. It’s what makes your novella unique, compelling, and memorable. Whether it’s an intriguing plot twist, a captivating character, or a fascinating setting, the hook will make readers choose your novella over countless others. Why the Hook Matters
The hook is even more crucial in a novella where word count is limited. You don’t have the luxury of slowly building up to the central conflict. Instead, you need to draw readers in quickly and hold their attention throughout. A strong hook sets the tone for your novella and gives readers a reason to invest their time and emotions in your story.
Types of Hooks
Several types of hooks can make your novella stand out:
Situational Hook: This hook places characters in unusual or challenging situations that immediately spark curiosity. For example, a character waking up without remembering who they are and finding themselves in a strange place is a classic situational hook.Character Hook: A fascinating, complex character can serve as a hook. Readers are drawn to characters with unique traits, backgrounds, or goals, making them eager to learn more about their journey.Emotional Hook: Stories that tap into universal emotions like love, fear, or longing can create an instant connection with readers. An emotional hook might involve a character facing a profound personal loss or pursuing an impossible love.Mystery or Suspense Hook: Introducing a mystery or a suspenseful situation can keep readers guessing and wanting more. This could involve a mysterious letter, a hidden secret, or an unsolved crime.
Brainstorming ideas: Mapping out critical elements for a compelling novella. How to Develop Your Hook
Developing a solid hook begins with understanding what excites you about your story. Ask yourself:
What is the most intriguing aspect of my story?What makes my characters or setting unique?What emotions or themes am I exploring?
Once you’ve identified your hook, ensure it’s woven throughout your novella. The hook should be apparent in your opening scenes and should drive the plot forward, keeping readers engaged from start to finish.
Examples of Effective Hooks
Consider some of your favorite novellas or short stories. What drew you in? Was it a gripping first sentence, a mysterious event, or a character you immediately connected with? Analyze these examples to see how they’ve used hooks effectively, and think about how you can apply similar techniques in your own writing.
Next Steps
Now that you understand the importance of a hook and how to develop one, it’s time to start brainstorming. In our next post, we’ll explore how to structure your novella around your hook, ensuring that your story flows smoothly and keeps readers engaged.

A hook is the element of your story that grabs the reader’s attention and keeps them turning the pages. It’s what makes your novella unique, compelling, and memorable. Whether it’s an intriguing plot twist, a captivating character, or a fascinating setting, the hook will make readers choose your novella over countless others. Why the Hook Matters
The hook is even more crucial in a novella where word count is limited. You don’t have the luxury of slowly building up to the central conflict. Instead, you need to draw readers in quickly and hold their attention throughout. A strong hook sets the tone for your novella and gives readers a reason to invest their time and emotions in your story.
Types of Hooks
Several types of hooks can make your novella stand out:
Situational Hook: This hook places characters in unusual or challenging situations that immediately spark curiosity. For example, a character waking up without remembering who they are and finding themselves in a strange place is a classic situational hook.Character Hook: A fascinating, complex character can serve as a hook. Readers are drawn to characters with unique traits, backgrounds, or goals, making them eager to learn more about their journey.Emotional Hook: Stories that tap into universal emotions like love, fear, or longing can create an instant connection with readers. An emotional hook might involve a character facing a profound personal loss or pursuing an impossible love.Mystery or Suspense Hook: Introducing a mystery or a suspenseful situation can keep readers guessing and wanting more. This could involve a mysterious letter, a hidden secret, or an unsolved crime.

Developing a solid hook begins with understanding what excites you about your story. Ask yourself:
What is the most intriguing aspect of my story?What makes my characters or setting unique?What emotions or themes am I exploring?
Once you’ve identified your hook, ensure it’s woven throughout your novella. The hook should be apparent in your opening scenes and should drive the plot forward, keeping readers engaged from start to finish.
Examples of Effective Hooks
Consider some of your favorite novellas or short stories. What drew you in? Was it a gripping first sentence, a mysterious event, or a character you immediately connected with? Analyze these examples to see how they’ve used hooks effectively, and think about how you can apply similar techniques in your own writing.
Next Steps
Now that you understand the importance of a hook and how to develop one, it’s time to start brainstorming. In our next post, we’ll explore how to structure your novella around your hook, ensuring that your story flows smoothly and keeps readers engaged.
Published on February 01, 2024 22:00